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My loveā„ļøā„ļø - a Mishbir OS
" This Abir Ajeeb Rajvansh is not answering my phone. I don't know what's the use of getting a phone if he never picks up." Mishti was taking fast strides in her room.
" After what happened that night in the washroom coz of those goons, I was in such a shock that I couldn't even thank Abir properly. What would have happened if Abir didn't come there on time. But why is he not picking up my call now? Who knows, nowadays he is very busy with his painting waali girl, he must be with her only, but he can atleast take my call. I can't believe he has not told me who that is!! "
"Should I call his home number? No no, what if Meenakshiji or Kunal picks up, it will become a big issue. What to do now? It's late in the night also but even if it's not what can I do?"
Let me see if Kuhu knows something, said Mishti and went to Kuhu who was fiddling with her phone.
M - Kuhu, did you speak to Kunal today?
K - Arey Behenji! Why are you asking that?
M - I told you not to call me Behenji. I am asking because Abir is not picking my phone, everything is alright at Rajvansh house na.
K - Why are you bothered whether everything is ok at Rajvansh house or not? What difference it makes to you?
M - I was just asking coz Abir is not picking my calls. He is my friend that's why I am worried.
K - Don't you think these days you are talking too much about Abir. Always Abir, Abir # same to same. I have never seen such friendship in my whole life.
M - Kuhu, can you please ask Kunal, where is Abir. Pls. Help me na.
K - Ok. But after this you should not disturb me # Mishturbance.
K - I texted Kunal about Abir, he said Abir is not well it and they took him to the hospital and now he is at home resting.
M - Oh what happened to him? How is Abir now?
K - That's what I told you just now. What's wrong with you?.
M - You said Abir is not well na. That's why I asked.
K - If he has come home means he must be alright only. Don't you think you are bothering too much. I don't understand what kind of friendship is this, you can't even think straight.
M - Ok. Ok. You don't start now. Thanks for your help.
K - First you stop bugging me. And these days you have become so strange. You mumble something to yourself, you are walking here and there just like in old movies how husband's walk when wife is in the labour room. What's going on?
M - Nothing of that sort, I was just ... Huh.. exercising I mean I didn't go for my morning walk, so I was just walking.
K - # wierdo. Now stay away from me.
M - Huh! As if I want to stay next to you.
Mishti again went to her room balcony and started walking again talking to herself.
" Oh god! What must have happened to Abir? He was alright yesterday. This Kuhu na, she doesn't give me the full details. I wish I can see him now. What should I do? Oh god! Pls help me. "
The next day, Mishti at the NGO.
" Didi, did Abir come in yesterday? " asked Mishti.
" No Mishti. He is not feeling well and will not be able to come in for a couple of days." said the lady working at Abir's NGO.
" Oh! Did he call?" asked Mishti.
" No. His grand father called and told us." said the lady.
" Oh ok. You carry on with your work Didi" said Mishti.
What to do now? I wish I can see Abir now. I don't know how he is feeling right now. What to do?
Yes! Idea! Nanu. I know he is the only person who can help me now. I'll take a chance and call his home number. Pls. God let Nanu pick up the phone.
Mishti called Abir's home number.
M - Hello
N - Hello! May I know who is this?
M - Nanu! Oh thank God!
N - Mishti! Is that you? Thank God I took the phone, both Meenu and Kunal are at home.
M - Yes Naanu. Namaste. I am glad you picked up the phone.
N - What Namaste? So old style. Talk like youngsters na. No formalities between youngsters. Ok.
M - Ok Nanu. I called to ask about Abir. I heard he is not feeling well. How is he now??
N - Oh ! You heard about him? Yeah ! He is getting better now. He is resting.
M - Suddenly what happened to him? He didn't pick up my calls, I was very worried.
N - Oh! You were worried about him. Abir has so many friends but no one is this worried about him. Nothing to worry beta. It's just a flu, this Gadhera made a scene because he is afraid of taking any tablets. So we had to take him to the hospital.
M - Naanu, can I come over to visit him?
N - Yeah! why not? But Now the time is not correct for you to come. I will give you a call once Meenu and Kunal is out of the house.
M - Thank you so much Nanu.
" This Abir na, he has no clue how much he makes me worried. But how come his painting waali has not come to visit him? He is always talking about her. Yeah whatever! I am not bothered.
Hmmm... Am I not bothered?! I mean yesterday Kuhu and now Nanu both of them are telling I am too much worried about Abir. I mean is not normal to be worried about one's friend?
Friend? Whether Abir is just a friend? I mean I have had so many friends but no one has affected me so much. This is totally a different feeling which I have not experienced before.
Sometimes when he is very close to me, I am not even able to talk to him properly. That day at the pub, if it was before I would not have let him enter the room, but I know Abir will never take advantage of me, I trust him completely.
It's only one day and I am dying to meet him. I am happy when he is around except when he is too close to me. I don't know what happens to me when he is that close to me and I can't explain whether I am happy or too happy, I feel kind of lost when he does that.
That day when he was zipping up my dress, that song and during the power cut time, when we were walking together that night and in the car. This is definitely a new feeling.
I mean this is definitely not just friendship, but whether Abir also thinks the same? I know he cares a lot for me. That day I could completely feel safe in his arms when I hugged him. But what about his painting waali?" thought Mishti when her phone rang.
M - Hello, Nanu.
N - Hello Mishti, you can come home beta, all clear signal from this side.
M - Ok Nanu. I will come right away.
Thank you so much.
Mishti @ Rajvansh house...
N - Hi Mishti, What's up girl?
M - How is Abir feeling now?
