OS: Because of you - Page 2

Lovely! Very nicely penned the emotions. Do write more!

Originally posted by: Dotslover22

Wow😍It's beautiful. Abir's emotions were so wonderfully described. BTW where from are you?

Thanks a lot dear.

I just wanted to write something about our understanding and sensitive couple

I'm from Bangladesh 😳

Originally posted by: Itsflora

Thanks a lot dear.

I just wanted to write something about our understanding and sensitive couple

I'm from Bangladesh 😳

Originally posted by: Gaurirane366

Beautiful os 😍💓

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: guy3

Lovely! Very nicely penned the emotions. Do write more!

Thanks dear.I wanted to write a lot but could not find the word,Specially for mishti.

Thank u for still liking it.

Will definitely try to write something more.

Originally posted by: vssdp

Plz next part soon

I can't wait now

Beautiful story

Mishti ko abir ka dard pata chal gaya, now let's see what mishti will do

Hey.updated already.

@bold.These two have some uncanny connection. They always get each other mind.

Originally posted by: Aanchal15

Its amazingly penned and I loved that you incorporated Mish’s signature 3 queries .. missing them in the show .. Mish is able to see through Abir’s strong and jovial facade that he puts on to hide the heart wrenching pain .. such a psyched connection.. waiting to read the next !!

Thank u,thank u for the detailed comment. 😳

Yay,as i already said,they are both mature,sensitive and understanding.

Kinda uncanny connection Between souls.

Originally posted by: Itsflora

Part TWO:

Abir turned back and there was the longest seconds of silence Between them.

Abir waited some few more moments expecting to hear their customary "kuch nehi,jao" and quirked his eyebrows as if waiting for that sentence only.

Gulping down her emotions,Mishti mumbled,

"U are totally drenched Abir.Come inside hurriedly.You can catch a cold too."

As soon as Abir opened his mouth to deny Mishti gave him the LOOK.

Mishti:Maine puch nehi rahi hu,bata rahi hu.Jaldi aao.

Abir meekly followed his angry chorni knowing very well her violent avatar.

Changed into a kurta-pajama of bade papa,abir came out of the bathroom to find Mishti in kitchen and approached her.

Hearing the footstep mishti turned back and scowled immediately.

Mishti: Abir.I told u to dry yourself unless u wanna get a damn cold. Are u a kid?Cant u even dry ur hair?

With a stern voice she added,"Just go back and get a fresh towel from the cabinet and get rid of the damp..... "

Abir:Jaa raha hu meri ma and raced back to the bathroom,too afraid of her scolding.

After some minutes,abir came to the kitchen massaging his head way too vigorously with towel to ensure it was clean of any dampness and found mishti pouring hot chocolate in two mugs.

"She is just like a flower." Thought an enthralled Abir.

"Fresh,Newly bloomed,full of purity,few dew drops here and there...wait a minute.drops!water!”

Abir looked closer to find out water dripping from her long hair wetting her changed new dress again .

Exhassperated,Abir exclaimed loudly," mishtiiii!",grabbed her close and started wiping her hair,the towel of his hand in action again.

Startled out of her wit,Mishti's hold on the mug's rim tightened.This sudden invasion of her man in her very personal territory shook something inside her.

Totally unaware of her condition,Abir went on ranting.

Abir: What's this Mishti?U have been getting so hyper over my condition,what about u?Why u are always taking care of others?Take care of u too sometime.Whats all this ruthless behaviour?Jumping into fire,going inside a soon to be explosive car,fighting the goons even before guns.Pagal ho kya?Aur aab?now u are even doing things against ur own character.Maafi mangne chali gayi?aur kunal ko thikse jawab tak nehi de rahi ho,woh bhale bure kuch bhi keh de.areh Tum to apni courtship ka waqt mein bhi itni meek nehi thi.kyun kar rahi ho aisi harkate?kyu khudko vul rahi ho?

Mishti:Tumhara liye.

Abir almost missed that soft whisper with his continuous rant but one soft touch of mishti's hand on his hand stalled him.

Mishti loooked into his eyes and replied firmly again,

"Because of you.I'm doing everything Mishti never did because of you.

Because of you I said that sorry.I wanted to apologise to your mother and keep ur brother satisfied with that.I dont care if its kunal,munal or joynal.I dont care whom I'm bending to.I dont care if its related to kuhu,barsa aunty,bade ma or anyone of the world.Areh,I was not even interested in the whole kuku rishta.I just helped them coz u thought they are good together.

I only care because its related to u.I needed to ease the tension with ur family.I didnt want u to feel bad about ur family member's plight due to this party or worse,I dont want you to fight for me against them.

