beauty and the beast karvi ff continue part 36 updated

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Aparikshita
amazing one...
N pls at least try to complete this one...
Continue soon...

Thanks dear... Dont worry i will complete it thats y i continue the story

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Part 10 :

Next morning

Kartik calls survi

Survi : hello

Kartik : so miss survi mohiday abhi k abhi mere ghr puhncho

Survi:kartik lakin mn wo ...

Kartik : wo kia ?? Bola na abhi matlab abhi

Scene 2 :

Survi goes to barway mention

N ask about kartik shanti told he is in room survi goes to his room n call him kartik hear her voice as he was taking bath smrik n call her

Kartik: survi bed p towel para hai mujhe la k do

Survi : ok

As she is giving him towel he pull her in n pin her to the wall n open the shower survi is all wet n kartik is shirt less comes close to survi n wisper

Kartik : so man gai tm meri bat samjhdar ya youn kaho chalak shatir to bachpan s the tm

Survi :kun kar rahe hn ap mere sath asa kitni bar bola hai mn jhoot nai bol rahi kartik cries survi tries to go kartik hold her hand

Survi : janay dijiye mujhe kartik mera hath choriye

Kartik did not leave survi slap him hard n tries to leave kartik angerly

Hold her from hairs n pull her closer n kiss her by force survi tries to free herself bt kartik hold her waist tightly n then make her face to wall open the dori of her blouse n kiss her on neck n suck a drop of water from her back survi cant tolrate any more she pushed kartik n leave from there kartik smrik

Survi leaves for her home n get shrikant's call as he is in amairkot for his health survi ask about his health n disconnect the call

Kartik calls survi bt she didnot attend the call kartik annoyed n left for her home here survi is crying kartik knock the door bt she didnt open so he come in from window n saw survi crying survi saw him n shocked n wipes her tears n about to go kartik holds her hand n pull her n comes close to her n say

Kartik : ab kun sharam a rahi hai tmhn kun ro rahi ho us wakt nai rona aya jb mujhe dhoka dia tm n hmmm kia bigara tha mn n tmhara ??

Survi :mn n kuch nai kia kartik ap yakeen kun nai kartay mera

Tear flow through her eyes kartik bang on wall n left the spot

Survi sit n cries simaran n karna comes n console her

Simran : survi plz mat ro kuch nai hoga

Survi : sb kuch meri waja s hua hai mn n faisla kar lia hai mn hi nai rahon ge jb tb ab theek ho jaye ga

she run from there n cut her vain

Here lata comes to her senses n tell kartik survi is not responsible for her state Kartik is shocked

Precape : kartik calls survi she didn't pick call he again calls simran attend the call n blame kartik for her state kartik is in teary eyes

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Aparikshita

@Aparikshita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

awesome update...
Though karvi scenes were really hot...but still
Kartik as usual man handling her...
I want him to pay...because in serial he always makes me angry by torturing survi again n again...but in ur story i would love to see katik pay for whatever he did to her...n of course would love to know what u have thought ahead for them...so,continue soon...

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Aparikshita
awesome update...
Though karvi scenes were really hot...but still
Kartik as usual man handling her...
I want him to pay...because in serial he always makes me angry by torturing survi again n again...but in ur story i would love to see katik pay for whatever he did to her...n of course would love to know what u have thought ahead for them...so,continue soon...

Thanks a lot for ur such comment ... Yup i will try to post as soon as possible

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Part 11:

Scene 1 :

Survi cut her vain blood flow n survi faints simran n karan rush to survi n take her to hospital

Here kartik comes to know about survi's innocence N call her bt she didnot attend the call n at last simran pick the call

Kartik : hello survi kahan ho tm mujhe tm s abhi milna hai ... Buht urgent hai survi plz

Simran : nai mil sakti wo tmhn kartik Itna tourcher kia tm n use itna k aj wo zindgi r mout k beech mn lar rahi hai r ek bat kan khol k sun lo meri behn s koi wasta nai hai tmhara suna aj k bat fone mat karna

