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Posted: 8 years ago
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angry survi ,jealous kartik lovely update waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
u updated...wow...
It was awesome...

First part was really heart touching...survi expressed her feeling...awe...

& the outdoor meeting...kartiya ko hamesha romancehi sujta hain...ab romance wala meeting bhi karne laga...oops,jealoused masterniji...kartiya was like yahoo...

Tai n pyare...tai is surely gonna plan something...she didn't let kartiya announce...wicked lady...

Karan n survi dance...kya survi kya karti ho...kuch to rahem khao dance floor pe...because kartik was so angry that he could burn the floor that too with the heat of his anger...
"kiuki kartiya ke gusse me bipasha basu k jigar se bhi jyada aagh hain"
so,be careful...
N again,kartiya ka anderka I.H. is back...iska kuch nahi hosakta...
Knock knock...yeh kya kartiya k kushi se koun itna jalta hain jo uska accha khasa moment bigarne k lia chala aya...n hide n seek begins...
Kartiya tumko chupne k lia or koy jaga nahi mili kya...oh,i got it...tum room me romance kar karke pak gaye ho...now u wanna do shower romance...
Iska to kuch nahi ho sakta...

But u continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 19 :
Kartik romances survi then there ia knowk on the door kartik hides in bathroom n survi opens the door n its simi survi make excuses
Simmi : survi tu yehn kia kar rahi hai ?? Kitni tyarian hn neechay kal haldi hai na
Survi : mn wo mn wo simran yehn dress sai karnay ai the tm chalo mn ati hn
Simran : ok bt jaldi hn ...
Survi node
Kartik comes out from bathroom
Kartik : tyar rehna kal mere sath dance karnay k liye
Survi : ap k sath dance ... Na mujhe nai karna ap k sath dance wance
Kartik comes close to her : dance to mere sath hi karna hai tmhn survi : dekhtay hn kal kon kis k sath dance karta hai
Kartik : bet ??
Survi put her hand on his : bet
Then next day its haldi of simmran :..!!
So as survi is getting ready she is wearing a beautiful red and golden sari and is looking damn hot and pretty...kartik is wearing a sherwani of golden color...he is finding survi suddenly he hears some voice of bangles and goes to her room...from where the voice is coming...he walks in the room and is mesmerized to see her...!! :) she is unable to tie her blouse and is trying really hard she again and again puts her hair aside and tries to tie it but fails...just then kartik comes and ties it romantically and moves his hands around her stomach
kartik :u r looking dam hot and beautiful (naughtily) ;)
he kisses her neck
survi :kartik yeh ap kia kar rahe h control urself
kartik: jb b tum mere samany hoti ho na I'm unable to control myself ;)
and winks... Survi shys n then they went for haldi
In hall :
Kartik puts chits in bowl n smiles at survi ... Survi saw him n smiles back then game begins game is that someone open a chit n then there is a name of his partner for dance its turn of kartik he open a chit n its the name of survi
Kartik sits infront of survi n ask for dance survi happily Puts her hand in his n they dance romantically on awargi song
Kartik wispers in her ears i won the bet i make u dance with me n smiles
Survi saw him with confusion : ap n yeh ap n kia sb kartik kase ?
Kartik : ek chit p apna r tmhara name likha tha mn n use to apnay dil k pass rakha tha mn n r jase hi lights off hui mn n chit exchange kar li n winks
Survi blushes :ap bhe na kartik yeh to beimani hai
Kartik pull her close : piyar mn sb jaiz hota hai mere jan
N dance finshes n in the last they hug tightly eachother
Tai notice all their moments during dance
Tai to piyare
Tai : piyare tu n dekha na kartiya ko kase chipak chipak k dance kar raha tha survi k sath
Piyare : Hn sasu ma dekha mn n mujhe to kuch theek nai lagta kahi kartik r survi ek dusray s ???
Tai slap him
Tai : chup kar khabardar kuch b anab shanab bola tu n to jan le li ge main teri pata lagana parega k survi r kartik k beech chal kia raha hai... R agr kuch chal raha to is ko to mitana hoga yeh dono dariya k do kinary hn kabhi sath nai ho saktay mn kabhi nqi honay don ge inko sath
Here kartik calls survi but her mode is off he notice this n calls her to meet him survi denies n kartik insists
Precape : karvi on terrace kartik make survi laugh with his funny gesters n sits infront of her n gives her flowers tai saw this n shocked ...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Aparikshita

u updated...wow...
It was awesome...

First part was really heart touching...survi expressed her feeling...awe...

