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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 23: (last part)

When unal and aysun left, riza blessed feriha by keeping his hand on her hed "god bless you" and he went to the back to the bedroom. Mehmet came to her and said "congratulations!" feriha wanted to hug Mehmet but they couldn't get themselves to do that.

Omer ran upto her and said "sister you will get married to him" feriha said "yes"

"I like him sister" feriha gave a wide smile on his answer.

Feriha turned to her mother who was standing behind her. Zehra had a happy look on her face, she patted feriha's cheek looking lovingly in her eyes. She pulled her into hug, wrapping her hand around her and caressing her hair, she closed her eyes, a drop of tear rolled down. She said "you will live what you were born for. Your story will complete. I am happy my child, I am happy. The story I wrote for you will come true"

Emir went up with his parents to his apartment. On entering, they sat on the sofa and emir on the chair.

"Thanks for going there" said emir

Unal bent his head acknowledging it. "you were sure of all this so we thought to go along with you" Emir heard him quietly.

Aysun said "should I make coffee?"

Unal said "yes"

Emir nodded too.

Aysun went in the kitchen for making coffee, unal and emir were alone.

Unal said "I know our relationship has been quite strained, but thank you for helping me and aysun patch up"

Emir nodded "I think you were honest that day when you came. I felt you truly wanted to be with mom so"

"can we bury our differences and try to be father and son again. I know I have not been a good father, but still can we try"

Emir was listening to him with his head down and then he said "let's try"

Unal got up and walked upto him, emir got up too. Unal extended his hand for a handshake to which emir relented and then they hugged. Aysun saw father and son hugging and got really happy. Tears were rolling down her eyes. She kept the coffee cups on the dining table and hugged emir.

While drinking coffee aysun said "why don't you and feriha come for a family dinner"

"when do you want mom?"

"tomorrow"

"ok, we will be there."

"can will be there too"

After some time aysun and unal left for their home.

Later in the day Emir called feriha " yes emir"

"don't you want to go shopping"

Feriha was smiling "come soon I am waiting"

Zehra was standing close to feriha, feriha covered the mouthpiece of the phone and said softly "he is calling me for shopping" zehra said almost whispering "go ahead". She was happy seeing feriha living what she dreamt. She could see the sparkle in her daughter's eyes that she missed.

"I am coming in 15 mins"

"ok, I am waiting outside"

"see you" and she cut her phone.

Feriha joined emir in the car park. Emir was waiting outside his car. They hugged each other tightly, closing their eyes, feeling each other's happiness.

Then emir said "happy"

Feriha answered "very happy"

"come get in"

They sat in the car went to the market.

"let's buy your wedding dress first" then he said "buy a coloured one"

Feriha said "emir, I am fine with the white coloured dress"

"are you sure" she nodded yes

"okay"

"those wounds have healed" she turned and looked at him " you have healed them all" emir smiled while glancing at her.

They bought wedding dress for each other and did a lot of shopping. Hand in hand they spent their day enjoying and laughing blissfully.

Emir called koray and hande and informed them of the wedding date.

Mehmet went to meet seher the next day. They met in a coffee shop. Mehmet asked "what do you want to say seher"

"Mehmet, listen to me once, try to understand, I was tricked by akif into running with him. He left me stranded"

"seher, how can he trick you, why you didn't tell me anything. If you think I don't know what were you doing then let me tell you I am not that old Mehmet"

"you can accept your sister back..." Mehmet cut her

"stop it seher, you were never regretful, don't drag my family. Don't compare yourself with feriha"

"why your sister can do anything"

"my sister did not cheat, but you cheated me" he said angrily "don't ever try to get any close to my family. Tomorrow is feriha's marriage if you create any scene there, trust me I will forget that you were my wife once"

Seher was left speechless and Mehmet left from there.

In the night feriha and emir went for dinner at aysun and unal for dinner.

Can was happy to see feriha, he hugged her and said "feriha sister, if brother ever troubles you don't forget I am there"

Feriha said "sure"

Aysun and unal hugged emir. On seeing feriha aysun first held a straight face and broke into a faint smile "welcome feriha" feriha kissed her hand and unal's . unal also welcomed her.

