Marham Dard Par - A MishBir FF (Chp 18 - Page 12) - Page 6

Originally posted by: shalika

Had been a silent reader but cant stop myself from writing today.

Love your writing!! Just love it.. You bring out the emotions, the feelings so beautifully that I can feel those while reading the ff.

Will be waiting for the next update :)

ummm... wow. i don't have words. thank you so much! this is such a huge compliment.

i'm so very happy that you're enjoying the story! <3

Originally posted by: nishita23

Amazing story...you have described every emotion so beautifully..plz pm me

thank you so much! <3

Originally posted by: surabhi12345

This was just brilliant 👏. You are a super talented writer, I could see it happening as I read it. Thank you for sharing this beautiful writing with us. Your writing reminds me why reading books is always better than watching movies.

I wish the storyline on screen was even close to what you have penned but the creatives are not as talented as you.

Please do write again soon, I'm looking forward to what happened next and the eventual closure for Mishti and Abir in your story.

ummm... wowowow. i don't have words. seriously. this is such a huge, huge, huge compliment. i really am so overwhelmed by your kind words. thank you! it means a lot to me that you love this so much! <3

i hope we get something more mishbir 1.0 on screen too! it's high time now!

Originally posted by: nishita23

Awesome chapter... So beautifully written every thing.. Love it.. Continue soon

thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Hey, can we copy paste the airport wala scene in the show.... it was quite emotionally charged. Love your writing.

pls. airport pe kya hua tha? mujhe jaan'na hai bhai! why so much suspense? :/

thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: MishBirStruck

Wow I didn't knew that you are writing something

Amazing work dear

Really awesome

You write so well

Do continue soon 🤗🤗😘😘😘

thank you, love! i am so glad you're liking the story! :)

Originally posted by: priyavishu18

Nice Post dear....

Wat about the next part......

We want the Continuation and Mishbir Marriage..........

thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: nishita23

Wow.... U have written it so beautifully... Special the shayri... Love it..

thank you so much! <3

Originally posted by: Bananahammock

Started stalking your profile waiting for an update on ILYLTF and came across a few new stories that you've been writing. I don't follow this show or know anything about the plot, but if I squint very very hard I can almost imagine this is AR! Beautifully written!

Payal

Edit: please disregard the comment on ILYLTF. I've been trying to delete the comment but for the life of me can't figure out how to use this new IF 😔. If you know please do let me know!

Edited further: I have been looking for shows to watch now that my kids are finally starting daycare after the holidays. Do you recommend this Yeh Rishtey Hai Pyaar Ke or is there a show better than this I can start with?

Payal! HIIIIII!

I'm glad you read this and seemed to enjoy it! :)

Originally posted by: ruhi19

wow...its very awesome... pm me for nextupdates

thank you so much!