Fawad-Sanam SS: TOTAL SIYAPPA..!! Chapter 5 Updated on Pg 12..

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Hello everyone...
I am Nandini... I am quite new to this forum... a crazy fan of Fawad... <3<3 So here I am to write a SS on FK... loosely based on his show Akbari Asghari... 😉 I must say FK was super cute as chichora Asghar... 😳 Waise bhi who har role mein cute lagta..<3<3 nothing new in that...!
Okay enough of bak-bak... coming to the SS, I am surely not writing it all alone... I have guru mata with me... Shanaya di (.Enchantress) to help me out...
Here goes the Character Sketch... will update the Prologue by tomorrow...! 😊
Buddy me for PMs...


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Character Sketch


  • Aman Chaudhary:

    Elder son of Ibrahim Chaudhary, a wealthy landlord of Gujranwala. He does nothing other than sleeping and planning a way to get out of Pakistan. He is total flirt but has firm faith on a local Pir Sahib of village, who fools him to help in getting a job abroad with the help of his tantra-mantra. He is least interested in working out a job even though he is well educated. All he wants to do is to make money somehow and leave Pakistan.

  • Heer Waqar:

    Elder daughter of Isra and Firdous Waqar, who shifted to London from Gujranwala somewhat 20 years back. She is an obedient child, very much aware of her responsibilities. SHE HATES LAZY PEOPLE. She believes in leading an independent life. Otherwise she is an optimistic person seeking positives in very negative. She is a pure feminist and believes in fighting for her rights.

  • Asad Chaudhary:

    Younger son of Ibrahim Chaudhary. He is a good soul. He was smart as a child and currently, handles his family's ancestral land. He also takes care of lands of their family friend, Firdous Waqar. He always tries to warn off his elder brother of Pir Sahib and make him realize his duties regarding family. He also, teaches village children for free in his spare time. He is responsible and dutiful, but a simpleton. He believes that to lead happy life money is not a necessity but love and family is!!

  • Amirah Waqar:

    Younger daughter of Isra and Firdous Waqar. She is a pretender; soft and sweet from outside but a selfish person at heart. All she cares for is her happiness, no one matters above that. She is into everything one should be away of... be it gambling, drinking or smoking. She is sick and tired of Heer who tries to warn her and calls her Jagat Mata on her back.

  • Isra Waqar:

    Better half of Firdous Waqar, living in London from last 20 years. She has two daughters, Heer and Amirah with him. She is known to be a hyperbolic person.

  • Firdous Waqar:

    He is a native of Pakistan who moved to London years back to earn money and fame. His life lies in his daughters. He misses his motherland and his childhood friend, Ibrahim dearly.

  • Ibrahim Chaudhary:

    A well off landlord of Gujranwala. He has one of the biggest havelis of village in his name. He has two sons, Aman and Asad. He misses his childhood friend, Firdous a lot and wishes to meet him again soon.

  • Shaheen Chaudhary:

    Wife of Ibrahim Chaudhary and mother of brother duo, Aman-Asad. She is a loving mother, dutiful wife and a responsible daughter in law. She shares sweet-sour relation with her in-laws but she loves them dearly.

  • Shabbo

    First cousin of Aman-Asad, girlfriend of Aman. She is crazy about Aman and dreams to marry him someday. On the other hand, Aman is not so serious about her. For him she is just a time pass.

  • Batool

    Real sister of Ibrahim and mother of Shabbo. She is behind her brother's wealth to speed up her husband's work. Her highlights include heavy makeup she wears every time and her ENGLISH.


Karim Fazal Chaudhary (KFC)

The Patriarch of Chaudhary family, father of Ibrahim.

Bay ji

Sister of KFC.

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  • PROLOGUE... scroll down
  • CHAPTER 1... PG 4
  • CHAPTER 2... PG 6
  • CHAPTER 3... PG 8
  • CHAPTER 4... PG 10
  • CHAPTER 5.. PG 12
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Awsumm CS Nandu! 👏👏 I sooo loveed it! Aman! 🤣🤣 This is going to be Duper Fun with Batoola, KFC, Shabbo and Bayji..!! 🤣🤣 And me ur Guru Mata? 😆😆 Chalo Koi Na! 😉 I loved the pics you posted for Ibrahim, Batoola, KFC and Bayji..!! ❤️ Thanx fr pm! Continue Soonz.
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i like it..but wondering why u dint keep the same names fr fk n Ib..update soon
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Originally posted by: .Enchantress.

Awsumm CS Nandu! 👏👏 I sooo loveed it! Aman! 🤣🤣 This is going to be Duper Fun with Batoola, KFC, Shabbo and Bayji..!! 🤣🤣 And me ur Guru Mata? 😆😆 Chalo Koi Na! 😉 I loved the pics you posted for Ibrahim, Batoola, KFC and Bayji..!! ❤️ Thanx fr pm! Continue Soonz.

I am glad you liked it!!! 😊
luckily I got a resembling picture for Ibrahim's character... after a lot of hardwork...
Updating it now!!😊
Nandini
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Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

i like it..but wondering why u dint keep the same names fr fk n Ib..update soon

Thanks a lot @Bhatakti_atma ..!!
Oh its a FanFic... you know... very loosely based on AA..
So I thought fresh look with fresh names will look good...!!!😳
I hope you liked them...feel free to give suggestions...😊
Stay tuned...😊
Nandini
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Hey...here I am back with Prologue... I hope you will like it... do Comment and hit likes...😳
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PROLOGUE:


At Gujranwala railway station,


There was great hustle and bustle at the platform as the train was about to arrive. Everyone seemed to be in hurry. Passengers were eagerly waiting for the train's arrival. Few were sitting on benches and reading newspaper or just smoking to pass the time. Few were pacing up and down on the platform. The vendors were having a busy time. Almost everyone was either drinking tea or relishing the baked chanas. The coolies too, sitting in straight line, were waiting for train.


