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Chapter 3 : Fiasco at Disco

After dancing for 1 hour straight the gang settle down.

Chitra : Hashtag rocking Disco! Sid hottie, thank you so much! Ye VIP experience mein to kabhi nei bhulungi!

Sumanjee : Haan Sid! Bada majja aya! Lekin ab na bohot bhuk lag rei hai sach me!

Sid : No worries Ladies! Mein abhi gaya aur kuch khane ke liye leke aya!

Monu : Sid mein bhi aati hoo tere sath. Washroom jana hai mujhe then I will help you.

Sid : Okay! To Chal!

Sid went to the counter whereas Monu to washroom. While returning from washroom Monu saw 2 very odd people with very ordinary clothes talking to each other in corner. They were looking like very lower middle-class people with torn shirts.

“Ye yaha kya kar rahe hai? Looks odd to be here!” She couldn’t go much close to them but can sense something serious talk was on going. “Mujhe kyu aise lag raha hai mene in dono ko kahi dekha hai”.

Monu was trying hard to remember when Sid comes “ BRO! Agar help nei karni thi ladko ko tadna tha to pehle keh deti! “

“What … “ Monu looks distracted “Sid, you mad or what! Mein kisi ko nei Taad rei. De mujhe wo tray. Chal abhi”

Still thinking about where he saw them Monu along with Sid returned to gang.

Bala : Sid Bhaijee apne bola tha apne wo supermodel ke sath selfie liya tha. Wo dekhni hai mujhe. Dikhao na please.

Sid : Kya tu? Despo! Ruk dikhata hoo. Yaar mere hath me ketchup lag gaya. Monu ye mere mobile se wo photo khol ke dikha na isko. I will wipe my hand now.

Monu opened Sid’s phone and was sliding through his clicks when she stumbles across the picks Sid took during his Jalpari mission. And she stops on one photo.

“SID! Ye.. ye 2 log kaun hai”

Sid wiping his hand with tissue answers “Kaun? Ye? Arey wo mission pe gaya tha na Sanju ke sath. Wo gang me se 2 log hai wo. Jo waha se bhag gaye the na kuch unmese hai. Karan Sir ne bola tha ye photos apne pass rakho delete mat karo”

“Sid , thank god tune Karan ki sun li. Because...” She gestures all gang to come close and whispers “I think I just saw these two people here in Disco”

All looks worries.

Sumanjee : To ab kya kare?

Chitra : Karan sir ko call karte hai.

Sid : Ok! Monu tu Karan ko kar.

Monu nods, she knew this is not the time think about their issues. They must act.

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Back at academy :

Karan, Faizi , Sanju and Ustad jee in strategy room.

Sanju : Sirjee hum keh raho hai ye banda is baar kuch bada karne ki koshish karega. Itne mahine shant raha hai.

Faizi : Mene 2 3 logonko apne usual spots pe bheja hai information ke liye.

Tring…. Tring…. Karan’s phone ringing. He sees Monani’s name.

“Monami! Abhi mujhe kyu phone kar rei hai?” it’s been month since he has seen her name on his phone.

Faizi : Utha lo kuch kaam hoga.

Karan picks up his phone.

“Hello, Monami”

“Karan ….” Monu sounded tense.

“Monami, kya hua hai. Tum itni ghabarai hui kyu ho?”

“Karan wo … wo tumhe yaad hai wo mission jisme Sanju and Sid under cover gaye the?”

Karan sensed something wrong “ Haan.. But tum aise kyu pooch rei ho?”

“Karan I may be wrong or but, I think mene us din un club me jo admi the unmese kuch logonko mene abhi dekha yaha. Disco me!”

Karan put her on speaker , “ Monami I am putting you on speaker. Yaha Faizi, Sanju and Ustad jee hai. Tumne kya dekha phirse thik se batao”

Monu recapped everything that happened.

