MishBir OS + Snippets (Surprises - pg13) - Page 10

Shenz

Thanks so much for updating......just a tad short....but welcome back🤗🤗

Missed you here

Thanks for updating

It was really good and interesting to read

Hopefully the next chapters will offer further developments

Like the way you write working Mishti and a carefree but serious when he needs to be Abir

Hope to read more soon

Originally posted by: meen123

Shenz

Thanks so much for updating......just a tad short....but welcome back🤗🤗

Missed you here

Hey! Thank you! I know, I wasn't satisfied with this part either.. and not just the length. But anyways.

By the way, I missed this place and you all here as well. 😊

Originally posted by: coolove

Thanks for updating

It was really good and interesting to read

Hopefully the next chapters will offer further developments

Like the way you write working Mishti and a carefree but serious when he needs to be Abir

Hope to read more soon

Thank you!

I am glad you enjoyed the way the characters are portrayed. I will hopefully update soon too 😃

I really liked the grumpy Abir! KUKU were cute...

And Mish giving in to cheer Abir...awwwww..

I found this a lil short..else it was fine...are you on Watpaad? Pls update sooner and pls tag me... Thank you

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

I really liked the grumpy Abir! KUKU were cute...

And Mish giving in to cheer Abir...awwwww..

I found this a lil short..else it was fine...are you on Watpaad? Pls update sooner and pls tag me... Thank you

@Nikki_Love - I am glad you liked it. The length, I will see if I can do anything about it in my next update. Though not gonna commit to anything yet.

About Wattpad - yes, I have an account there. Though you won't find any of my Mishbir works there. But there are other stories there.

I will send across a PM or something next time.

Originally posted by: ShenzK

Hey! Thank you! I know, I wasn't satisfied with this part either.. and not just the length. But anyways.

By the way, I missed this place and you all here as well. 😊

It ended fast for me and I wanted more..but thanks for putting stories out here

Yeah it's not the same anymore....I'm not here as much as before....

Originally posted by: meen123

I am a big fan of long stories,that's all😆🤗🤗

It ended fast for me and I wanted more..but thanks for putting stories out here

Yeah it's not the same anymore....I'm not here as much as before....

Noted. I have already started working on the next one. Hopefully I will be able to post it soon. *fingers crossed*

Originally posted by: ShenzK

Noted. I have already started working on the next one. Hopefully I will be able to post it soon. *fingers crossed*

Okay.

I just loveddd it.

I came across your OS an hour ago and I have read them all. And may I just congratulate you on having done such a awesome work!! I could literally imagine the characters in front of my eyes as i was reading. Please do continue your writing. You are great with words.

How am I gonna pass rest of the time in the office not thinking about mishbir? heheheh . . . impossible indeed! But thats what makes the waiting for the next chapter worth it!