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Chapter 4

Gujranwala, Pakistan
Shabbo walked through the muddy roads of Gujranwala to the fields. Just then, a man with a sturdy looks stopped her. He's Bahadur Mehmood, the acclaimed wrestler of the area. He has won many wrestling competitions held in the neighboring villages but what he's yearning to win is our Shabbo's heart who in turn doesn't give a damn about him.

"Oye Shabbo! Aap athe?" he asked as he was not aware of her arrival.

Shabbo closed her eyes in irritation, "Allah! Abb yeh mera dimag khayega!" she cursed under her breath. She turned around, pasting a smile on her face.

"Haan.. kyu? Yahan aane ke liye aapki ijaazat ki zaroorat hai?" she asked.
"O jee nahi.. maine toh aiwanyi puchh liya!" he said with a goofy smile. Shabbo too forced a smile.

"Waise jee, bahout khushi hui jee aapko dekhkar... main kaafi dino soch raha tha ki aap aayi nahi!" Anwar replied.

"Abb toh aa gayi !" Shabbo replied.

To which Bahadur smiled foolishly again and Shabbo too forced a smile. Seeing her smiling with him, Bahadur blushed with a shy smile. Shabbo gave him a weird look, "Ho gaya?!"

"Jee?" Bahadur said, not understanding what she meant.

"Agar aapka sharmana ho gaya ho toh main chalu.. phokat time nahi hai mere paas!" she replied.

"O jee.. kithe jana hai? Main apni fatfatiya par chhod deta hu!" he asked.

"Jee?" Shabbo asked confused.

"Haan jee! Fatfatiya.. ojee bilkul navi hai.. phurrr bhagti hai!" Bahadur said while patting the green motorcycle parked besides.

"Yeh.. motorcycle hai !" Shabbo said, "Khair.. chhaddo! Main chali..Khuda hafiz!" she added.

"Khuda hafiz...o jee milte rehna!" he shouted from behind.

"Allah.. abb dobara isse mulakat naa ho!" she prayed as she moved away as fast as she could.

*******
London,
Firdous paced around the room untiring with worry evident on his face. He glanced at the clock. Isra put the receiver down and rubbed her temples. Firdous looked at her and she moved her head in negative. He looked at the door helplessly.

"Allah jaane kahan chali gayi hai dono? Bas sahi salamat ghar aa jaye, main uske baad kuch aur nahi mangungi! " she prayed to almighty.

"Aapne jaane he nahi dena tha bachhiyon ko! Aur independent banao unhe.. pata nahi kahan hongi meri bachhiyan! Zamaana kitna khraab hai!"Isra complained unstop.

"Main kehti hu kya fyada hai inn sab ka? Batayein! Apni bachho ki safety ko dau par laga kar, kaisi padhayi, kaisi independence?"she ranted.

"Toh aur kya karta? Batao! Ladkiyon ko ghar mein band karke toh nahi baitha sakta na!"Firdous shouted when his patience gave up!

"Main janta hoon ki aaj ka zamaana kaisa hai aur kaisa nahi.. lekin iss wajah se main unhe qaid karke nahi rakh sakta..!" he added.

"Tum pareshaan ho toh main bhi sukoon mein nahi hu.. fikr mujhe bhi hai.. aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua!"

"Toh aap kuch karein!" Isra requested nearly in tears.

"Main kya Karun, meri khud samajh nahi aa raha!" he replied with a sigh. "Abb toh allahhe humari betiyon ki hifazat karega!"
Meanwhile in Pakistan,
Both Asad and Aman were enjoying the summer sun while sitting on the cot waiting for their mother to bring their lunch.
"Allah.. Kahan reh gayi ammi? Main toh mara jaa raha hu bhuk ke maare!" Aman complained.

"Sabr karein bhaijaan.. aati hongi..!" Asad said.

"Kitna sabr..? Main toh soo jaunga intezaar karte karte!"Aman replied while yawning.

"Leh.. phir sona.. bhaijaan aapko itni neend kaise aati hai?!" Asad asked surprised by his brother's addiction to sleep.

"Kyu sona gunaah hai?" Aman asked.

"Nahi.. lekin..! Kair chhodein aap bura maan jayenge!" Asad replied.

