My scribblings - YRHPK FF/OS list - New Mishbir OS - Pg.29 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Dotslover22

The OS was wonderful.

Bold- I loved that you included this one.

Underlined- The analogies were lovely.

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

I also love Abir's Huuuunnnnnnnnh..

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Awesome OS ....at least in your OS we got Mishbir love confession ....don't know when it ll happen in the show😔

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Have faith in the writers. I am sure they will give us a beautiful confession soon.

Loved every bit of it Sam! If in the show, Kuku's stupid Sangeet wouldn't be there, this should have been the way the story would have proceeded. Loved how she clarified everything and yet managed to confess! Kya mast likha hai Samy baba! This was so good to read!

Originally posted by: samyuktha0411

I want my coffee strong and dark.. a Mishbir OS

Mishti was fiddling with her phone, she wanted to talk to her Abir right now, infact she wanted to meet Abir immediately and give him a tight hug and tell him how much she loved him.

After finding out that Kuhu was the one who had sent that email, and after the confrontation with Kuhu and coming to know the disgusting real face of a person whom she had considered as a sister from the beginning and really cared for her like one, she decided that Kuhu doesn't deserve her love and care anymore.

I am going to concentrate on my life, my love, my Abir, Mishti thought.

Abir... I wish I can see you now.

I wish I can hear your voice now.

Should I call or should I not???

Ok! I am going to call.

Abir's phone ringing.

A - Hi! Mishti

M - Hi! Abir

A - My angry violent chorni, have you calmed down now? I thought that hacker guy is gonna die in your hands in the market. What would have happened if I had not stopped you?

M - You are always there for me na Abir, why should I worry?

A - Arey waah! Kya baat hai!!

M - Abir, I want to talk to you about something

A - Ok, tell me, I am all yours

M - What? What did you say?

A - I said I am all ears.

M - Abir, you remember that day when you came here to drop me you said,

A - Mein coffee saare baathein ki, which one are you talking about?

M - I.... I.... Coffee...

A - You want coffee? now? Shall we go out for coffee?

M - Yes. I want my coffee dark and strong!

A - Wow! Looks like coffee with me that day has affected you a lot! You want only your coffee to be dark and strong or someone else also, I meant something else also.

M - Abir, stop teasing me. You know what I want. Let's go out for coffee.

A - Mishti! Even though I know what you want, Dil Kholke bathaana zaruri hai. Now that you have told want you want, Let's meet at the coffee shop in 15.

M - Bye Abir.

A - Bye Mishti.

Oh god! Something in his voice makes me go week on my knees. I mean I have known him for so long and he makes me feel absolutely comfortable but when I want to say what's in my heart I don't know what's happening to me. If speaking over phone is this difficult, how am I going to withstand his stare?

Oh god! Please help me. Wait! Should I tell over phone only and avoid meeting him for coffee?! No. I want to see him. But when I see him, that intense stare and deep voice makes me forget myself and gives a thousand butterflies in my stomach. What should I do??

Yes, I will tell what's in my heart over phone only. I cannot do this in person.

Mishti calls Abir again.

M - Hello Abir!

A - Missed me already?

M - What?! No... I ... I ...

A - You?

M - I... I didn't mean to call you actually

A - Oh! Galthi se hogayi Kya?

M - I ... I mean yeah, I meant to call someone else

A - Oh ! Is that person's name is also Abir?

M - Yes! I mean no. No. Bye

A - Don't worry Mishti! You can call me whenever you miss me. See you.

Mishti cuts the call.

Oh god! This Abir na.. He never leaves a chance to tease me. I am not going to let this go. I gonna make him pay for this, Mr. Ajeeb Rajvansh!!

@ the coffee shop

A - Mishtiiii! Hi! Looks like you are missing me a lot these days?

M - No! Not at all. Why would I miss you? *Thinks "when you are in heart"* I just wanted to talk to you about something which I have not told you before. Remember you told me to share with you everything.

A - Wow! Finally! I have waited for this for so long.

M - What are you talking about. I am sure you have no clue about what I am gonna say.

A - Tell me! Can't wait.

