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Posted: 6 years ago
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Dammmmnnnnnn!

Girl, are you sure you dont do literature. Cause this sure as hell read like damn fine literature....

"he just wanted to bask in her sunshine like warmth,he wanted to be a part of her soothing aura,he just wanted to get a space beside this shiny star of universe named Mishti.

But instead,she just declared him her universe."

THIS IS MASTERPIECE. CLASSIC!

Tears of years of longing,tears of separation,tears of all the blame-lie-betrayal game,tears of gratitude,tears of hope.

Tomorrow he will scold mishti about all the self destructive proclamations she uttered few moment before.

Tomorrow he will make sure nobody dare change his mishti.

Tomorrow he will make hundreds of poetry and woo mishti.

Tomorrow he will hold her hand and let his heart bare before her.

Tomorrow he will put his life on her mercy.

But,today the banjaara just cried in his home...

Lemme just go and cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 this was beyond amazing.... I don't know what else to say...

Dammmnnn. I am going to read this again and again.

Well done!!! And thank you!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: mridhu

Dammmmnnnnnn!

Girl, are you sure you dont do literature. Cause this sure as hell read like damn fine literature....

"he just wanted to bask in her sunshine like warmth,he wanted to be a part of her soothing aura,he just wanted to get a space beside this shiny star of universe named Mishti.

But instead,she just declared him her universe."

THIS IS MASTERPIECE. CLASSIC!

Tears of years of longing,tears of separation,tears of all the blame-lie-betrayal game,tears of gratitude,tears of hope.

Tomorrow he will scold mishti about all the self destructive proclamations she uttered few moment before.

Tomorrow he will make sure nobody dare change his mishti.

Tomorrow he will make hundreds of poetry and woo mishti.

Tomorrow he will hold her hand and let his heart bare before her.

Tomorrow he will put his life on her mercy.

But,today the banjaara just cried in his home...

Lemme just go and cry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 this was beyond amazing.... I don't know what else to say...

Dammmnnn. I am going to read this again and again.

Well done!!! And thank you!


All blushing now.😳 😳

Thanks for liking it.dil se🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

That ending ruined me. It was so perfect. I don't even have words to tell you how much. The beauty and simplicity with which you've penned this story has left me stunned. Absolutely amazing!! I'm definitely gonna be rereading this one a lot! Thank you for writing such a beautiful story!! :D

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Superb writing. U r a good story teller.

Plz write more...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Loved it yaar!! Pls keep writing 😊😊❤

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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Ms.akabane

Loved it yaar!! Pls keep writing 😊😊❤

Thanks dear.will try more.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: srilotus

Superb writing. U r a good story teller.

Plz write more...

Thank you😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: DMGThings

That ending ruined me. It was so perfect. I don't even have words to tell you how much. The beauty and simplicity with which you've penned this story has left me stunned. Absolutely amazing!! I'm definitely gonna be rereading this one a lot! Thank you for writing such a beautiful story!! :D

🤗 a big hug for talking about the end.

Trust me it took me some real head scratching & hair pulling moments to write that part.

Thanks for enjoying.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Itsflora

🤗 a big hug for talking about the end.

Trust me it took me some real head scratching & hair pulling moments to write that part.

Thanks for enjoying.

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