“Monami, dhyan se suno. Abhi tum sab log ek sath raho bilkul koi bhi alag nei hoga. Koi unke peeche nahi jaega. I repeat koi kuch plan nei karega kuch action nei lega. Bheed me raho Disco se bahar mat jana. Hum log abhi aa rahe hai”

Knowing Monu he knew she would act something, ,”Monami! Are you listening? Mujhe bolo ki tum ya koi kuch action nei lega and will follow all my instructions”

“Haan Karan hum sab wahi karenge jo tumne bola. Bus tum jaldi aa jao.”

“Yes, we are coming”

Monu explained everything to gang and they all choose a very public place in disco.

Karan gathering his gun “ Chalo , kuch to lead mila hai.Let’s see yaha se kya pata chalta hai”


------ Back to disco :

Sid : Monu Bro kab tak hum aise yaha baithe rahenge. I think we should act.

Bala : Haan agar wo log chale gaye to?

Monu : Nahi guys, Karan ne bola hai na wo aur baki sab aa rahe hai. Then I think we should wait.

Gang was debating whether they should act when the 2suspicious goons enter the floor. Still in deep conversation. All the gang’s eyes followed them trying to understand their moment. In brief second one of the goons eyes met Sid’d eyes. Sid tried to look away but goon gets suspicious and both of them were approaching the gang.

Chitra : Ab kya kare? Unko shak ho gaya hum pe.

Gang waited thinking the goons might loose their chase but they didn’t stopped.

Sid : I think Monu we do need to act NOW!

Monu : Haan! Ek kaam karo split up. Aur 2 alag alag raste jao. At least we can distract them by the time trainers come. Keep phones with you.

Sid, Premjee ,Chitra moves one way and Monu, Sumanjee and Bala goes another.

Goons runs behind them.


------- Trainers in jeep :

Karan : Mujhe pata nei kyu aise lag raha hai ye Cadet kuch na kuch karenge. Mere mana karne ke baad bhi.

Faizi : Haan! Chup chap baithe to wo rahenge nei. Jitna hum unko jante hai kuch na kuch karasthani wo karenge hi.

Sanju : Sirjee, hum kya bol raho hai ke thoda bharosa kar hi lete hai unpe. Socho agar kuch kar bhi raho hai to usike liye hi to train ho raho hai na wo log. Jo bhi training hum ne unko di hai lagta hai ke wo sambhal lenge.

Karan nods. He knows all his cadets are capable and would not take unnecessary risk. But the time he had broken up with Monu he has become extra protective of her. More than he was when she was with him. Monu has promised him once that she will never come in the way of his duty and he never have to think about her, worry about her on mission. She has kept her promise,but Karan was not able to keep his. He just wanted to see her and make sure she is ok.

Just the moment he reached the disco his phone rang.

“Hello.. Hello Monami, kaha ho tum?”

“Karan, sorry tumne bola tha kuch mat karna but we had to! Wo logonko humpe shak ho gaya tha and they were approaching us. So we had to run”

“WHAT???????????? “ He banged his hand on steering wheel.“Mujhe bus batao tum kaha ho? Baki log kaha hai?”

“Me , Sumanjee and Bala Disco ke basement wale parking area me hai. Sid, Premjee and Chitra nei pata”

Just then Sanju’s phone rang. “Hello , Siddharth…”

Karan nods at Sanju and returns to his call “Monami, Siddharth ka call aya hai Sanju ko wo Sanju ko bata dega kaha hai. You don’t worry hum un logonko leke ate hai. Bus tum teeno chupke rehna and apna phone on rakhna me aa raha hoo”

“Haan hum yahi hai”

Karan gestures Sanju asking her what happened

“Sirjee wo teeno Disco ke kitchen area me hai.”

“Thik hai. Sanju tum un teeno ke piche jao and unko yaha leke aa parking me. Me baki teeno ko dekhta hoo. Faizi tum Disco me jake un 2 gundo ke bare me pata karo. “

Nodding to each other all three of them exits the parking lot.

Karan approaching slowly and vigilantly towards parking lot. But he could hear nothing.

“Hello Monami, mein parking lot me hoon , tum log kaha ho I can’t see you. “

“Karan, Karan hum log ek black Mercedes ke peeche hai. Number hai… “

But before she could tell him number, he could hear somebody shouting and snatching the phone.