Mishti thinking " Why is this Ajeeb Rajvansh getting so excited? Does this mean that he knows I love him? No way. How can he know. I myself realised it recently. Is it because he knows already that he is teasing me so much? Mr. Ajeeb Rajvansh, you are not going to hear what you want to hear so soon".

M - Abir, the other day you were talking about Me and Kuhu, how good we are as sisters. Actually, that's not true. We just pretend to be good to each other in others presence since we don't want to hurt our family. From childhood Kuhu has hated me. Kuhu feels I have taken away her family's love since childhood. But I have always cared for her and I have done my best to keep her happy until recently. I even tried to patch up with her not wanting to lie to you.

A - Wow! But did you say untill recently. Did something happen now?

M - Those photos which were sent from my Id, those were sent by Kuhu. I listened to her talking about it to someone over phone. I confronted her and she agreed she did it.

A - What? Kuhu did this? But why? Why would she do this?

M - That's the thing. She thinks I am in love with you and she thinks I will follow her to her in-laws house also and she doesn't want me to be happy.

A - What? I thought Bigben is behind all this. Did you know with whom Kuhu was talking about sending those pics? I really think big Ben has seriously something to do with all the confusion that is going on including these photos.

M - I don't know about that Abir. I just want to forget about this whole thing. Infact I have not told this to anyone else also. No one in my family thinks that I did it and you trust me and that's enough for me. And Kunal came home and apologized for mistaking that I had sent those photos.

A - What Nanko came to your house and apologized to you?

M - Yes. I just want to forget about this whole thing and Concentrate on my life and on the people who care for me.

A - But we can't leave it like that Mishti, I am sure there is something more to this. I am going to find out about this. I am glad you told me about you and Kuhu. Btw why does Kuhu think you are in love with me?

M - I don't know Abir. I just don't want to think about Kuhu now. I am just going to be a spectator in Kuhu's life from now on.

A - It's ok Mishti. We don't need to talk about it. You have done your best to make this marriage happen but in return if you are getting this, anyone will be upset.

A - Mishti, I thought you are going to talk about something else.

M - Something else? About what?

A - Nothing. Come let's go now. I'll take you to a place where you will get some peace.

Abir took Mishti to his usual hideout and they both sat by the lake. The evening wind was blowing slowly and it was getting dark.

M - Abir, how come nowadays you are not talking about your painting wali?!

A - That day I wanted to show you the painting but you didn't see. I thought you are not interested in knowing who that is.

M - Yeah! Now I wonder why I did that! I want to see it now, I will not stop you from saying what's in your heart from now on.

A - Huuuunnnnnnnnh! You are saying that now? You have to wait for some time as a punishment.

M - You are giving me a punishment?! What is so special about that painting that you are giving me a punishment?

A - My painting wali is special only. You don't know how special she is, that's why you are talking like this.

M - Hmmm...Whatever!

A - You are so mean unlike my painting wali. She is so nice, caring, understanding, sweet, lovely. She is such a cute sweet heart. She loves her family a lot, her family is so blessed to have her and I am blessed to her in my life. But look at you, angry violent chorni.

M - Oh! You think she is cute? If you want to praise her, just do that, why are you putting me down for that.

A - Yeah she is such a cutie pie. Sometimes I have to control myself a lot from hugging and kissing her.

M - What? You want to kiss her? Chiiiii...You besharam.

A - What ? I want to kiss the girl I love, what is so wrong about it? I think you are getting Jealous of her.

M - You love her?!

A - Oh! You don't know. She is the love of my life.

M - Abir...

A - What Mishti? Feeling jealous Kya?

M - Abir... I...

A - You?

M - I know who is the person in the painting.

A - Huuuunnnnnnnnh.. How do you know? Don't lie to me Mishti.

M - Abir (holding Abir's hands), I know It is me in the painting. Actually I called you today to tell you how much I love you.

A - Wow! Mishtiii...

M - Abir, it took a lot of time for me to realise that I have been in love with you all along.

Maybe because since my childhood I have been denied love other than from my BP and BM. And I have even thought whether I am incapable of being loved by someone. I was scared to even believe that you love me and what if you also leave me.

You have made myself to trust in me, trust in you, trust in our love, you have made this so easy for me.