Kartik : kia hua hai survi ko simran plz batao mujhe kahan hai wo

Simran : nas kat li hai us n apni tmhare is tourcher s mout zyada qsan lage use hm hospital mn hn city hospital

Kartik rush to the hospital while driving he remembered all his moments with her n tear flows through his eyes

Kartik : nai survi tmhn kuch nai ho sakta mn a raha hn tmhare pass bs tm himat mat harna he drive fast n reaches the hospital

Kartik : kahn hai survi simran mujhe milna hai use abhi isi waqt simran : tum kun aye ho yehn han meri behn ki mout ka tamasha dekhnay marnay b aram s nai do gaye kia aj us ki yeh halat tmhari waja a hai use koi zarorat nai use milnay ki chalay jao yehn s

Kartik pleads to simran to meet him once

Kartik :sirf ek dafa milnay do mujhe use sirf ek dafa i promise sb thik kar don ga main

Simran : operation theater mn hai wo doc n abhi kuch bataya nai Kartik pray to bappa

Doctor comes n said survi's condition is criticle her mind is not responding its looks like she didnt want to revover she is alive only on machines

Kartik : wo theek ho ge use theek hona hi hoga mere liye agr use kuch hogaya to mn khud ko kabhi maff nai kar paon ga doc kia mn use mil sakta hn

Doc : yes ofcource bt be carefull us p kisi kisam ka pressure na aye

Kartik : thank u doc

Kartik simran n karan rushes to the room kartik ask them to leave him n survi alone for some time

As they were alone kartik holds survi's hand said

Kartik : survi i m so sorry really sorry survi please mat karo asa apnay sath kaka k bare mn socho un ka kia hoga tmhn theek hona hi hoga apnay liye na sai kaka k liye r mere... Then stops bt then said mere liye aj kuch batana chahta hn mn tmhn survi kartik lay down with survi He kissed her on forhead then cheeks n then on lips n then said i love u survi...

After some times doc comes n check survi n said her brain response its a miricle

Kartik simran n karan was very happy kartik ask about shrikant n simran said he is in amerkot kartik tells dont tell him where is survi he is taking her for sometime with him trust me she will bw fine simran nod kartik took her to his form house without informing any one n make arrangements there

Kartik comes to the room survi is on bed in unconscious state kartik took out vine bottle

Kartik : survi is halat mn meri waja s ho na ab mere liye uthna hoga tmhn survi to tm nai uthoge na thik hai mn b tb tk sharab pion ga jb tk tm nai rokti mujhe survi aj ya to kartik marega ga sharab p p k ya simmy survi kartik ki survi ban k jage ge

Kartik start drinking after 3 glass he saw moment in survi's hand then rish to her

Survi opens her eyes saw kartik n turn her face kartik was very happy as he got his world back

Kartik : Pata tha mujhe tm jago ge meri survi jage ge mout a lark wapas aye ge apnay kartik k liye kartik turn her face n put her hairs back of the ear

Kartik: tmhn kia laga k tum a k bolo he mn simmy hn to mn pehchanon ga nai tmhn

survi again turn her face

Kartik: naraz ho mujh s hona b chahiye kam jo asa kia hai mn n itna tourcher kia tmhn mn n

Survi doesn't reply

Kartik : survi plz mere kiye ki saza khud ko mat do apnay bare mn nai to kaka k bare mn socho tear flow from her eyes

Precape : survi reaches her home simran saw her in bad state

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Guys plz give me feedback how is story going ??? Should i continue or wrap up ??