& the outdoor meeting...kartiya ko hamesha romancehi sujta hain...ab romance wala meeting bhi karne laga...oops,jealoused masterniji...kartiya was like yahoo...

Tai n pyare...tai is surely gonna plan something...she didn't let kartiya announce...wicked lady...

Karan n survi dance...kya survi kya karti ho...kuch to rahem khao dance floor pe...because kartik was so angry that he could burn the floor that too with the heat of his anger...
"kiuki kartiya ke gusse me bipasha basu k jigar se bhi jyada aagh hain"
so,be careful...
N again,kartiya ka anderka I.H. is back...iska kuch nahi hosakta...
Knock knock...yeh kya kartiya k kushi se koun itna jalta hain jo uska accha khasa moment bigarne k lia chala aya...n hide n seek begins...
Kartiya tumko chupne k lia or koy jaga nahi mili kya...oh,i got it...tum room me romance kar karke pak gaye ho...now u wanna do shower romance...
Iska to kuch nahi ho sakta...

But u continue soon...

Lols yeah kartiya ka kuch nai ho sakta bcz he ia mad nehind survi .. 😆😃Tai is tai she never changed
Lols bechara jb b romance karnay jata kuch na kuch ulta ho jata 😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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good one...
Looks like i'm late...
But as it said that better late than never...

Kartiya never gets enough of her...really...
Game...ha...kartiyane banji marhi li...karvi dance...awe...
"Kehte hain na asman ka chand kabhi bi chupay nahi chupta,aur e to phair bhi ishq hain"
Aur ase chipak chipak ke dance karoge to taiko to pata chalegahi na...
Tai-main un donoko kabhi ek nahi hone dongi...lol...
E dono ek ho chuke hain...jab ap kharate lekar so rahi thi...aur abto kisibhi din news asakti hain ek nayi mehman on the way hai...
Precap...kartiya rocked n tai shocked...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Aparikshita

good one...
Looks like i'm late...
But as it said that better late than never...

Kartiya never gets enough of her...really...
Game...ha...kartiyane banji marhi li...karvi dance...awe...
"Kehte hain na asman ka chand kabhi bi chupay nahi chupta,aur e to phair bhi ishq hain"
Aur ase chipak chipak ke dance karoge to taiko to pata chalegahi na...
Tai-main un donoko kabhi ek nahi hone dongi...lol...
E dono ek ho chuke hain...jab ap kharate lekar so rahi thi...aur abto kisibhi din news asakti hain ek nayi mehman on the way hai...
Precap...kartiya rocked n tai shocked...
Continue soon...