I know u are very much capable of that.I know MY ABIR that much.

Abir's eyes sparkled at that.

Mishti: kyunki baat tumhara hai Abir.jabtak baat tumhara hoga,maine aise hi aag main,dariyo main kya toofan main jump karne wali ho.Tumhara violent Mishti hoo na?Mujhe bhi dekhna,kaise meri samne se tumhe kisi cheej se chot poucha ta hain.

Because of you I can do anything as I know u can do way much more beacuse of me.

Abir kyunki baat jab hamara hota hain,tab hum dono bas samne wale ko bare main soochta hoon.Now dont u even think of denying that.Its a fact. Well established one actually.

Watching Abir gone mute,Mishti smiled a little and offered him the hot chocolate.

Abir took the mug,drank it,took his bag of wet clothes and rushed out.Just as he stepped on the thershold of Maheswari sadan,Mishti gripped his hand and said,

Mishti: Areh,ajeeb rajvaansh.Take the umbrella this time.wanna get drenched again?

As Abir tilt his head towards her,Mishti was blown away by the vulnerable look on his face.He looked like he could crumble down anytime.

The shayeer in him couldn’t do Justice to the storm of emotions inside his heart.

Believe it or not,Abir was never a greedy child.He learnt to share,to let go,to get even neglected since the very begining of his childhood.He knew he cant have the world at his service.

He had been bereft of everything over and over that it doesn’t even surprise him anymore.

All the time he had been asking his silly questions to mishti,it was just to get a signal.Something which allows him to the way of her heart.Something which ensure him that perhaps this time he can get something instead of nothing at all.

He wasnt expecting something way out of ordinary from the girl who is anything but ordinary.Abir just wanted a drop of her affection,he just wanted her to acknowledge his presence in her life,he just wanted to bask in her sunshine like warmth,he wanted to be a part of her soothing aura,he just wanted to get a space beside this shiny star of universe named Mishti.

But instead,she just declared him her universe.

With all the adoration of the world,Mishti crooned in a thick voice, "Abir!”

And the dam broke.

Abir Rajvaansh,not the happy go lucky guy abir but the 7 years old lonely,abandoned,ignored and forgotten boy named abir fiercely hugged his precious and burst into tears.Tears of years of longing,tears of separation,tears of all the blame-lie-betrayal game,tears of gratitude,tears of hope.

Tomorrow he will scold mishti about all the self destructive proclamations she uttered few moment before.

Tomorrow he will make sure nobody dare change his mishti.

Tomorrow he will make hundreds of poetry and woo mishti.

Tomorrow he will hold her hand and let his heart bare before her.

Tomorrow he will put his life on her mercy.

But,today the banjaara just cried in his home...

(Okay.I know Mishti said tumhara liye on today’s episode.But I got the idea the night before.My title say that!I'm dancing with my prediction power.

Pls do read & express ur view.😳)

Originally posted by: Itsflora

Part TWO:

Abir turned back and there was the longest seconds of silence Between them.

Abir waited some few more moments expecting to hear their customary "kuch nehi,jao" and quirked his eyebrows as if waiting for that sentence only.

Gulping down her emotions,Mishti mumbled,

"U are totally drenched Abir.Come inside hurriedly.You can catch a cold too."

As soon as Abir opened his mouth to deny Mishti gave him the LOOK.

Mishti:Maine puch nehi rahi hu,bata rahi hu.Jaldi aao.

Abir meekly followed his angry chorni knowing very well her violent avatar.

Changed into a kurta-pajama of bade papa,abir came out of the bathroom to find Mishti in kitchen and approached her.

Hearing the footstep mishti turned back and scowled immediately.

Mishti: Abir.I told u to dry yourself unless u wanna get a damn cold. Are u a kid?Cant u even dry ur hair?

With a stern voice she added,"Just go back and get a fresh towel from the cabinet and get rid of the damp..... "

Abir:Jaa raha hu meri ma and raced back to the bathroom,too afraid of her scolding.

After some minutes,abir came to the kitchen massaging his head way too vigorously with towel to ensure it was clean of any dampness and found mishti pouring hot chocolate in two mugs.

"She is just like a flower." Thought an enthralled Abir.

"Fresh,Newly bloomed,full of purity,few dew drops here and there...wait a minute.drops!water!”

Abir looked closer to find out water dripping from her long hair wetting her changed new dress again .

Exhassperated,Abir exclaimed loudly," mishtiiii!",grabbed her close and started wiping her hair,the towel of his hand in action again.

Startled out of her wit,Mishti's hold on the mug's rim tightened.This sudden invasion of her man in her very personal territory shook something inside her.