“Hello …. hello…. Monami. Hello tum sun rei ho”

With his heart racing millions of miles per second he frantically started running and searching for them. The parking lot was huge ,and he had to be careful. There might be one, two or may be by now many more goons.

He just crossed one huge pillar when he saw them. And a gentle sigh escaped from him. He titled his head at the sight in front of him. Sanju was right, he should trust them more.

Bala and Sumanjee had held down the goon and Monu was standing over with gun in her hand. Pointing it on goon’s head.

Smiling he came running down. Takes gun from Monu’s hand.

“Well done guys! Very well done!”

Grabbing the goon by the color he and rest of the guys went towards main parking area.

As they approached the parking space where they had parked their jeep, Karan saw another goon and Sanju holding him.

“Sirjee, cadets ne pakad liya isko.”

Karan nodding , “ Isko bhi inhi logone pakda”

“Me na kehta thi, ab hamare cadets bade ho gayo hai. Commando jaise sochna lag gaye hai”

“True. Well done guys! Really, tum logone aaj jo kaam kiya hai you have no idea how much you have helped us. Well wo baki sab academy jake.”

Faizi patting and hugging everyone asks them to sit in jeep.

Karan knew knowingly or unknowingly they have involved Cadets into their mission. And deep down he knew they were well capable of handling this thing. But the only question was will Batra sir allow them?

Edited by anwaya - 3 years ago
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Chapter 4 : Mission Ghanchakkar


Back at academy:

Karan, Sanju and Faizi in Batra Sir’s cabin , de-briefing him regarding what happened in Disco.


Batra Sir : Ab ye coincident kahe ya luck! Cadets bhi wahi disco me gaye jaha se hume aage ka lead mile. And I am very proud and impressed the way they cough the goons.

Karan : Yes sir! Now they are thinking like commandos not cadets!

Batra Sir : Hope they don’t know yet regarding the real reason behind those goons?

Karan : No Sir, ab tak humne unko kuch nahi bataya. Ustad ji interrogation room me hai un 2 gundonke sath. Hope kuch hath lage hamare.

Batra :Good! Unse jo bhi information milti hai report it tome. Let’s assess the situation. Till then kisibhi cadet ko kuch nei pata lagna chahie. Dismiss!


………… Sir aap jante nei in namunonko, ab tak to inke dimag ki batti jal bhi chuki hogi aur is mission me kaise part le uspe bhi charcha ho rahi hogi……….. all 3, Faizi, Karan and Sanju thought in their mind. They look at each other, all knowing what they are thinking. A quick smir kappeared on their face. They knew their cadets way too well.



In hanger area :

Gang was sitting idle. Waiting to trainers to come and say something. Monu went to get water to cooler. Sid follows.

Sid : Monu Bro! don’t you smell something fishy?

Monu thinking hard and recollecting all the events that happened.

Monu : Yes. The way trainers were behaving. Specially Sanju.I think something is up.

Sid : Sanju? Usne kya kiya?

Monu hits Sid on forehead , “Idiot! Didn’t you see the way she was looking at you? I know that look. Mene Karan ke chehare pe dekha hai wo. Mere liye.” Monu said silently.

Sid : What look?

Monu : Worries wala look! Jab Karan Dhanu wale mission pe tha and I didn’t knew. The way he used to look at me , uski worry and fear. Sab dikhta tha.

Sid : Monu, wo abhibhi dikhta hai Karan sir ke face pe. Wo gaya nei hai.

Monu, totally dismissing what Sid said : Wo look mene Sanjune tumhare chehare pe dekha aaj. Wo dono tumhare mission ke time ke goons the , they know your face. Is baat ka dar tha Sanju ko.

Sid : How does this matters? If those goons remember me from that mission so what?. I mean, unless….

Monu : Unless….

And both have been struck with same thought.

Sid : No way bro!

Monu : Yes, Mermaid returns. And this time kuch bada hone wala hai.

Sid : Come on, gang ko batate hai.



Batra sir and trainers in strategy room.