Once I realised my love, I could understand that it is the beautiful feeling ever. I was very happy to see myself in your painting. Infact I cried on realising that you love me.

Yes Abir. I love you too.

A - Mishti, I have been waiting for this day for so long but didn't expect it to happen today.

I felt very sad when you said you didn't want to see painting but little did I know that you knew it already.

But How come you know about the painting? was it you I chased off from my house the other day?, you even left your shoe there. Oh god! I should have guessed it. Who else would have such tiny feet.

M - Yes that was me. I came to your house to talk about Kuhu but accidentally found the painting. When I saw myself in that painting I realised your love for me. I have so many questions about how and when this happened but then I realized that it doesn't matter. What matters is you love me and I love you and nothing can come between our love.

A - Mishti,

My love for you is as true as the stars shining in the sky.

My love for you is as big as the sky.

My love for you is as pure as the water that runs in a stream.

My love for you is as strong as the earth we live.

My love for you is as powerful as the fire.

Love you Mishti, said Abir, kissing Mishti on her forehead.

Love you too Abir, said Mishti hugging Abir tightly as if she has the world in her hands.

The end.

Hey all! Please let me know how do you like it.

This update was due last weekend but couldn't finish it. I don't know Whether you guys will like it.

Your comments are most welcome.

Request to highlight which part of the OS you liked the most and which part you didn't like.

And yes can't wait for the confession in the show. I am sure it will be very beautiful like our Mishbir.

Ye tumhari apni feelings hai na Baba Samy...just kidding

Wonderful write up!💚💙

Sorry ...thoda late notice Kiya is post ko

Originally posted by: socioboss9797

Loved every bit of it Sam! If in the show, Kuku's stupid Sangeet wouldn't be there, this should have been the way the story would have proceeded. Loved how she clarified everything and yet managed to confess! Kya mast likha hai Samy baba! This was so good to read!

Thank you so much Aku. Means a lot.

Glad you liked it.

My mind couldn't wait for the confession to happen in the show, so imagined everything. I am sure the confession in the show will be very beautiful.

Originally posted by: Onyourface

Ye tumhari apni feelings hai na Baba Samy...just kidding

Wonderful write up!💚💙

Sorry ...thoda late notice Kiya is post ko

Thank you Uru. Glad you liked it.

No need for sorry Uru, If you enjoy reading the OS, that's enough.

Intense stare and deep voice for Mishti only. Maybe if I see Shaheer in person it will happen for me. I think I will faint if I see him😆

Originally posted by: samyuktha0411

I want my coffee strong and dark.. a Mishbir OS

Mishti was fiddling with her phone, she wanted to talk to her Abir right now, infact she wanted to meet Abir immediately and give him a tight hug and tell him how much she loved him.

After finding out that Kuhu was the one who had sent that email, and after the confrontation with Kuhu and coming to know the disgusting real face of a person whom she had considered as a sister from the beginning and really cared for her like one, she decided that Kuhu doesn't deserve her love and care anymore.

I am going to concentrate on my life, my love, my Abir, Mishti thought.

Abir... I wish I can see you now.

I wish I can hear your voice now.

Should I call or should I not???

Ok! I am going to call.

Abir's phone ringing.

A - Hi! Mishti

M - Hi! Abir

A - My angry violent chorni, have you calmed down now? I thought that hacker guy is gonna die in your hands in the market. What would have happened if I had not stopped you?

M - You are always there for me na Abir, why should I worry?

A - Arey waah! Kya baat hai!!

M - Abir, I want to talk to you about something

A - Ok, tell me, I am all yours

M - What? What did you say?

A - I said I am all ears.

M - Abir, you remember that day when you came here to drop me you said,

A - Mein coffee saare baathein ki, which one are you talking about?

M - I.... I.... Coffee...

A - You want coffee? now? Shall we go out for coffee?

M - Yes. I want my coffee dark and strong!

A - Wow! Looks like coffee with me that day has affected you a lot! You want only your coffee to be dark and strong or someone else also, I meant something else also.

M - Abir, stop teasing me. You know what I want. Let's go out for coffee.