Hehheheh no no u r not late ... I was wi8ing for ur reply bt as i was bizy didn't give reply...
Yeh isq nahi asan bs itna smjh lijeye ek agg ka dariya hai r doob k jana hai lols kartiya to survi k ishq mn doba hua hai puri tarha s 😉
Hahhaha tai ko jhatka lage ga yeh sb pata laga to wo b 440 volt ka
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry guys i was not able to post as i was bizy today i will try to upload 2 episodes
Part 20 :
Epi start with survi recives kartik's call
Kartik : hello survi kahn ho tm kab s dhond raha hn tmhn r call b attend nai kar rahe the tm meri mujhe abhi milna hai tm s survi
Kia hua bolti kuch kun nai survi bolo na
Survi : kartik mn ap s bad mn bat karti hn n disconnect the call
Kartik is tensed
Kartik : survi ko kia hua abhi tk to theek the achanak itna pareshan kun lag rahi the ... Mujhe kuch karna parega smiles n leaves
At night
Survi is on bed n lost in thoughts suddenly she heard some noice of a toys she follow it bt as she is about to pick it . toy make more distance survi keeps following bt didn't get the toy as she was passing by tai's room tai notice her n start following her n hides behinds the pillars as she hide n comes out didn't find survi
Tai : chaila yeh survi kahan ek dam s ghayab ho gai ... Itni rat ko yeh kar kia rahi the Mere ko dekhna parega ...
She start searching survi
Here survi finally get the toy n dance with joy kartik comes from behind smiles at survi n closes the door survi heard sound of door closes as she turn she bump into kartik n screams aloud
Here tai heard the noice n follows here kartik puts hand on survi's mouth n survi is about to fall kartik holds her from waist n eyelock then kartik smiles seeing her N puts her hairs behind her ear survi comes back to her senses n distance herself from kartik n about to leave kartik holds her hand n hug her from back
Kartik : kia hua survi pareshan kun ho han ?? Kisi n kuch kaha kia ...
Survi : yeh sb ap n kia ??
Kartik smiles : hn tm call atand kar nai rahi the mere pass r koi rasta nai tha tmhn yehn lanay ka
Survi turns toward him : kun ??
Kartik : kun k tm pareshan the survi r main tmhn asay nai dekh sakata ... Cups her face .. Meri survi to mujhe hamesha hansti muskurati chahiye ase pareshan r roti dhoti nai .. Bolo na kia hua kun pareshan ho
Survi turns her face
Kartik : thik hai mat batao survi sb ki apni privacy hoti hai bt plz ase mat raho n he make her sit on bed n goes from there
Kartik : abhi ata hn ok ...
N comes after some times n gives chocolates to survi n plays funny tricks n make her dance survi smiles
Survi : kabhi chor k to nai jain gaye na mujhe
Kartik : nai survi nai kabhi b nai survi : mujhe ajeeb sa dar lag raha hai kartik k kahi ap r main phr s alag ...
Kartik : survi tmhare ilawa na meri zindgi mn koi hai r na hi kabhi koi a sakta sirf r sirf tm ho meri zindgi mn r tmhari jaga koi nai le sakta ...
kartik sits on her knees holding survi's hand n kisses on it survi smiles her tai saw them n shocked to see karvi such close kartik stands up n hug survi survi hugs him back tightly
Survi also saw tai n get teary eyes n has a flashback
Flashback :
Survi heared taiyare convo n tai swear if she come to know about karvi's affair so she will kill survi as kartik only belong to her he only her
Survi comes back to senses n hug kartik more tightly
Survi : vaada kiye mujh s chahe mn rahon ya na raho ap apni zindgi mn kabhi b wase dobara nai banain gaye jesay pahle the hamesha khush rahain gaye
Kartik breaks the hug
Kartik : survi kase batain kar rahi ho asa nai boltay tm mn tmhn kuch nai honay don ga tm hamesha mere sath r mere pass raho ge hamesha hamesha r hamesha
N hug her again survi hugs him back
Tai fumes in anger n leaves from there
In her room she through things piyare : are are sasu ma kia hua itna kun ghusa ho rahi kahin ap ko kartik survi k affair ka to pata nai laga gaya .. Yeh to hona tha sasu ma hm n ti dekhtay hi bol dia tha k ap to un ki shadi r chotay chotay bachon ki tyari kijey ab beth k
Tai slaps piyare hard
Tai : chup ek dam chup ... Nai choray ge main us survi ko ... Kartiya r survi is janam mn to milnay s rahe ... Tu dekh piyare main kase is survi ko kartiya ki zindgi s door utha k phenkti tu bs dekhta ja ...
Precape : karvi late night chating


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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
wow,u updated...
Brilliantly written...
Sorry,i was late...but what to do exams ne halat khrab karke rakkhi hain...i hate exams...n i wanna run somewhere...but i can't...as tabh to mein munni se bhi jyada badnaam ho jaungi...aur akela bhagne mein mazabhi nahi ata...
Aur to aur my father is not Amrish Puri jo mujhe kahenge "ja simran ja zile apni zindeghi"...
Aur papa kehbhide to bhi koi fayda nahi as i don't have any raj...poor me...u see...

That's why i chose to give exams n drop the idea of running away...
Again sorry,for being late...
Yvr forum me atehi ek hi sawal dimagme ati hain..."itna sannata kyu hain bhai"...par kya kare...


Well,i think yvr dekhne se jyada mein ise parhke khush hu...as i feel yvr=cid...har ros tai ka "kill kartik" plans mera "kill dill" halat kardeta hain...par khair...
Loved it...
So,survi heared taire(tai+pyare)convo...n tai is in her gabbar singh mood...oh no...ab kya hoga...
Loved karvi's sweet moments...but i'm missing angry bird kartiya n his passion...
Loved this part...but looks like the danger is on the way...