Batra Sir : Shergil, please brief me about situation.

Karan : Yes Sir. Sir, jo 2 gunde pakade gaye the wo to kuch jada bol nei rahe. Lekin unka mooh to khulwake rahenge hum. But unke mobile phones bohot kuch bol rahe hein. Hamare tech expert ne kuch mails and messages recover kiye hai and kuch photos.

Batra Sir : Good!

Karan : “Unwind” bolke ke resort ke bare me kafi sari photos and messages hai. Unka booking bhi waha pe. Aur pata karne pe ye samne aya hai ke one of investors of “Unwind” is also investor of the disco. Yeh ek common kadi hai Disco and resort ke bich.

Batra : Ye resort kaha hai aur kis tarah ka resort hai.

Faizi : Sir ye ek wellness resort hai. Kuch log yaha relax karne ate hai kuch log Yoga retreat ke liye. Yaha pe alag alag packages diye jate hai apke health ke nusar. Ya phir bus aao apne family ke sath relax karo. Aur ye Mumbai ke pass hi hai.

Sanju : Sir jee pichle baar inho ne ekdum alag ilaka dhunda tha. Ekdum ajeeb wala pub / bar. Is baar ekdum pariwarik mohol.

Karan : Wo apni gatividhiya mask karana chahte hai.

Batra Sir : True! Hume ye nei pata drug handover kab hone wala hai. Ye bhi nei ke itne bade resort me kaha ye halchal ho rei hai. Kaun log involved hai. We are more or less blind about situation. Without much information hume kuch thos steps nei le sakte. We need more information from the ground. What say Shergil.

Karan : I agree sir. Hume resort jana hoga, undercover. Jitni ho sake information ekattha karni hogi tabhi jake kuch plan bana sakenge.

Sanju : Kintu Sirjee ye resort to kafi badi jagah hai hum kitni jankari nikal sakenge. Aur kuch khas pata nei to authorities ko bhi involve nei kar sakte. Wo satark ho jaenge.

Faizi : We need man power. Aise bande jo hamare sath undercover ja sake. And information nikal sake.

Batra sir thinks for a minute and asks “ Tum teeno ko kya lagta hai ?Cadets are ready for such mission? Kya unko isme involve karna sahi hoga?”

Karan knew what Faizi and Sanju must be thinking. He didn’t even have to ask for their opinion. He knew Faizi and Sanju would trust cadets with their lives.

Karan : Sir we are 100% sure cadets iske liye ready hai. And we don’t have to take any action or not atleast now. Hume bus information chahie. And I think they would be of help.

Faizi and Sanju nodes in agreement.

Batra Sir : Think hai, we can involve cadets but at initial level. For information. Aage actual mission pe kya karana hai we will decide later.

Karan , Faizi , Sanju : Yes Sir!

Batra Sir : Then go ahead, brief the team regarding the task.

Karan : Sir mujhe nei lagata jada kuch brief karana padega unko.

Karan said with his trade mark smirk.

Batra Sir : What do you mean by that?

Karan : Sir aap hi dekh lijie.



Batra Sir and trainers approaches hanger area where all gang was hurddled up and discussion something.

Karan : Cadets, attention!

But they were so deep in discussion they don’t listed. Karan shouts once again getting impatient “ Cadets! Attention, koi mujhe bataega yeh ho kya raha hai”

All cadets lined up. Sid raise his hand.

Karan : Yes cadet Ganju.

Sid : Sir has mermaid returned?

Chitra : Sir kya they have again started their operation?

Sumanjee : Sir Kya pichle baar ki tarah wo us disco me ye sab dhande kar rahe the?

Bala : Sir kya hum unpe tab se nazar rakhe hue the ?

Monu : and kya aap logonko yeh pata tha that they are active again?

Karan looked at Batra Sir. Now Sir realized what Karan meant by “Jyada samajhana nahi padega”.

Batra Sir : Lagata hai humare trainers ne apko kuch jada hi acche se train kiya hai. Waise kafi had tak aap sahi hai, baki ki baatein apko trainer bataenge. Lekin yaha nei.