Part12:

Scene 1:

Epi start where it left as kartik is apologize to survi n survi again turn her face

Kartik: survi tm ek ehsas ho mere ander jb b tm mere as pas hoti hona tb i feel ur presence r jb tm nai hoti na mn adora ho jata hn 8 saal is adhoraypan k sath guzare hn mn n tmhare baghair sach to yeh hai na survi k mn tmhare baghair nai reh sakta wo ghusa r us ghusay mn mn n jo jo sb kia wo ghusa nai tha piyar tha survi mn tum s buht buht nai buht b chota word hai is duniya s zyada har cheez s zyada piyar karta hn tm s mn while holding her hanf

Then kartik start taking care of survi n survi start to recover slowly

one night kartik was setting beside survi n taking care of her n then after she slept he also sleep in siting position with survi as he wake up in the morning he doesn't find survi n search for her when ge doesn't find her he calls simran

Kartik: hello simran wo survi ai kia ghr p

Simran brust

Simran : kia survi tmhare sath the r ab wo kahan hai dekho mr.barway agr meri behn ko kuch b hua to mn jan le lon ge tmhare

As she was talking n end up the call she heard some noice she turn n find survi in bad condition reached home simran rush to her n make her lay on bed n said

Simran survi tm yehn is halat mn kase ai wahn thik the na tum kartik dhayan ti rakh raha tha na tmhara ? Ase baghair bataye kun ai tm han pata hai kitna pareshan hai kartik mn abhi use call kar k ati hn r batati hn

Survi holds her hand n said

Survi :nai simran unhn mat batana k mn yehn ai hn wo phr s mujhe apnay sath le jain gaye r agr wo mere samnay rahe r sath rahe na to mn apni feelings nai chupa paon ge un s mn khatam kar chuki hn un k liye jo mere dil mn piyar tha r baki sb kuch b bari mushkil s sambhala hai khud ko agr wo ase kareeb rahain gaye na to kahin phr s mn kamzoor na par jaon un k samnay mar chuki hai wo purani kamzor survi isly mn n faisla kia hai mn baba k pass chali jaon ge hamesha k liye r kabhi yehn nai laot k aoun ge kal subha hi train hai

Simran hug survi n say as u wish

Next morning

Karan comes to know about survi's decision n inform to kartik kartik shocked n tear flow from his eyes n cries

Kartik : kho dia mn n apni survi ko hamesha k liye kahan s laon apni survi ko wapas kase kia karon nai kuch b hojaye kuch b karna paray mn survi ko apna s door nai janay don ga wo ase dard mn tarapta chor k nai ja sakti

Kartik rushes to station to stop survi search for her on station n finally spot her n goes to her survi is about to step in train kartik holds hand n pull her close

Kartik : ja rahi ho survi mujhe chor k ?

Survi: hn

Kartik : mat jao survi janay dijiye mujhe yahi sahi hai push kartik n step in train

Then he sees survi she was crying there and he was heartbroken..seeing this...!! He went to her she was looking at another side and when she looked that side she saw kartik!!! She wiped her tears and said survi : what the hell r u doing here?? Plz meri zindagi se door chalay jaiya plz!!

Then she fumes in anger

she is about to leave just then kartik pulls her dupatta and she falls on him...

survi: yeh kya batameezi hai...yeh aap kya ker rahey hai...??

Kartik: bohat dard dia hai na meinay tumhe ab tum mujhe dard do...

survi: mujhe na hi shock hay kisiko dard denay ka aur na hi mein kisiko dard dongi...mein bus ap se yehi kehna chahti hoon kay aap meri zindagi se duur chaley jayiya plzz...!!

Kartik cups her face

Kartik : bohat saalon baad mujhe meri zindagi meri survi milli hai tumhe mein kaisay janay doon...mujhe pata hai meinay tumhe bohat takleef di hai per tumhe takleef dey ker mujhe ussey ziada takleef hoti thee...!! She pushes him away and says survi : yeh drama plz band kijiye...then she says Kay agar apney mujhe takleef di toh jab mein mer rahi thee apney kyun mujhe bachaya???