"Tumhari yeh he aadat mujhe bahout fizool lagti hai.. baat ki chingari chhod kar chup ho jate ho! Nahi batana naa batao..!" Aman said irritated.

There was silence for a while when Aman heard someone calling out his name from behind. It didn't take him long to realize who it was, Shabbo!

"Marr gaya.. yeh kahan se tapak padi !" Aman said worried.

"Arre haan.. aaj aana tha inhone.. aapko nahi pata?" Asad asked.

"Pata hota toh kabka bhag leta!" Aman replied to which Asad chuckles.

"Hass kya raha hai? Madat kar meri.. aa gayi toh dimag chaat degi!" Aman said, scared of her approaching figure.

"Aap darr rahe hai Bhai?!" Asad asks enjoying his condition.

"Iske jaisa bhoot tere gale padega tab puchhunga!" Aman replies irritated.

"Allah bachaye!" Asad says touching his ears.

"Main toh bhaag raha hu..!" Aman said and turns around to run away but he was late. Shabbo reached where they were standing and started singing, "Saat samundar paar main tere pechhe pechhe aa gayi!"

Asad chuckles hiding his face while Aman turns around to face her with a stupid smile.
"Haaye aise toh na dekho... kuch kuch hota hai !" Shabbo says in dramatic way !

"Mera bas chale toh main teri shakal bhi na dekhun!" Aman mumbles.
"Hain?!"
"Kuch nahi... Tum yahan kaise?! Aur yeh kya saat samundar paar laga rakha hai?" Aman asks.

"Naraaz na ho... saat samundar naa sahi, magar main tumhare liye.. saat gaon toh paar karke aayi hu! Sirf tumhare liye jaan-e-mann!" Shabbo replies shyly.

Asad clears his throat as the talks were getting personal, "Mere khayal mein mujhe chalna chahiye.. Ammi khane par intezaar kar rahi hongi!" Asad said.

"Nahi jee koi zaroorat nahi hai.. main layi hu khana tum dono ke liye.. aur tujhe toh main apne haathon se khilaongi !" Shabbo replies looking at Aman.

"Nahi.. meri bhuk toh marr gayi.. aap Aman Bhai ko he khilaye! Waise bhi bhuk se tadaprahe the woh.. keh rahe the ki unka bas chale toh do logon ka khana kha jaye!" Asad said earning a deadly glare from Aman.
********

London,
Heer reached the address that Laiba had given her. The ambience of the place wasn't very good. The youngsters lay unconscious all around. Some were doing cheap vulgar things. There was smell of alcohol all around. Heer covered her nose with her dupatta.

"Yeh kaisi party hai? Amirah se baat karni padegi !" Heer thought as she moved inside the venue. She dried the small beads of sweat formed on her forehead as she moved ahead.
There was a group of men, sitting by the bar counter drinking, one of them noticed her.
"Looks like we have new guest!" he said as he approached Heer.

He was so drunk that he wasn't able to even stand properly. Heer moved backward as she saw him coming towards her.
"So darling! What will you have? Whisky, Champagne, or Hard shots directly?" he asked her.
Heer looked at him, from top to bottom, scared.
"Ahh.. the girl's checking me out! No problem.. let...let me help you!" the man said as he began unbuttoning his shirt, while the guys behind cheered for him.
Heer looked away as the man came close to her. She could smell his alcohol laden breaths. he moved even closer as he tried to kiss her but Heer pushed him back. He lost his balance and fell down. Heer grabbed this opportunity to run away from there. Her heart was racing fast after that encounter and she was hell scared. Just then, she saw a girl on the couch with a guy kissing her all around. The girl looked familiar and on looking carefully, she was shocked !
"Amirah!" she called out.
******
That's it !