A man fairly in his mid-thirties was rushing down the staircase along with heavy luggage hanging all around him. This was Firdous Waqar. He was leaving with his family for Karachi to London from there. "Arre bhai, zara pakdo toh!" he called out for a porter. One or two porters rushed towards him. "Haan, bhai ji laiye... main le leta hoon..!" one porter offered. "Arre aise kaise, main pehle aaya tha... main lunga aapka saaman..." other argued. "Tum pehle aae toh kya hua... puchchha toh maine na! main lunga aap ka saaman." First one argued further as both of them began snatching the bags from each other's hands as if they were playing passing the parcel. "Arre.. are.. bhai rehne do! Mujhe nahi chahiye coolie voolie.. jao bhai!" Firdous said irritated.


"Aise kaise nahi chahiye.. bilkul chahiye..!" a female voice called out from his back. "Nahi, Isra rani baat samjho... coolie ki kya zaroorat hai, main hoon na aur Ibrahim bhi aane wala hoga!... yeh lo aa gaya.." he said pointing towards another man who had just arrived in his perfectly iron kurta-pajama with fairly built body. "Salamwalekum bhabhiji, ki gaal hai? Kyu gussa kar rahe ho?" "Kuch nahi.. aur aap! Hume coolie chahiye... thoda toh apne status ke baare mein socho... abb hum London mein rehne jaa rahe hai, kab tak yeh middle class wale tareeke se rahoge.. kyu coolie nahi lenge bilkul lenge?!" she said and both of them started arguing on the matter. Even the porters had their heads spinning. They realized that it is better to leave than go mad with them. They quietly kept the bags on the floor and ran away as fast as they could. Ibrahim, who was watching everything, tapped his friend's shoulder, "Chale gaye!"


"Chale gaye?! Kaun chale gaye?" Firdous asked confused.


"Coolie bhaag gaye darr ke!" He replied.


"Yeh dekho, kitna ladte ho tum ki coolie bhi tum se darr ke bhaag gaye... kya zaroorat hai itna ladne ki?! Mera matlab insan ke andar tameez aur zahaneeyat naam ki bhi cheez hoti hai magar nahi... karni toh woh he middle class wali harkat hai..." Isra blabbered continuously. Firdous was getting irritated and Ibrahim knew that world war 3 waits if he didn't intervene. "Bhabhi ji! Aaj toh tussi bade kamaal ke lag rahe ho! Chakkar kya hai?" Isra looked at him and smiled, "Chakkar kya hota, Arre bhai London jaa rahe hai, mazak thodi hai...kisi na kisi ko toh class maintain karna padega na!" she said with proud. "Ae gaal toh ik dum thik hai, tussi he class-shlass maintain kar sakte ho, Firu ki baski toh hai nahi!" he added. "Woh mujhe pata hai!" she said. "Achchha yeh batao, meri gud aur ladoo kahan hai?" he inquired. He used to call Heer and Amirah as gud and ladoo lovingly as both of them had sweet tooth. "Heer aur Amirah bauji ke saath aane wali thi..." Just then, Karim approached them with Heer and Amirah. Both the girls were holding Karim's hand tightly. "Asalam walekum!" he wished everyone. "Walekum a salam bauji!" Firdous wished him as he touched his feet. "Khub khush raho, khub tarrakki karo, aur hum sab ka naam roshan karo!" he showered him with blessings. "Dekho abb tum mulk ke bahar jaa rahe ho, apna aur bachchho ka khayal rakhna... aur kuch bhi aisa mat karna jisse humari mulk ka, humari sar zameen ka naam badnaam ho!" he preached. "Ohho tussi fikr na karo bauji, main agli baar aaunga na toh bada aadmi ban kar!" "Inshallah!" Ibrahim wished.


In matter of two or three mins, train stamped in, whistling in its top volume. There was noise and commotion everywhere. Many passengers got down and many got in. Both Amirah and Heer clung to their parents in a great rush as they struggled to get inside. Both the friends bided each other a teary goodbye as they hugged each other. "Abb pata nahi kab mulakat hogi, veere. Apna, biji, bauji, Bhabhi aur aman-asad sab ka khayal rakhi!" Firdous said as they embraced each other. "Tu bhi apna khayal rakhna!" Ibrahim said. Firdous got inside the train compartment and train whistled. He waved everyone goodbye with a hope to return back again and that time to strengthen their friendship.

That's it!!! I hope you all will like..

*fingers crossed*

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Awsum Prolouge Nandu! 🤗 Namunapanti yahin se shuru ho gayi?! 🤣🤣 Those Coolies! 😆😆 Haye Rabba! 🤣🤣 Snatching Luggage! 😲 Isra..😆😆 Maintaining Standards Huh! 😉 Loved Firdous and Ibrahim's Friendship. ❤️ Gud-Laddo, Heer and Amirah! 😳 So Sweet! ❤️ I loved KFC too! 😆 Love The Description of the Railway Station..👏 And loving ur Punjabi as Well! ⭐️ Thanx fr pm. Continue Soonz.
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Nice concept! Loved the flashback type prologue. Eagerly waiting for the story to begin!

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