N - Why are you so worried? I told you na it's just a flu. Your worried face reminds me of that fire accident during the painting exhibition. Abir was so worried about you when he ran inside to save you.
M - No, I am just.. wait what? You said Abir saved me but didn't Kunal save me?
N - No. It was Abir who saved you, it just happened that Kunal went in coz his brother went in to save you and he carried you out.
M - Oh I didn't know this. Mishti started to think about the fire accident. She started to vaguely remember fainting in Abir's arms.
N - Mishti! Mishti beta! What happened to you? Come let's go to meet our Gadheda.
N - Yo dude, look who's here said Nanu winking at Abir.
It was Nanu's plan to keep Abir away from taking Mishti's calls. Abir was totally against it but now he winked back as a thank you to Nanu.
N - You both talk, I will send some tea said Nanu going out of Abir's room and giving Abir a secret Thumbs up.
M - How are you now Abir? I was worried when you didn't pick up your phone.
A - I am feeling better today Mishti. Sorry I couldn't inform you.
M - That's ok Abir. I didn't even thank you properly for saving me from those goons that day.
A - Mishti! No need to thank me. As I promised you I will never leave you.
M - Promise?! What promise?
A - Arey! Did you forget? That day at the hospital when your acci... Abir stopped in between realising he blurted out the truth which he had hid from Mishti and pretended that Kunal had rescued Mishti.
M - What ?! So it was you who rescued me when the accident happened. I knew it. I vaguely remembered you carrying me to the hospital but why did you say Kunal rescued me? So it was you who promised me. Now I remember everything. Just now Nanu told me that it was you who rescued me from the fire accident. Why Abir? Why did you hide all these things from me?"
A - I am sorry Mishti. I should have told you before.
M - You are really a Gadhera as your Nanu says. Ok leave it. I am so glad atleast now I came to know about all these.
M - I heard you didn't take tablets properly yesterday so they had to take you to the hospital ??!!
N - No! No. Am I a child or what? I was very sick so we went to the emergency room.
Meanwhile Parul came in with tea and porridge for Abir.
P - Mishti, tea for you. Abir beta, you should finish this.
A - Maasi, Not now Maasi. You know I don't like porridge.
P - Abir, you have to take tablets na. You have to eat something before that.
M - You leave it here Aunty, he will eat it.
Parul left the bowl on the table and left.
M - Abir! What is this? No tablets, no porridge. You are really behaving like a kid. Now come on, have this and take this tablet or else you will have to take an injection.
A - What ?! No way. I will eat, but you know what I feel very tired, can't even lift my hand.
M - You know what you are such a Dramebaaz! Wait I will give it to you, said Mishti and started to feed the porridge to Abir.
A - Mishti! I am sick and you are being so mean to me. If it was my painting waali, she would have been very sweet. You know what?! she came to meet me yesterday itself.
M - Oh is it? Nanu was saying no one came to visit you!! He didn't know may be, your painting waali would have come secretly through window to meet you.
M - But How come you are not showing that painting to me. Tell me about her na.
A - Not today. She is like a beautiful poem. I will tell you about her on some other day. I have so much to tell about her.
M - Oh! What's so special about her that you always talk about her.
A - Mishti, I will just come said Abir and went out.
Mishti was so curious and she started to search Abir's room for the painting.
" My earring!" Said Mishti and looked back to see whether Abir is coming. " He gave me back these earrings to me but how come he got it back? I have been searching for this since the engagement day!" thought Mishti and remembered when Abir came in to her room in the engagement day.
Mishti opened Abir's book shelf to search for the painting when he found some pictures. It looked like the pictures that Abir was hiding from her at the NGO.
Oh my god! These are my pictures since Kutch days. Now I remember it was Abir on the top of that bus. But why did he hide these pictures from me?
Mishti kept the pictures back and started searching for the painting. She found it behind the book shelf and took it out, she looked around to see whether Abir is coming and started to untie the cloth that covered the painting.
Mishti couldn't believe her eyes when she saw the painting. "Oh my god! It's me! Abir's painting waali is me" Mishti jumped with joy holding the painting.
" What's going on? I can't believe this. Why am I jumping with joy first of all?! But Abir did this painting long back. I don't understand." Let me first put this back.
Now I understand my feelings, I am in love with Abir and I can't believe it has taken me so long to realise this. All along I have been jealous on myself and this Ajeeb Rajvansh has been pretending that the painting waali was someone else. I am so happy that he is also in love with me. I feel so happy right now and I have never been this happy before.
I am not letting this Abir Ajeeb Rajvansh go simply for this. He has been hiding this for so long and how much has he teased me as if the painting waali is some one else.
Meanwhile Abir entered with a puppy face.
A - Sorry I got a call.
M - Was it the painting waali?..
A - Yeah! How did you know? She called to ask me how I am feeling.
M - Oh! You two seem to be very close.
A - Yeah! She is very close to my heart.
M - Oh! Ok ok. Look at you all possessive about her. Now You keep dreaming about her. I am leaving now, it's been a while since I came here. Now atleast will you pick my calls and return my texts?.
A - Yeah sure. Again sorry to keep you worried. I didn't mean to.
M - That's ok Mr. Abir Ajeeb Rajvansh. Bye.
A - Bye Mishti, said Abir with a longing face wishing Mishti will stay with him for some more time.
The end.
Hey all! Please let me know how do you like it through your likes and comments.
Can't wait for Mishti's realisation in the show. This week end without Mishbir is not that bad coz we got such amazing Mishbir scenes last week, But still missing Mishbir
I want Mishti's realisation to happen real slow in the show so that we get some daily dose of Mishbir for longš
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