They had a happy family dinner

Aysun asked "so all the arrangements are done"

Emir answered "yes"

Then aysun said holding unal's hand "we are planning are marriage too. Soon we will let you know the date"

Emir and feriha both congratulated them. Can said "I am happy too"

He hugged aysun and said congratulation."

In the night:

When everyone had slept, feriha slipped out of her room in the living room.

Mehmet was still awake. She went to him.

"Mehmet" he got up and sat

"Mehmet, we have had a very strained relation, I know it was tough for you too. I have seen pain in your eyes. Its not been easy for me as well. Let bygone be bygone"

Mehmet got up too. He had become quite emotional

He hugged her, she held on to him too. Zehra had got up hearing some voice. When she came out she saw Mehmet and feriha hugging each other. Tears rolled down her eyes. She thanked god and went and hugged both her son and daughter. Omer got up too and hugged zehra from behind.

Wedding day...

Emir and feriha got married in the park and lived happily ever after.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Smiriti you have vision to give wings to your thoughts . I always wanted that Levant should have given deserved exit and you have done that ,not once you took liberties with the original story ., keeping in mind the characteristics of every character . It always appears as if watching AFK. Mine first FF as i am not in to FF. Thank you .
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Smiriti continue with your work . You have vision to give wings to your writing skills.
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i have written this OS on episode 2 of feriha when emir and feriha meet each other at the hospital in the night. As destiny had it they were slated to be together.

This scene had a lot of depth i have tried my level best to capture at the most i can. But trust me a lot of emotions runs deeper and words fall short. Hope i have caught the emotions well:

He was gloomy. They were tough days for him. His step brother was in the hospital. His mother had left his step brother under his care before going to USA with her husband. He had an accident. He was managing the situation as best as he could. Koray, his best friend was there by his side. Still, he was alone. When doctor said that they will discharge his brother tomorrow he asked koray to go. He was so distraught that he had switched off his phone. When he switched it on, there was a voice message from his mother. She was angry with him for his phone being switched off. She was worried that he had let him down in front of her husband. She didn't once ask about how was he managing all this all alone. Like always it was about her husband not him. At times he felt Can was lucky; he could get that care and love from his mother which he dreamt off. He was left alone. Today after hearing her message he felt same, hope she cared for him too. He longed for that bond from her.
After putting Can to sleep he went out, found an empty bench outside the hospital and sat there. He was relieved that his brother will be discharged tomorrow but sad by his mother's attitude. He wished she cared about him. And then his thoughts drifted to feriha, like it had done often lately. He was intrigued by that girl. She wasn't like the girls he had met in his life. Their first meeting was an accident and he so wanted to redress it but she wouldn't let him do that. He tried so many times to give her the phone that he broke but she blankly refused. All she asked him was to not to drive again.
She did not try to befriend him instead shied away from him. Every time he saw her he was pulled towards her. He felt something that he found difficult to describe. Lost in his thoughts he heard someone sobbing. The tissue paper of that person had fallen, so he took out the tissue he had to give, and he turned to the see the person, it was her. He said "feriha"
Feriha, had been having tough days too. She wanted to hide, how she got the phone that Emir had slipped into her bag, without her knowledge. So she used cansu as a cover, but her parents got to know of that. His father was wild and he slapped the her and later banished her from attending school. Her best friend had attempted suicide; she had saved her in the nick of time.
She was adolescent with broken dreams and almost losing her best friend. She went out to take air. She walked unawares. Once outside she couldn't hold her tears back. She cried loudly to unburden her misery. Then she slowly walked towards the bench and sat unknowing there was someone sitting already. Her tissue paper fell and the man next to her tried to give her one and when she saw his face it was "Emir".
Feriha asked his reason to be in the hospital, he explained her about Can. She was very sad to hear that. She asked him about how was he? Was he recovering well? She asked him about his parents, they must be worried, to which Emir answered she sounded bad. He did not have an answer for that question. Was his mother really sad over what happened?
Emir asked her about her reason to be there she told him about her friend.
He saw her face and asked about the bruise below her eyes, to which she lied that she was clumsy. How could she tell him the story behind this bruise?
She was concerned whether he was alone or someone was there with him. Emir told her about koray and mentioned he is a good friend, like her. She was surprised like her'? Nobody had seen her care; everyone took her love and care for granted. She was hearing this as a virtue for the first time.
She told him that mom are always worried, they do the best that they can. She had no clue what relation Emir had with his mom. Emir said I despise you because you have a good family, something feriha always took for granted.
Feriha felt a bit chilly, she was shivering. Seeing her shivering Emir offered his coat. At first feriha denied but Emir insisted and wrapped his coat around her. She felt him for the first time. For the first time someone had shown concern for her. She felt a bit awkward. Emir could sense that. The wind had blown a lock of her hair on her face. He couldn't stop himself from pushing it away. A moment, he couldn't resist. She was irresistible. He bent towards her slowly, she bent too. But then feriha bent her face down. That moment Emir pulled himself back. He was a bit surprised too. They kept glancing at each other, a bit embarrassed, a bit puzzled, a bit intrigued. He caught her smiling softly and he smiled softly too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Smiriti i rightly said you can read between the lines . When Emir was in the hospital taking care of Caan and listens the message from his mother , one can almost touch the vacuum he has buried somewhere in his heart . Feriha was attracted to him but she was not chasing him , knew he was from another world ,out of her reach . she shied away from him every time whenever he asked for her reasons .
She was some one totally different girl he had met until the car crash . He was really for a shock when she brush him away with don't drive the car. Emir's first experience in his life . He was impressed how she was there for a friend and crying for her and then she talked about her family , she didn't know what kind of family he came from . For her family is same for every one .
Its always said that books are better than the any show based on that book . Book describes every detail where as drama / show ,depends on the acting .