Karan : exactly after 20 min , in briefing room.

All cadets nodded! Ready to take up the challenge, the next mission. And all happy that they have chosen by Batra sir and trainers to be part of mission!



--- In briefing room :

Everybody was sitting around the table. A projector was on , showing some pictures of few people and one resort. Karan was explaining the information they have till now.

“Yeh jo screen pe insan dikh raha hai he is the head of all this drug racket. Ghanshankar”

Every cadet was taking the notes of information that Karan was giving. Sid nodded and was writing in his book , “Right! Drug head Ghanchakkar”

Everybody stares at him. Monu, who was sitting next to him, pinches him “ Stupid! Ghanchakkar nei, Ghanshankar”. Sid embarrassed looks down and corrects the name “Oh, sorry!”

All cadets wanted to laugh but knowing the gravity of situation tried their level best to suppress the laughter. Sid looks at Sanju apologetically to which Sanju gives very stern look.

“To yeh hai drug racket ka head Ghanshankar” Karan continues, “ Last time jo log mermaid bar se bhage the unme se kuch abhibhi isi ke sath hai. Itne dino tak wo under radar rahe but ab they have started moving way too fast. Hamare intel ka manana hai ke agle kuch dino me kuch bohot bada karke ye log phirse under ground chale jaenge. So we have to act fast”

Faizi continues “Ye hai resort Unwind, Mumbai ke pass ka ek mashhoor resort. Ye resort and disco me kahi sare links paye gaye hai And hume lagta hai ke jo kuch bhi hoga isi resort ke andar hoga. Hume nei pata kab, resort me kaha, resort ke kaun log isme involve hai. Aur yehi baat janana and information jama karna hamara mission hai”

Karan takes over , “ Hume resort me entry leni hogi alag alag groups me as under cover. Aur jitni ho sake information ekattha karani hai. Har taraf har cheez ko barikise dekhna hai. Kuch ajeeb ya alag lage to you have to report back to us. To gather as much as intel possible yehi hamara mission hai. I repeat information jama karana hamara mission hai, koi action nahi lega. Koi bhi mujhe ya trainers ko puchhe bina ek bhi kadam nahi lega .Galti se bhi pakade gaye to mission fail aur agar unko bhanak bhi lag gayi ke we are onto them wo phirse apne bil me chup jaenge. Am I clear?”

“Yes Sir”

“Am I clear?”

“Yes Sir”

“AM I CLEAR?”

“YES, SIR”

“Sanju, mission ko naam de”

Sanju stood up and says “Sir jee, mission Ghanchakkar”

Sid looks at Sanju in disbelief. Now this time even Karan could not control, all the briefing room exploded with laughter!

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👏 Lovely 👏, Continue writing🤗

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Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

👏 Lovely 👏, Continue writing🤗

Thanks Sana... dropping the next chapter tomorrow...stay tuned....

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Chapter 5 : Jhingoor Titliyonki Grihasti

Karan , Faizi , Sanju, Ustad jiand gang in briefing room sitting round the table.

Sanju : Sir jee ab je baat to teh ho gayi hum 3 3 ke jhund me jaenge but ab ye the karna hai kaun kiske sath jaega.

Karan nods. He was in two minds, he wanted to be with Monu. But also, he wanted to stay away from her as much as possible. He was trying hard to not get affected by the distant behavior Monu was showing him. But this is what he wanted, for her to stay away from him. But he misses her, miss her badly. And he doubts if he is too close to her, he might not be able to fulfil his commitment.


Karan : Har group me 2 cadets and 1 trainer hoga. Har ek cadet ko apne group ke trainer ki har baat manani hogi, without letting him or her know koi bhi kadam nahi uthaya jaega. The trainer would be responsible for safety of cadets.


Karan walks and goes near whiteboard and writes Team 1 Team 2 Team 3.

Karan : Pehli team hogi Sanju ,Chitra and Sumanjee ki. Aap tino ki background story hogi ke aap tino dost hai and chuttiya manane resort ayi hai. Aur aap tino hi bade ghar se belong karte hai. Aap tino ko ekdum raes jado ki tarah rehna behave karana hai. Jaise jaise ke…

Karan struggled to make them understand when Sid chips in “Jaise high society butterflies?”