Edited by pcnsb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Hilarious Update Nandu!! ⭐️⭐️
So This Bahadur Mehmood has feelings for our Shabbo!! 😆😆😆 Haye! Issi se shaadi karwa do iski, mere Aman ka peecha chute!! 😆😆 What The? Being A Wrestler he blushes too!! 😆😆😆 And Phatphatiya? Hadd Hai..!! 😆😆😆
Issi se kushti karwayenge Aman ki..!! 😉😉

Isra and Firdaus are worried about their daughters and its natural but Isra shouldn't have blamed her husband for making them independent.😕

Aman Asad Aur Shabbo!!! 🤣🤣
Saat Samandar?? Really? 😆😆😆 Aur Saat Gaon Bhi? 😆 Ya Allah! Kahaan Bechaara Aman bhaagne chala tha ab Shabbo ke haath se khaana padega! Beda Gark!! 😆😆
Asad toh nikal liye aur Aman phans gaya! But I love how Cutely Asad says, "Allah Na Kare!" 😆😆 Shabbo's jaan-e-mann!! 😆😆

Heer reached the party venue and her reaction was expected. Good thing that she pushed that moron.😡😡 Amirah found but Oops, Bad Timing!! 😆😆

Thanx Fr Pm. Update Soon.
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
The Whole SS was so Interestingly explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
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Thank you so much !!

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Nandini
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👍🏼
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Thank you so much !!

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Nandini
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Originally posted by: .Enchantress.

Awesome Hilarious Update Nandu!! ⭐️⭐️

So This Bahadur Mehmood has feelings for our Shabbo!! 😆😆😆 Haye! Issi se shaadi karwa do iski, mere Aman ka peecha chute!! 😆😆 What The? Being A Wrestler he blushes too!! 😆😆😆 And Phatphatiya? Hadd Hai..!! 😆😆😆 He's one of a kind !! Bahout se rang aayenge saamne!
Issi se kushti karwayenge Aman ki..!! 😉😉

Haaye! Main bhi yeh he soch rahi thi..😆

Isra and Firdaus are worried about their daughters and its natural but Isra shouldn't have blamed her husband for making them independent.😕

Moms will be mom!

Aman Asad Aur Shabbo!!! 🤣🤣
Saat Samandar?? Really? 😆😆😆 Aur Saat Gaon Bhi? 😆 Ya Allah! Kahaan Bechaara Aman bhaagne chala tha ab Shabbo ke haath se khaana padega! Beda Gark!! 😆😆

Aman ko abhi bahout sehna hai.. yeh toh shuruvat hai bas!

Asad toh nikal liye aur Aman phans gaya! But I love how Cutely Asad says, "Allah Na Kare!" 😆😆 Shabbo's jaan-e-mann!! 😆😆

Heer reached the party venue and her reaction was expected. Good thing that she pushed that moron.😡😡 Amirah found but Oops, Bad Timing!! 😆😆

Super bad times ahead! 😉

Thanx Fr Pm. Update Soon.


Thank you so much for you lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the update...

Stay tuned..
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Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊
The Whole SS was so Interestingly explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.


Thank you so much !!

I'm glad you enjoyed..

Stay tuned..
Nandini
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CHAPTER 5



"Amirah!" Heer called out. Shock evident in her tone. She couldn't believe her eyes as she looked on stunned. This was her sister..her own younger sister. Okay, Heer had herself saved Ami couple of times from their parent's wrath when she was late or did something stupid. But that was solely because she knew Ami would never let her down. Being the youngest in the family, she was pampered rotten which made her cranky and demanding but this..? How can it be possible? This can't be true. This can't be her sister. This isn't how they were brought up, these aren't their values, their morals. No! No way! Heer suddenly felt dizzy as she held on to the wall for support and rubbed her forehead.

Amirah who had noticed Heer standing by the wall was scared to death. She knew Heer had noticed her and whatever was coming is going to ruin everything. She has to do something.. But hell she was so drunk that her mind couldn't think of anything other than pushing the guy on her away. She started struggling under his grip, pretending as if he was forcing her.

"Leave me.. Stay away!" Amirah pleaded as she punched him hard on his face. Finally, after a few kicks and knocks she jerked him away. She wobbled towards Heer and hugged her tightly.

"Aapi.." she said in breaking voice, tears brimming eyes as she broke down, hugging her.

Heer hugged her back confused, "Ami? Kya hua Jaani?". But Ami continued sobbing controllably!
"Kuch toh bolo? Tum mujhe darra rahi ho! Ami?" Heer said as she pealed away from Ami, forcefully.
She cupped her face, as she makes her face her, and looking straight into her eyes, "Ami? Kya hua hai? Sach batao!"