A - Mishti! Even though I know what you want, Dil Kholke bathaana zaruri hai. Now that you have told want you want, Let's meet at the coffee shop in 15.

M - Bye Abir.

A - Bye Mishti.

Oh god! Something in his voice makes me go week on my knees. I mean I have known him for so long and he makes me feel absolutely comfortable but when I want to say what's in my heart I don't know what's happening to me. If speaking over phone is this difficult, how am I going to withstand his stare?

Oh god! Please help me. Wait! Should I tell over phone only and avoid meeting him for coffee?! No. I want to see him. But when I see him, that intense stare and deep voice makes me forget myself and gives a thousand butterflies in my stomach. What should I do??

Yes, I will tell what's in my heart over phone only. I cannot do this in person.

Mishti calls Abir again.

M - Hello Abir!

A - Missed me already?

M - What?! No... I ... I ...

A - You?

M - I... I didn't mean to call you actually

A - Oh! Galthi se hogayi Kya?

M - I ... I mean yeah, I meant to call someone else

A - Oh ! Is that person's name is also Abir?

M - Yes! I mean no. No. Bye

A - Don't worry Mishti! You can call me whenever you miss me. See you.

Mishti cuts the call.

Oh god! This Abir na.. He never leaves a chance to tease me. I am not going to let this go. I gonna make him pay for this, Mr. Ajeeb Rajvansh!!

@ the coffee shop

A - Mishtiiii! Hi! Looks like you are missing me a lot these days?

M - No! Not at all. Why would I miss you? *Thinks "when you are in heart"* I just wanted to talk to you about something which I have not told you before. Remember you told me to share with you everything.

A - Wow! Finally! I have waited for this for so long.

M - What are you talking about. I am sure you have no clue about what I am gonna say.

A - Tell me! Can't wait.

Mishti thinking " Why is this Ajeeb Rajvansh getting so excited? Does this mean that he knows I love him? No way. How can he know. I myself realised it recently. Is it because he knows already that he is teasing me so much? Mr. Ajeeb Rajvansh, you are not going to hear what you want to hear so soon".

M - Abir, the other day you were talking about Me and Kuhu, how good we are as sisters. Actually, that's not true. We just pretend to be good to each other in others presence since we don't want to hurt our family. From childhood Kuhu has hated me. Kuhu feels I have taken away her family's love since childhood. But I have always cared for her and I have done my best to keep her happy until recently. I even tried to patch up with her not wanting to lie to you.

A - Wow! But did you say untill recently. Did something happen now?

M - Those photos which were sent from my Id, those were sent by Kuhu. I listened to her talking about it to someone over phone. I confronted her and she agreed she did it.

A - What? Kuhu did this? But why? Why would she do this?

M - That's the thing. She thinks I am in love with you and she thinks I will follow her to her in-laws house also and she doesn't want me to be happy.

A - What? I thought Bigben is behind all this. Did you know with whom Kuhu was talking about sending those pics? I really think big Ben has seriously something to do with all the confusion that is going on including these photos.

M - I don't know about that Abir. I just want to forget about this whole thing. Infact I have not told this to anyone else also. No one in my family thinks that I did it and you trust me and that's enough for me. And Kunal came home and apologized for mistaking that I had sent those photos.

A - What Nanko came to your house and apologized to you?

M - Yes. I just want to forget about this whole thing and Concentrate on my life and on the people who care for me.

A - But we can't leave it like that Mishti, I am sure there is something more to this. I am going to find out about this. I am glad you told me about you and Kuhu. Btw why does Kuhu think you are in love with me?

M - I don't know Abir. I just don't want to think about Kuhu now. I am just going to be a spectator in Kuhu's life from now on.

A - It's ok Mishti. We don't need to talk about it. You have done your best to make this marriage happen but in return if you are getting this, anyone will be upset.

A - Mishti, I thought you are going to talk about something else.

M - Something else? About what?

A - Nothing. Come let's go now. I'll take you to a place where you will get some peace.

Abir took Mishti to his usual hideout and they both sat by the lake. The evening wind was blowing slowly and it was getting dark.

M - Abir, how come nowadays you are not talking about your painting wali?!