Sanju : Butter kya?

Karan : Butterflies. Matlab high society ki Titliya.

Karan feels guilty looking at Sanju.

Sanju : Sir jee hume kahe bana rahe ho ye butter vatter jo hai. Ye Monami ko banao na, bura mat manana Monami but tujhe to adat hai dekha hai kaise hote hai. Asan padego na.

Karan : Sorry Sanju but har ek team me ek trainer chahie.

Sanju : Thike hai Sirjee. Aap bol raho hai isi liye aur mission ke liye hum karlenge.

Monu : Koi baat nei Sanju me and Sid milke tum tino ko sikhadenge kya kaise karana hai.

Karan: To ye the raha Sanju, Sumanjee and Chitra ek team. Sanju team ko naam de.

Sanju very reluctantly, “Team Titliya sir jee”.

Karan adds name in front oft eam.


Karan : Ab bari hai dusre team ki.

Karan looks at white board still debating whether to be with Monu or not.

Karan : Now we need a very normal ordinary team. Jinpe koi shak na kare, jo jada notice na ho. Preferably family jo asani se kahi bhi ja sake phir bhi resort me kisi ko shak na ho.

Karan looks at the table try to pick 3 people.

Karan: Premjee aap Faizi and .

Monu : And me?

Monu quickly speaks up.

“huh… “ Karan replied baffled. He was not expecting to take the decision whether to be with Monu or not yet.

Monu : Haan matlab Premjee and me , 2 cadets. And Faizi ek trainer.

Faizi eyes Karan looking for any reaction. But Karan was short of words still in two minds he nods.

“Ok, seems good. Family chahie to har family me ek lady to chahie. To haan… second team : Premjee , Faizi and Monami” , Karan says reluctantly.


Sid slides next to Monu and whispers in her ear , “ why Monu Bro? Jaan bujhke kar rei hai aise. You knew Karan tere sath team me rahega. He is showing he still cares for you, then why you are backing out bro?”

Monu twirling the pen in her hand answers , “Because I don’t care! I don’t care special agent Karan Shergil cares for me or not. Usse mujhse door rehna tha to fine! I will respect his decision. Jitna ho sake utna usse dur rahungi. “

“Bro, tere ye pange bohot mehenge padenge tujhe dekh lena”

Monu pokes Sid with pen. “Shut up!”

Karan writes down team 2’s name.“ To team second bhi ban gayi. Ab tum tino ki back story”

Monu : Well I have an idea. Faizi and Premjee could be brothers. And me Faizi ki wife.

Karan turns in shock “ Wife? Kyu Wife kyu?”

Monu : Wife kyu nei? Ek complete family chahie hume jo convincing ho.

Karan knew she was right, this could be more convincing. And he didn’t wanted to create scene in front of everyone so trying to hide his uneasiness wrote the details on board.

A dead awkward silence followed.

Sanju broke the silence “Sirjee, team ko naam du?”

Karan slowly turns to Sanju with zero expression on his face “ Haan dede bhai naam!” he spoke bitterly.

Sanju trying not to look at Karan answers “Sirjee, Team Grihasti.”


“To yeh ho gaye 2 teams. Ab 3 ri mein honge Cadet Siddharth and Bala. Unke sath honge …” Karan stops and he suddenly realizes its only him who is remaining and he has to team up with Sid and Bala.

And exact same realization Sid and Bala had.

“Sid Bhaijee, gaye bara ke bhaav! Karan sir ke sath undercover! “

“Chill Bala jee bro, koi baat nei”

“Arey aap samajh nei rahe hai, bich me jo Karan Sirjee thode insano wale mood me hote the na ab wo nei rahe. Jab se wo aur Doctor madam, apko pata hai na. Tab se thoda Karan sir ka screw… “Bala made a hand gesture of unscrewing the nut.

“Bala” Karan calls out.