Totally unaware of her condition,Abir went on ranting.

Abir: What's this Mishti?U have been getting so hyper over my condition,what about u?Why u are always taking care of others?Take care of u too sometime.Whats all this ruthless behaviour?Jumping into fire,going inside a soon to be explosive car,fighting the goons even before guns.Pagal ho kya?Aur aab?now u are even doing things against ur own character.Maafi mangne chali gayi?aur kunal ko thikse jawab tak nehi de rahi ho,woh bhale bure kuch bhi keh de.areh Tum to apni courtship ka waqt mein bhi itni meek nehi thi.kyun kar rahi ho aisi harkate?kyu khudko vul rahi ho?

Mishti:Tumhara liye.

Abir almost missed that soft whisper with his continuous rant but one soft touch of mishti's hand on his hand stalled him.

Mishti loooked into his eyes and replied firmly again,

"Because of you.I'm doing everything Mishti never did because of you.

Because of you I said that sorry.I wanted to apologise to your mother and keep ur brother satisfied with that.I dont care if its kunal,munal or joynal.I dont care whom I'm bending to.I dont care if its related to kuhu,barsa aunty,bade ma or anyone of the world.Areh,I was not even interested in the whole kuku rishta.I just helped them coz u thought they are good together.

I only care because its related to u.I needed to ease the tension with ur family.I didnt want u to feel bad about ur family member's plight due to this party or worse,I dont want you to fight for me against them.

I know u are very much capable of that.I know MY ABIR that much.

Abir's eyes sparkled at that.

Mishti: kyunki baat tumhara hai Abir.jabtak baat tumhara hoga,maine aise hi aag main,dariyo main kya toofan main jump karne wali ho.Tumhara violent Mishti hoo na?Mujhe bhi dekhna,kaise meri samne se tumhe kisi cheej se chot poucha ta hain.

Because of you I can do anything as I know u can do way much more beacuse of me.

Abir kyunki baat jab hamara hota hain,tab hum dono bas samne wale ko bare main soochta hoon.Now dont u even think of denying that.Its a fact. Well established one actually.

Watching Abir gone mute,Mishti smiled a little and offered him the hot chocolate.

Abir took the mug,drank it,took his bag of wet clothes and rushed out.Just as he stepped on the thershold of Maheswari sadan,Mishti gripped his hand and said,

Mishti: Areh,ajeeb rajvaansh.Take the umbrella this time.wanna get drenched again?

As Abir tilt his head towards her,Mishti was blown away by the vulnerable look on his face.He looked like he could crumble down anytime.

The shayeer in him couldn’t do Justice to the storm of emotions inside his heart.

Believe it or not,Abir was never a greedy child.He learnt to share,to let go,to get even neglected since the very begining of his childhood.He knew he cant have the world at his service.

He had been bereft of everything over and over that it doesn’t even surprise him anymore.

All the time he had been asking his silly questions to mishti,it was just to get a signal.Something which allows him to the way of her heart.Something which ensure him that perhaps this time he can get something instead of nothing at all.

He wasnt expecting something way out of ordinary from the girl who is anything but ordinary.Abir just wanted a drop of her affection,he just wanted her to acknowledge his presence in her life,he just wanted to bask in her sunshine like warmth,he wanted to be a part of her soothing aura,he just wanted to get a space beside this shiny star of universe named Mishti.

But instead,she just declared him her universe.

With all the adoration of the world,Mishti crooned in a thick voice, "Abir!”

And the dam broke.

Abir Rajvaansh,not the happy go lucky guy abir but the 7 years old lonely,abandoned,ignored and forgotten boy named abir fiercely hugged his precious and burst into tears.Tears of years of longing,tears of separation,tears of all the blame-lie-betrayal game,tears of gratitude,tears of hope.

Tomorrow he will scold mishti about all the self destructive proclamations she uttered few moment before.

Tomorrow he will make sure nobody dare change his mishti.

Tomorrow he will make hundreds of poetry and woo mishti.

Tomorrow he will hold her hand and let his heart bare before her.

Tomorrow he will put his life on her mercy.

But,today the banjaara just cried in his home...

(Okay.I know Mishti said tumhara liye on today’s episode.But I got the idea the night before.My title say that!I'm dancing with my prediction power.

Pls do read & express ur view.😳)

I am speechless this is beautiful. I don't have words to appreciate your writing.

Originally posted by: fangirl1012

I am speechless this is beautiful. I don't have words to appreciate your writing.

Aweee!Thanks for commenting.

Coming that from you is big 😳

I follow your analysis most of the time.I really love ur perception.

Also the dedication for the episodes and all the beautiful quotes are just superb.