Precape : kartik through survi on bed Survi is in bridal entire

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Aparikshita

@Aparikshita

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

wow...yaar,i loved it...
Kya update tha...bilkul dhamakedar...
I wanna confess something to u...
Well,i was a silent reader of ur ff(beauty and the beast)...
I was a huge fan of this ff...
At that time i loved ur ff the most in this forum...
Trust me,when u stopped updating i simply got a heart attack...don't worry, bada nahi chota wala tha...isiliye to jinda hu...
Waise, i can't express how much happy i'm right now...
Is forum pe kisibhi writer apni story ki anzam nahi diya...i mean pura nahi kia...
But i have my full faith in u that u r surely gonna complete it...
So,for that...take a big'' THANK U '' in advance...
So,let's come to the ff...survi couldn't bear more so she took such a drastic step...
Oh no!!survi...
N after knowing the truth n survi's suicide attempt kartik went to hospital n took care of survi like a good hubby...oops,future good hubby,right?par kya hena k hubby banne me kitna wakt lagta hai?tumhare agle update me to hubby ban hi jayegana...
N so,survi decided to leave him,hmm...very good decision...go,girl...i'm with u...
Kartya u deseve this...chalo ab vugto...aur kyaaa precap tha yaar...kya survi ne usa maf kardiya hai...itni asanise...oh no...sare arman kahi panime to nahi behgaye...kartya ko tadpaneka...hmm...
But passionate precap tha yaar...kartyane survi ko bed pe feq diya...kartya naughty boy...itni jaldi hain tumko...agar uski kamar lachak gayito,batao...aur waisa bhi hamara kartyase to kabhi control nahi hota...kartik bhawra haina isiliye...
Continue soon...will be waiting for the next one...

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Aparikshita
wow...yaar,i loved it...
Kya update tha...bilkul dhamakedar...
I wanna confess something to u...
Well,i was a silent reader of ur ff(beauty and the beast)...
I was a huge fan of this ff...
At that time i loved ur ff the most in this forum...
Trust me,when u stopped updating i simply got a heart attack...don't worry, bada nahi chota wala tha...isiliye to jinda hu...
Waise, i can't express how much happy i'm right now...
Is forum pe kisibhi writer apni story ki anzam nahi diya...i mean pura nahi kia...
But i have my full faith in u that u r surely gonna complete it...
So,for that...take a big'' THANK U '' in advance...
So,let's come to the ff...survi couldn't bear more so she took such a drastic step...
Oh no!!survi...
N after knowing the truth n survi's suicide attempt kartik went to hospital n took care of survi like a good hubby...oops,future good hubby,right?par kya hena k hubby banne me kitna wakt lagta hai?tumhare agle update me to hubby ban hi jayegana...
N so,survi decided to leave him,hmm...very good decision...go,girl...i'm with u...
Kartya u deseve this...chalo ab vugto...aur kyaaa precap tha yaar...kya survi ne usa maf kardiya hai...itni asanise...oh no...sare arman kahi panime to nahi behgaye...kartya ko tadpaneka...hmm...
But passionate precap tha yaar...kartyane survi ko bed pe feq diya...kartya naughty boy...itni jaldi hain tumko...agar uski kamar lachak gayito,batao...aur waisa bhi hamara kartyase to kabhi control nahi hota...kartik bhawra haina isiliye...
Continue soon...will be waiting for the next one...

Awww thank u sooo much dear ... U dont know how is i m happy after reading ur such a pleasent comment thanks a alot 😊😃 yeah u dont worry i will leave this story when its end lols ...😉 Hehhehe lets see what survi does hahhaha yeah kartik always has harmonal problem when survivis arround him 😆😉

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aimmyangle

@aimmyangle

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Part 13:

She pushes him away and says survi :yeh drama plz band kijiye... Kay agar apney mujhe takleef di toh jab mein mer rahi thee apney kyun mujhe bachaya??? Hmmmnn kyun apney mujhe bachaya jab mein doob rahi thee kyun apney mujhe bachaya jab woh aadmi meray ssath ziati ker raha tha kyun aap mujhe tab ziada torture kertay they jab aap mujhe karan Kay saath dekhtay thay...aur uss din jab meinay suicide kera tha tab aap kyun mera paas aye...?? Aur apney mujhe yeh kiss bhi ki the na sirf or sirf mujhe torture kernay Kay liyay kiya na...?? Bataiye kyun nahi apney marney diya mujhe?? Meray mernay se shahid aapko sukoon mill jata... Na ap mujhe chain s jeenay detay hn jeenay k kabil to chora hi nai na ap n mujhe r na chain s marnaye detay hn kun ???