Continue soon...
Edited by Aparikshita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 21:
At late night
Survi is confused what she will wear for sangeet ..
Survi text kartik
Kartik is in deep sleep n awake from bell
Survi : abhi mujh s chat p milnay ao
Kartik : is wakt sb theek to hai na
Survi : hn sb theek hai bt mujhe abhi milna hai mujhe
Kartik : survi subha mil lena i promise subha uthtya hi milnay aon ga abhi sonay do baby plz
Survi : bola na abhi to abhi warna jao mn nai bat karti
Kartik : ok ok ata hn
Kartik reached on roof n saw bundle of clouths n shocked
Kartik : survi yeh kia hai
Survi : mujhe smjh nai a rahi mn subha kia pehnon plz help karo na kartik
Kartik : tm n itni rat ko islye bulaya mujhe yehn ?
Survi : hnnn
Kartik is angry
Survi hold him from collar
ab subha mn n tmhn takar jo deni hai kartik angerly jerks her hand n left
Survi is tensed ...
Sangeet
Survi is trying to cheer kartik up bt he ignores her
Survi does drama that she get hurt on food kartik runs toward her bt then understands n get more angery
Survi then went on date with a boy to make kartik jealous
On the road that boy start misbehaving with survi
Survi screams for kartik as that boy is about to touch a strong muscular arm holds his hand and its none other then kartik then he beat him like hell then he runs away from there. .
Kartik holds survi's hand n take her to a hut n jerk her angerly
Survi hugs kartik n Cries
Survi : pata tha mujhe mere kartik zaror ain gaye mujhe bachanay un k hotay hue un ki survi ko koihath lagaye asa ho nai sakta
Kartik is still angry with survi
He break the hug n gives her his coat survi take it bt still drooling kartik .. Survi tries to take the coat bt unable due to injuries on his arms kartik holds her hand n make her wear the coat bt his face is on other side survi cups his face
Survi : itnay naraz hn mujhe s ap kartik meri taraf dekhain gaye b nai ab ... I m sorry kartik
Kartik tries to go bt survi hugs him
Survi : kartik thora sa to time mila hai ek sath ise enjoy kartay hn na plz kartik
Kartik hugs her back
Kartik its ok survi
N they both sits holding eachother arms as survi is scared with darkness
Kartik make her sit n goes to bring food
After sometime police arrive n arrest survi
Shrikant , tai n piyare arrive with police tai calls survi characterless
Tai : aye shrikant dekh is ko jis beti p itna naz tha na tujhe wo shadi s pahle rang ralian mana rahi hai n told everything to shrikan about survi's n kartik's relationship ...
Shrikan : kia yeh sach hai survi survi : baba ek dafa kartik ko anay dijye plz
Tai laugh : kartiya to gaya survi tujhe kia lagta yeh sb us n tujh s piyar mn a k kia ...
Chaila buht bari bhool hai yeh teri survi kartiya n sb mere kehnay p kia
Survi : jhoot mat boliye tai kartik mujh s piyar kartay hn
Tai laugh : acha to phr kahan hai kartiya aya kun nai abhi tk han bol survi kahanhai kartiya ??
Nahi aye ga re wo nai aye ga wapas ab ... Us n to bs ek dafa tujhe istamal karna tha wo apna kam kar k chala gaya
Survi : shadi hui the meri kartik s pati hn wo mere
Tai : pati kon sa pati kahan ka pati hai koi saboot tere pass
Survi is shocked
Survi : baba kartik sb s bat karnay wale the hamare rishatay k bare mn baba mera yaqeen kijye
Shrikant : survi tai jo keh rahi hn kia wo sach hai tm r kartik
Survi unable to answer
shrikant slaps survi ... N get heart attack .. In hospital shrikant is dead ... Survi cries
Precape: suspence ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aparikshita

wow,u updated...
Brilliantly written...
Sorry,i was late...but what to do exams ne halat khrab karke rakkhi hain...i hate exams...n i wanna run somewhere...but i can't...as tabh to mein munni se bhi jyada badnaam ho jaungi...aur akela bhagne mein mazabhi nahi ata...
Aur to aur my father is not Amrish Puri jo mujhe kahenge "ja simran ja zile apni zindeghi"...
Aur papa kehbhide to bhi koi fayda nahi as i don't have any raj...poor me...u see...

That's why i chose to give exams n drop the idea of running away...
Again sorry,for being late...
Yvr forum me atehi ek hi sawal dimagme ati hain..."itna sannata kyu hain bhai"...par kya kare...


Well,i think yvr dekhne se jyada mein ise parhke khush hu...as i feel yvr=cid...har ros tai ka "kill kartik" plans mera "kill dill" halat kardeta hain...par khair...
Loved it...
So,survi heared taire(tai+pyare)convo...n tai is in her gabbar singh mood...oh no...ab kya hoga...
Loved karvi's sweet moments...but i'm missing angry bird kartiya n his passion...
Loved this part...but looks like the danger is on the way...

Continue soon...

Lols poor u.. Hahahhaha no raj in live n no father like a amreshpuri hahhahaha ... Bhagna b bekar hai tmhara islye is misibat ko hi jhelo exams
Hehhehe thanks alot dear

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