A - That day I wanted to show you the painting but you didn't see. I thought you are not interested in knowing who that is.

M - Yeah! Now I wonder why I did that! I want to see it now, I will not stop you from saying what's in your heart from now on.

A - Huuuunnnnnnnnh! You are saying that now? You have to wait for some time as a punishment.

M - You are giving me a punishment?! What is so special about that painting that you are giving me a punishment?

A - My painting wali is special only. You don't know how special she is, that's why you are talking like this.

M - Hmmm...Whatever!

A - You are so mean unlike my painting wali. She is so nice, caring, understanding, sweet, lovely. She is such a cute sweet heart. She loves her family a lot, her family is so blessed to have her and I am blessed to her in my life. But look at you, angry violent chorni.

M - Oh! You think she is cute? If you want to praise her, just do that, why are you putting me down for that.

A - Yeah she is such a cutie pie. Sometimes I have to control myself a lot from hugging and kissing her.

M - What? You want to kiss her? Chiiiii...You besharam.

A - What ? I want to kiss the girl I love, what is so wrong about it? I think you are getting Jealous of her.

M - You love her?!

A - Oh! You don't know. She is the love of my life.

M - Abir...

A - What Mishti? Feeling jealous Kya?

M - Abir... I...

A - You?

M - I know who is the person in the painting.

A - Huuuunnnnnnnnh.. How do you know? Don't lie to me Mishti.

M - Abir (holding Abir's hands), I know It is me in the painting. Actually I called you today to tell you how much I love you.

A - Wow! Mishtiii...

M - Abir, it took a lot of time for me to realise that I have been in love with you all along.

Maybe because since my childhood I have been denied love other than from my BP and BM. And I have even thought whether I am incapable of being loved by someone. I was scared to even believe that you love me and what if you also leave me.

You have made myself to trust in me, trust in you, trust in our love, you have made this so easy for me.

Once I realised my love, I could understand that it is the beautiful feeling ever. I was very happy to see myself in your painting. Infact I cried on realising that you love me.

Yes Abir. I love you too.

A - Mishti, I have been waiting for this day for so long but didn't expect it to happen today.

I felt very sad when you said you didn't want to see painting but little did I know that you knew it already.

But How come you know about the painting? was it you I chased off from my house the other day?, you even left your shoe there. Oh god! I should have guessed it. Who else would have such tiny feet.

M - Yes that was me. I came to your house to talk about Kuhu but accidentally found the painting. When I saw myself in that painting I realised your love for me. I have so many questions about how and when this happened but then I realized that it doesn't matter. What matters is you love me and I love you and nothing can come between our love.

A - Mishti,

My love for you is as true as the stars shining in the sky.

My love for you is as big as the sky.

My love for you is as pure as the water that runs in a stream.

My love for you is as strong as the earth we live.

My love for you is as powerful as the fire.

Love you Mishti, said Abir, kissing Mishti on her forehead.

Love you too Abir, said Mishti hugging Abir tightly as if she has the world in her hands.

The end.

Hey all! Please let me know how do you like it.

This update was due last weekend but couldn't finish it. I don't know Whether you guys will like it.

Your comments are most welcome.

Request to highlight which part of the OS you liked the most and which part you didn't like.

And yes can't wait for the confession in the show. I am sure it will be very beautiful like our Mishbir.

Awesome Sammy

Loved it totally

Such a dream come true types 😅

Kuku nonsense jab abir ke saamne aayegi tab Mazaa aayega

Loved it totally, especially the confession part

Originally posted by: samyuktha0411

😆 Has it gone now or today also it will tickle you😆

We are against giving it poison.

Originally posted by: meen123

it's hiding somewhere inside the house. We are unable to locate it.

We are against giving it poison.

Oh! Hope today it doesn't disturb you.

You should try mouse trap or sticky sheets.

Originally posted by: vssdp

Awesome Sammy

Loved it totally

Such a dream come true types 😅

Kuku nonsense jab abir ke saamne aayegi tab Mazaa aayega

Loved it totally, especially the confession part

Thank you Vaishnavi. Means a lot.

I am glad you liked it.

Can't wait to watch the confession in the show.