"Aapi.." Amirah began to speak up, as she swallowed the huge lump formed in her throat, "Ye.. ye.. aadmi.." she said pointing towards the guy lying on the couch, barely in his senses, "Isne.." and began crying crocodile tears again, hugging Heer.

It didn't took Heer a second to understand what has happened. Her rage knew no-bounds as she consoled Ami and then charged towards the guy. She grabbed his collar and pulled him fiercely off the couch.

"How dare you touch my sister?" Heer shouted. This attracted everyone's attention as they looked on with interest. The guy was stunned at this sudden attack on him and even before he could comprehend what was happening, he felt a tingling sensation on his cheek. Heer had slapped him so hard that one could clearly trace her fingers' across his face.

"What the hell?!" he cursed as he went ahead to hit Heer, only to be slapped again.
"Who the hell do you think of yourself? How dare you slap me? You have no idea with whom you have messed up! I'm Alex, Alex Brown! My father is one of the most-influential man of London! One phone call.. and you will be gone forever!" He barked at the top of his voice.

"I don't give a damn who the hell are you? or your father is? All I'm concerned is about my SISTER! Your father's money doesn't give you the right to force someone, to play with the respect of someone! And as far as your dad's connections are concerned, go on! Make the call.. I'm not scared of you! " Heer shouted back with same intensity.

"Damn you lady! Who forced her? Whatever you saw had her complete consent!" Alex replied back as he looked at Ami.

"He's lying Aapi.. LIAR!" Amirah said as Heer too looked back at her.

"I know you don't have to clarify! I know what all these spoiled rich lads are capable of!" Heer replied, "I trust you!"

Alex laughed sarcastically, "Trust?! Well you are so going to regret this.. she isn't trustworthy!"

"Not a word against my sister! I don't need a certificate from you.. I know her better than you!" Heer snapped back.

"That is what you think! She is nothing but a lying bitch and you are a fool!" Alex shouted back.

"Mind your tongue!" Heer replied as she grabbed his collar again, "Don't you dare come anywhere near my sister from now on! Otherwise you wont be able to recognize yourself, let alone your so-called-influential-father!" she finished, as she pushed him away!

"You will have to pay for this!" Alex replied in dangerously calm voice.

"Get lost!" Heer reverted back. With this Heer helped Ami out of the venue, as both of them headed back to home to face yet another storm.
********

Isra rushes towards the door as soon as she hears the knock. She opens the door and saying that she was shocked would be an understatement!

"Ami.. Kya hua beta?" Isra asked worried as she looks at the horrible condition of her daughter. Her face has dried strains of tears, and was wearing a black short dress which was ripped off from shoulder.

"Ammi andar toh aane dein!" Heer replies as she leads Ami inside the house.

"Amirah? Gudiya? " Firdous calls out as he feels relieved to see both their daughters back home but as soon as he sees their condition, he's worried again. Any father would be!

Heer helps Ami to sit down and gives her a glass of water. Ami sips a little bit of water as Firdous and Isra looks on worried.

"Tum dono mujhe bataoge aakhir baat kya hai? Yeh Ami ne kiss kism ke kapde pehne hue hai..? Aur tum dono ko itna waqt kahan lag gaya?" Firdous shots his questions back to back, unable to stop himself anymore.

"Heer, phone kyu band aa raha tha beta? Kya hua? Sach sach batao! Kahin..? Kahin.. " Isra too added to the already long list.

"Nahi Ammi! Allah na kare.. Kuch nahi hua hai. Sab thik hai!" Heer cuts in as turns towards Ami, "Tum upar jakar change karo.. Ammi-Baba aapke sawalon ke jawab main deti hu!"

Ami looks at her worried, but Heer assures her that she can handle this. After Ami is gone, Heer turns to face her parents.

"Shuru karo!" Firdous demanded with a glare. Heer looks down embarrassed as she confesses whatever happened. Both Isra and Firdous, who were anxious about their daughters' whereabouts a moment ago were now enraged at their stupidity. All the worry and concern has been replaced by anger.

"Tumhe andaza hai tum dono kitni badi mushkil mein pad sakte the? Aur jhooth? Mere ko kam se kam tumse yeh kism ki laparvahi ki ummeed nahi thi Heer!" Firdous shouted, not able to control his anger.