Kartik fumes in anger n said

Kartik : bcz i love u survi...

Survi : jhoot ..phr jhoot bol rahe hn na ap Kun k ab ap ki adat ban chuki hai jhuut bolnay ki jb dekho jhoot boltay hn piyar kartay hn na to piyar mn dard nai dia jata r kia proof hai ap k pass k ap mujh s piyar kartay hain hai koi saboot wase b ap jis survi s piyar kartay the na us ko to kho chukay h ap mn ap ko nai janti plz mujhe mere rastay p janay dijiye ...

She left from there kartik angerly holds her wrist carries survi forcefully n took her to some room n ask a lady to make her ready forcefully after some times lady take survi out as her hands n mouth is bind kartik is memorized to see her he went near her n make her wear a chunny n say

Kartik : yeh hui na kartik ki perfect dulhan n smrik

He forcefully carries her in his arm n take her to temple

Kartik: survi.. agr tm n koi b smartness dekhanay ki koshish ki na to mn shrikant kaka ko

bata don ga tumhare r mere ... N put her hairs behind ear n smiles survi fumes in anger

Now wedding starts kartik does every ritual with survi n finally parist announced u both are husband wife survi tries to escape kartik Carries her furiously n through her on bed

Kartik: saboot chahiye tha na mere piyar ka yeh lo while holding her manglesuter

Door jana chahti the na mujh s ab ja k dekhao yeh sindood r manglesuter tmhn mujh s bandhay ga

comes close to survi

Survi is happy by heart

Kartik :pati hn mn tmhara ab haq hai mera tm p ja k dikhao zara mujh s door tm p haq sirf r sirf mera na kabhi yeh haq kisi r ka tha r na hi mn kisi r ka hoany deta mn pahle mn n force kia tha tmhn lakin aj nai karon ga kun k yehn mere piyar ka imtehan ata hai tmhara intzar to sadion tk kar sakta hn mn bs sirf apnay s door nai janay de sakta tha mn survi kun k sansain de hai tm n is bejan shareer ko

survi is about to leave kartik hugs her from back kiss her on neck

Kartik : kase aye ga tmhn mujh p yaqeen survi han?

turn survi toward her n cup her face

Kartik : piyar to bachpan s karta tha tum s survi bs smjh nai paya use i m soo sorry survi

Survi doesn't utter a word

Kartik : Survi tmhn bilkul nai farq parta mere kareeb anay s mere pass anay s

N kiss her on cheeks

survi's eyes below n still doent utter a word

N about to kiss her then stops

Kartik theek hai mat bolo kich take ur time survi jitna time choor mat jana

tear flow from his eyes kartik is about to leave survi holds his hand

Survi : kartik barway kabhi apna kam adhoora nai chorta to aj kun ??

Kartik turn n shocked

Kartik : is ka matlab hai k tum b ???

Survi nods

Kartik cant handle his happiness n hug survi n survi hugs him back precape : kartik hugs survi from back wishes good morning to her n kiss her near ear

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Aparikshita

@Aparikshita

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

loved it...loved it...loved i...
Yeh parhkar mera mood kuch jyadahi accha ho gya...too good...this was a rocking update...
Amazing one...
First of all...survi didn't wanted to return...n also in her angry avter...but kartik was in fully manaofy mood...wow...
Aur jab o bilkul nahi mani to kartik ne jor jabardasti usse shadi ki take o kabhi usa chorke na jaye...awe...par kartya aur koyi tarikha nahi tha kya tumhare paas usa rokneka...esa kon rokta hai yaar...apne family aur kaka k bagairhi shadi karli...
Oh! I got it...
U wanted privacy...
N wanted to manaofy survi with ur sexy moves n hotness...haa...
Aur yeh kya hua...angry survi kartya k hotness dekhkar bighal gayi...
I loved it...
U fulfilled my expectations...
Naughty kartya...
But i know tumne usa is tarah kyu manaya...
Because of,ur world famous hormonal locha...

Brilliant...
Continue soon...

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