“Jee… Jee Sirjee”

“Kya chal raha hai tum dono ka? Koi problem hai mere sath team up hone me”

“Nahi… Nahi” Stammers Bala.

“Good, aur ho bhi to kisi ko farak nei padata. Deal with it!”

At that moment Sid realizes what Bala was trying to say. He slowly turns to Monu and says “Bro, pange tu leti hai bhugatana hume padata hai!”

Faizi : Karan tum tino ka kya background hoga?

Karan : We need to be someone jin par drug dealers ko shak ho. I want them to take a note of us, hum pe nazar rakhe. And react kare. Wahi unki galati hogi to react jisko pakad ke hum aage plan kar sake.

Faizi : To tum logonko aise koi banana hoga jo out of place ho matlab kisiko bhi shak ho ke tum log ye jagah afford nei kar sakte to aye kaha se.

Karan :Yes, Humein dekh ke lage ki jaroor kuchc hori chakari karake paise kamake yaha aye hai.

Faizi : Yes, tum tino ko aise banna hoga jaise…. Jaise….

Bala : Ekum chhichhore….

Bala blurts without thinking. Then realizes what he said.

Karan : Actually yes. That’s the word. Chhichhore!

Sid : Whooaaaa! Wait a minute what’s chin chore?

Bala : Arey Chin Chore nei Chhichhore.. matlab ekdum tapori types!

Sid : Bro how can we be tapori types!

Bala : Aap tension na lo Sid Bhaijee Karan Sirjee! Apun ne to akkha jindagi Taporigiri me kaaati hai. Apun sikha dega!

Karan closes his eyes, secretly asking god for patience to go through next few days.

“Thike hai to the rahi apni teesri team”

He looks as Sanju, raising his eyebrows. He was waiting for team name. Sanju hesitantly says “ Sirjee naam to hai lekin wo aap.. “

“Sanju, bata naam”

“Sirjee, Team Jhingoor!”

Cadets suppresses giggles.

Faizi : Wah ise kehta hai Duniya gol ha.

Remembering the days when they used to call the cadets Namune, Jhingoor.

Ignoring Faizi’s jab , Karanc ontinues ,”Well I deserve this, tujhe Titli banaya na mene! Ab teams hai, unke naam hai! We need homework for each team. I want each team to work together to build a profile for each other. Tomorrow would be last day to prep and day after tomorrow we will go to resort Unwind. Am I clear?”

“Yes, sir”

“Good, dismiss!”

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While everyone going towards their room Karan sees Monu standing alone tying her shoelaces. He waits for everyone to clear and then approaches her. He needed to talk to her, ask for explanation. But explanation to what? He thought, he knew she was right. But still he wanted to question her, argue with her. Because this was the only reason, he could talk to her. Lately they haven’t been talking at all ,apart from drills. And it was eating him! He just wanted any stupid reason to talk to her.

“Monami” he calls her out.

Standing straight she answers “Yes”

Karan approaches her like a bomb defusal squad approaches bomb. He looks left right making sure nobody is listening.


“Tumne aise kyu kaha?” trying to sound relaxed.

“Mene kaise kya kaha Karan?”, Confused Monu asked.

“Hume team ke liye bus family chahie thi! Koi shadi shuda joda nei. And family me aur bhi to relation hote hai. Jaise bhai behen! You three could be siblings” Karan tried to justify his point.

“Karan what’s wrong with you! Hume ek family chahie, complete. Husband wife wali. Which would be more convincing!”

“Haan hai wo hai but…” , Karan trying to fall back.

“But what? Koi problem hai tumhe agar me Faizi ki biwi banu? “

Monu asked with such authority that Karan couldn’t even utter a word. He just stood there searching for some counter argument.

“Wo tum aise Biwi types…. “

“Kyu me biwi nei lag sakti? Ya phir me acchi biwi nei lag sakti?”

“Mene… mene aise to nei kaha. But tumhe Faizi ki biwi banana hi kyu hai , behen kyu nei”, Karana asks innocently.

“Koi problem hai tumhe agar me Faizi ki biwi banu?”

“Tumhe Faizi ki Biwi banana hai?” Karan asked frowning.