"Main ek baar ke liye Ami se iss kism ke bachpane ki tawaqqo rakh sakta hu magar tum? Soch hai kabhi agar wahan police raid ho jaati toh kya karte? Kisko muh dekhane layak nahi rehte hum!" Firdous added disappointed.

"I'm sorry baba!" Heer apologized still looking down.

"Upar se jhooth! Jab hum tumhe lagatar phone kar rahe the tab toh bata deti.. Tab phone kyu band kiya?" Isra asked.
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"Main darr gayi thi.. Ami ka kahin kuch pata nahi chal raha tha.. Aur kya batati main aapko phone par? Yeh ki Ami lapata hai?" Heer replied.

"Haan.. yeh he batati.. tumhe koi andaaza hai hum dono kitne pareshaan the? Kaise bure-bure khayal zehen mein aa rahe the?" Isra yelled back.

"Ho gayi galti.. pehli galti maan kar maaf kardein !" Heer pleaded as she sat down near Firdous's knees.

Firdous looked at Heer, his eyes devoid of any emotions, "Hum Pakistan wapis jaa rahe hai !" he announced.

Isra was about to say something but Firdous silenced her with his raised hand, "Mujhe iss par koi behes nahi chahiye!" as he retired back to his room.

"Baba!" Heer called out from behind, "Meri baat sune! samajhne ki koshish kare.. Baba!" But Firdous was too angry to pay any attention to her pleads. Isra placed her comforting arm around Heer's shoulders and gestured her to keep quiet, "Koi fayda nahi hai.."

Ami who was witnessing all this from her room window, couldn't help but feel bad for Heer.

****
Gujranwala, Pakistan

Sheen was collecting the sun dried red-chillies from the courtyard while Bayji and Batoolan were busy gossiping. KFC was sipping through hookah while relaxing in the sun, when a group of men entered the house and started beating the drums and nagadas.
Everyone was startled to see the uninvited guests as they all gathered in the verandah, looking confused.

"In dhol walo ko kisne bulaya?" KFC wondered aloud.

"Ojee maine bulaya!" Ibrahim emerged from the platoon of men, dancing and doing bhangra.

"Aao jee aao aap bhi aao!" Ibrahim said as he pulled KFC, Sheen, Batoolan and everybody else along with him to do some bhangra. Being the hard-core Punjabis, none of them minded shaking their legs to the beats of Dhol. Aman whose sleep was disturbed by all the chaos came out cursing, "Kya ho raha hai? Kyu halla machaya hua hai?" he shouted from the terrace.

"Oye tu upar ki kar raha hai! Neeche aa aur bhangra paa!" Ibrahim shouted back as Aman glared irritated.

"Oye thuk de gussa aur aaja!" KFC too added, "Aaja aaja!" and Soon enough, Aman too joined them dancing.

After a while, when everyone got tired of dancing, Ibrahim asked the platoon to stop and gave them heavy tips. Asad who had just arrived after his morning namaz, looked at the group of men with dhols leaving!

"Oye..tune miss kar dita bhangra!" Batolaan exclaimed as she spotted Asad.

"Koi gal nahi.. phir bula lenge!" KFC replied, "Bahout maza aaya!"

"So toh hai.. jawani ke din yaad aa gaye!" Bayji too added to which Aman replied, "Toh aap kaun si boodhi amma ho.. abhi toh jawan he ho!"

"Haaye besharam! Apni Bayji pe line mar raha hai khoteya!" Everyone laughed as Bayji chased Aman around the house.

"Lekin dhol-nagade kis khushi mein?" Asad asked as everyone looked at each other clueless.

"Oye.. yeh toh hume bhi nahi pata! Ibrahim se puchh! Ibrahim!" KFC called out.

"Jee bauji!" Ibrahim appeared from the interiors of the house.

"Abb yeh toh bata de ki Dhol-nagade kis khushi mein bajvaye?" He asked.

"O jee.. Firdous ka phone aaya tha.. Eid pe iss dafa Pakistan aa raha hai.. Bhabi aur bachhiyon ke saath!" Ibrahim replied much to the happiness of KFC and Bayji.

"Iss baar toh Eid ki raunak he kuch aur hogi!"
****

TBC.. Next update: Firdous arrives with Isra and daughters! Both the friends meet each other after years of separation!
Edited by pcnsb - 9 years ago

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