Keep on writing Smiriti . So much is there to write between the lines . Thanks to Zindagi , mine is third/ fourth show where i love to discuss the characters as well the situations .




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neerjaa

Smiriti continue with your work . You have vision to give wings to your writing skills.

Thanks Neerja ...for liking it..there are a lot of scenes with a lot of depth. Planning to write more on hem hope you like them as well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Benimlemisin - Are you with me?


It's one shot when feriha asked this question to Emir

Feriha stood in the park leaning against the frame of the swing and watching the swing swinging like the pendulum of grandfather clock. She was recounting the life that she had lived till now. She stood there pondering over the past and present, the leaves of her life lay strewn around the park and then she came face to face with present, 'Emir'. Emir was also walking towards the park. They started to walk slowly towards each other. She said looking around the park to him "I missed this park" He too looked around and said "It's very quiet at these times"

They looked at each other. She asked him "have you come here recently?" he answered "I came here many times". After carefully choosing her words, she asked him "your engagement ring is not there"

Looking at his empty finger he said "rings are taken off and promises not kept" indirectly suggesting, she had done the same, she had taken off the ring that she promised she'll never take off. She had promised to stay and love him till the end of her life. She looked down and answered "when a person makes a promise they either trust the person in front of them or they trust themselves more"

He enquired looking at her sharply "what was your answer?" feriha looked at him surprised, he repeated "what was your answer to captain?" she understood it then "you saw us then?"

"Yes I saw you"

"You didn't wait for to hear my answer"

"What game are you trying to play again?"

She realized he yet did not know the entire purport of her relationship with levent, she answered "I was very unjust towards levent for 3 yrs. he was next to me, yet I was always lonely. And look we are in the place where everything began"

"Yes we are at the park"

"This park has witnessed everything. My growing up, my running, my crying and my hiding. As it lived together with us"

"We couldn't live together, but the park lived with us" he said looking around the park, deliberately avoiding her eyes

Tears almost brimming in her eyes "we could not live"

"Loving and loving we couldn't live together"

"Just loving wasn't enough" she said trying to conceal tears.

He looked at her accusingly "one misunderstanding was enough to end us" She couldn't justify his accusations.

"Farewell" Emir said with damp eyes and heavy heart.

He turned his back to her when she called him and said "I said no"

He stopped in his tracks to listen her and she continued "and now you tell me something we are at the same place where everything began Emir" When she called him again, reality of her proposal sank in "Are you with me?" he turned back to face her with enquiring eyes. She looked back at him with definitive eyes, but hesitation persisting 'will you accept me back after all that happened. Can you let go of the past and start afresh with me'

