Mishbir OS - Your comfort matters the most - Page 2

Cute.

I could visualize it while reading. Was smiling throughout.

Awww. This was so amazing!! Abir is so very thoughtful and understanding and gods I loved him here!! Like... So freaking much! ❤❤

Even Mishti! She was just a doll. I adored her! 😍

Both these kids make me so happy and this OS was just the best!! <333

Originally posted by: swahidantli

Guys, because we have been really craving for Mishbir scenes, here's something that I tried. It's a short scene, do let me know if you like it. Also, criticism welcome!

“Yeh Ajeeb Ranjvansh kaha chala gaya? Khudke room se bhi bhag jata hain kya yeh” Mishti thinks to herself. She immediately picks up the phone and calls him “Abir, tum kaha ho?”

“Itna bhi dur nahi reh sakti mere se Angry Chorni. Bas main aa raha hu.” Abir replies.

“Jaldi aao, tumhare help chahiye.” She disconnects the phone.

“Tumne pukara aur hum chale aaye.” In two minutes Abir gets there singing weirdly. “Batao Mishti, kya help chahiye.”

“Ummmm.. woh… main.. who” Mishti is hesitant to speak up. She just keeps on looking at Abir.

“Mishti, sab thik hain? Kya hua?” Abir asks with concern reflecting in his eyes.

Mishti just looks at him. Her mind travels to what had happened just a few days back “Itna bhi awkward honeki jarurat nahi hain.” She remembers how at the mandir when the kids had thrown gulal, Abir had immediately lifted his hand to wipe it from her face only to take it down just to make sure she isn’t uncomfortable. “Mishti, yeh Abir hain, tera Ajeeb Ranjvansh” she smiled at that thought.

“Woh na mere blouse ki dori nikal gayi hain, tum bandh doge please?” she said it all in one breadth.

Abir was taken aback. He obviously had his eureka moment, but he did not want to make her feel uncomfortable. “Tumhe chahiye toh main ketu ya masi ko bula leta hu. Woh tumhari madat kar denge.”

“Abirrrrrrrrrr..” Saying so she pulled him in front of the mirror and put his hand on her back. “Bandh do na..” Abir was dumbstruck. The last time he felt this was at Ketki’s wedding when she had asked him if he trusted her. In his head however, he felt nice that Mishti has got the comfort with him. He knew a part of it was always there, but today, he was sure that they would build this together!

Mishti immediately stiffened as his fingers touched her back. He looked at her in the mirror and he could see she was nervous as hell. He held both strings with his fingers, careful that it doesn’t touch her back. While all he wanted to do was just run his fingers through her back and hug her tightly from behind, he knew that they would get to do it later and forever. Right now his priority was her comfort.

Mishti on the other hand, with a lot of courage opened her eyes to see her man! She had realized that Abir was consciously being careful. What she saw literally left her teary eyed. Abir had closed his eyes and was tying the doori to make sure, that she doesn’t have to be too nervous (obviously also because he shouldn’t let the situation go out of hand :P).

“Lo ho gaya!” His words brought her out of trance. “Abir, tumne aankhen kyu band kit hi?” A lone tear dropped from her eyes.

“Taki meri angry chorni ko apni aankhein na band karni pade!” pat came a reply.

Mishti din’t know what happened to her. She just turned, joined her lips with his and ran away leaving Abir stunned.

“Angry chorni, next time itni sharafat nahi dikhaunga!” Abir kept sulking. Deep inside he was happy about the progress that they had made and he knew that it was going to be there for keeps!

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Very very sweet, I could imagine it happening exactly this way

Both of them are so cute... Thanks for sharing this

Beautiful! How I wish to see this in the show:)

such a beautiful piece of writing..love it dear it so sweet as much as our mishbir❤️pls write more on them😃