“What? What are you saying Karan?”

“Mein? Mein thodi bol raha hoo. Tum hi bol rei ho Koi problem hai tumhe agar me Faizi ki biwi banu”

Monu places her hand on hips,” Karan! Mujhe ek reason do ke mein Faizi ki biwi na banu?”

Karan searching hard for answer ,but he knew her story was more convincing than his “Behen” story.

“Karan, kahi tum ye to nahi chahte ke jhooth mooth hi sahi me kisi aur ki biwi na banu?”

With no answer to give back Karan just stares into Monu’s eyes. For a second Monu wished Karan would say yes. Tell her that is hurts him to even think her to be someone else’s, even in story. Tell her that she would be only his wife! But she knew, no matter what she thinks, or he thinks he is never going to say this.

“Mein? Mein kyu aise sochunga! Wo to bus mujhe janana tha ke why you thought ke behen nei biwi banna chahie tumhe", Karan finally accepting his defeat.

“Karan tumhe Faizi ne option diya tha na team switch karne ka. To tumne kyu nei kiya agar tumhe itni hi problem hai mere Faizi ki wife banne se”

“Ohh hello! Mujhe koi problem nei hai! Aur mene team isi liye nei badali kyunki agar me team badal leta to phir mujhe tumhara husband banana padata na”, Karan says without even thinking.

Monu throws her hands into air “To tumhe mera husband banane se problem hai! Jhooth me bhi!”

Karan grabs his head “Arey yaar Monami tum kaha ki baat kaha leke ja rei ho! Isi liye isi liye mein nahi chahata tha ke hum ek hi team me ho! Agar hum ek hi team me honge na to yehi baatein karate rahenge!”

“Haan to thik hai na, nahi hai na hum ek team me! To kyu rok ke baatein shuru ki tumne?”

“Right! You are right! Mein hi bewakoof tha jisne tumse baat ki!”

“Okay!!!! Fina Mr. Khadoos Bewakoof! Tumhe mujhse baat karne se bewakoofi mehsoos hoti hai to karte kyu ho baat? I am glad we are not in one team. Aur dekhna hamare team hi dhundke nikalegi wo Ghanshankar ko!”

“Oh yeah? We will see!”

“We will see!”

With total irritation they went to opposite way.

Unaware to them, Sid was watching all this from behind the pillar. And Faizi from opposite side pillar. When Monu and Karan went separate way, they both looked at each other.

“Kya Siddharth apne best friend ko jhagadte dekh rahe ho rokna chahie tha na”

“Sir I am really sorry to say but apka friend bhi pyar bhari baatein nahi kar raha tha meri friend se”

“Wo bhi sahi hai! Mujhe accha nei lagata jab yeh aise jhadagate hai.”

“Mujhe bhi”

In silence they look at each other. And then an evil smile appears on both of their faces.

“But Sir, maza bhi bohot ata hai”

Faizi smiles “Humein bhi! Kaise Tom and Jerry ke jaise jhagadte hai”

“Saaf dikhai deta hai how much they love and miss each other”

“Wo to dono jald hi jaan jaenge ke wo to ek dusre se dur reh hi nei sakte”

“Tab tak hum log inke jhagadte enjoy kar lete hai”

Sid raises his hand for the high-five. Faizi was about to but then he realizes, he is trainer and Sid is cadet.

“Cadet Ganju! Bohot ho gaya timepass. Ab mission pe dhyan de”

Reluctantly Sid drops his hand.

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This chapter was hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing 😂. Amazing

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Originally posted by: iAmSphere

This chapter was hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing 😂. Amazing


Thankkkksss..

I am missing old Khadoos-Rani Sahiba..... crossing each other... Taking Punga with each other...

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Pleas3 update soon ....cant wait fir the next one

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Monu Faizi ki Biwi


Sounds interesting 😆


Ab maza aayega 🤣


Loved this 🤗

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Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Monu Faizi ki Biwi


Sounds interesting 😆


Ab maza aayega 🤣


Loved this 🤗


aage aage dekho kya hota hai!!!!!!!!

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