He softly nodded back at her. He couldn't wait more to be with her and ran to hug her. The time that he spent away from her has been the worst days of his life. He wanted to live with her again, feel her again, and live life again. He couldn't believe he was hugging her back again and kept reassuring himself she was back with him. He kissed her hair. He smelled her scent, that he missed everyday of these 3 years.
Feriha felt like she was back to where she belonged. His chest on which her head rested in good and bad times was back again. She closed her eyes and squeezed his shoulder. It was he who made her complete. It was he who was answer to all of her loneliness. She felt peace. She was finally holding her life back.
Their tears streamed down relentlessly.
After all these years of longing and yearning they were finally together.
Edited by smriti.verma - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well used the word " Are you with me ?" First Emir asked her when he was desperate and was his last meeting with Feriha and same Feriha asked the same to Emir when it was last meeting with Emir . Both were not disappointed as they were never apart .One of the beautiful, poignant scene . Both were dieing for each other to meet for long three years . Emir's expressions and Feriha longing to hear the words from him . Thank you smiriti .
Smiriti love your vision ,your writing skills .Keep going on .
Edited by Neerjaa - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: smriti.verma

Benimlemisin - Are you with me?


It's one shot when feriha asked this question to Emir

Feriha stood in the park leaning against the frame of the swing and watching the swing swinging like the pendulum of grandfather clock. She was recounting the life that she had lived till now. She stood there pondering over the past and present, the leaves of her life lay strewn around the park and then she came face to face with present, 'Emir'. Emir was also walking towards the park. They started to walk slowly towards each other. She said looking around the park to him "I missed this park" He too looked around and said "It's very quiet at these times"

They looked at each other. She asked him "have you come here recently?" he answered "I came here many times". After carefully choosing her words, she asked him "your engagement ring is not there"

Looking at his empty finger he said "rings are taken off and promises not kept" indirectly suggesting, she had done the same, she had taken off the ring that she promised she'll never take off. She had promised to stay and love him till the end of her life. She looked down and answered "when a person makes a promise they either trust the person in front of them or they trust themselves more"

He enquired looking at her sharply "what was your answer?" feriha looked at him surprised, he repeated "what was your answer to captain?" she understood it then "you saw us then?"

"Yes I saw you"

"You didn't wait for to hear my answer"

"What game are you trying to play again?"

She realized he yet did not know the entire purport of her relationship with levent, she answered "I was very unjust towards levent for 3 yrs. he was next to me, yet I was always lonely. And look we are in the place where everything began"

"Yes we are at the park"

"This park has witnessed everything. My growing up, my running, my crying and my hiding. As it lived together with us"

"We couldn't live together, but the park lived with us" he said looking around the park, deliberately avoiding her eyes

Tears almost brimming in her eyes "we could not live"

"Loving and loving we couldn't live together"

"Just loving wasn't enough" she said trying to conceal tears.

He looked at her accusingly "one misunderstanding was enough to end us" She couldn't justify his accusations.

"Farewell" Emir said with damp eyes and heavy heart.

He turned his back to her when she called him and said "I said no"

He stopped in his tracks to listen her and she continued "and now you tell me something we are at the same place where everything began Emir" When she called him again, reality of her proposal sank in "Are you with me?" he turned back to face her with enquiring eyes. She looked back at him with definitive eyes, but hesitation persisting 'will you accept me back after all that happened. Can you let go of the past and start afresh with me'

He softly nodded back at her. He couldn't wait more to be with her and ran to hug her. The time that he spent away from her has been the worst days of his life. He wanted to live with her again, feel her again, and live life again. He couldn't believe he was hugging her back again and kept reassuring himself she was back with him. He kissed her hair. He smelled her scent, that he missed everyday of these 3 years.
Feriha felt like she was back to where she belonged. His chest on which her head rested in good and bad times was back again. She closed her eyes and squeezed his shoulder. It was he who made her complete. It was he who was answer to all of her loneliness. She felt peace. She was finally holding her life back.
Their tears streamed down relentlessly.
After all these years of longing and yearning they were finally together.



Aww... beautiful...brought tears to my eyes again... 👏


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neerjaa

Very well used the word " Are you with me ?" First Emir asked her when he was desperate and was his last meeting with Feriha and same Feriha asked the same to Emir when it was last meeting with Emir . Both were not disappointed as they were never apart .One of the beautiful, poignant scene . Both were dieing for each other to meet for long three years . Emir's expressions and Feriha longing to hear the words from him . Thank you smiriti .

Smiriti love your vision ,your writing skills .Keep going on .


Thank you so much Neerja for liking and appreciating.

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