AbhiRa FF- Manmarziyaan ( A/N on Pg 29) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Prologue


" Akshara…. I will be back in 10 min. I need to pack few things.. Tum yahi wait Karo" said Abhimanyu before leaving for the hostel to get his backpack

Akshara turned her face and passed a soft smile but she received a disgusting look in return

"I know girls like you try to woo boys from rich families to fulfill your needs

Aas pass bhi mat dikhna mere bete ke" warned Harsh in a harsh tone

"Sorry sir aap galat samaj rahe hain main bas... " Akshara tried to defend herself

"Hnnn tum bas Abhimanyu ko tuntune se gaane suna ke phasa rahi ho yahi na" replied Harsh before Akshara could complete

"Apko jawab dene ka man toh nahi phir bhi de deti hun...Singing mera passion hai main kisi ko impress nahi karti gaa kar" replied Akshara feeling humiliated and disgusted at the man standing in front of her

It fumed Harsh more and he snatched Akshara’s guitar and broke it into two pieces and said "Naya lene ke paise aa jaye toh naya tuntuna khareed lena"

Akshara was shocked to react to what had just happened it was her first guitar that her parents gifted her and last one because they left her when she was 12.



That is it for the prologue. Waiting for all your reviews :)



P.S. Tagging a few who commented on previous post and ones who are not tagged please drop your reviews too 🤗





ARe u Serious Zen.

baby what are you waiting for.... this is super interesting...Shuru Ho ja meri Jaan and kar fateh Maidan

wow, am super excited. do not forget to tag me

dono Jagah pls (This surely does'nt read right)🤣smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37

❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Harsh ne aksu ka guitar Tod Diya 😬

Zenab prologue was interesting 😁.

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🙏🤗

Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Woah Zenu.... This prologue is so intriguing.....


Loved it..... 🥳 Cant wait to know whats gonna happen.....

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Team Abhimanyu (Gen 3)

Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Will surely read it

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Amazing and refreshing at the same time! (Even though papa birla never changes!!)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Chapter -1

A little kid was playing in the garden happily and her ball rolled outside the main gate of Goenka's house.

She followed the ball to pick it up but suddenly a man put a handkerchief on her face and picked her up and started to run in direction of a white van.

Neil was shocked to see the event who came outside to get some fresh air.

He ran behind kidnappers to catch hold of them but unfortunately bumped into a car.

The driver came outside to check so he pleaded for help "They abducted my Niece in that white van... Please follow them"

The driver replied "Jaldi se gaadi main baitho"

The driver made a few calls to track the white van if by any chance they lose the track.

Neil was trying to keep himself composed but he was getting restless with every passing moment for Siya.

Siya his little 5 yr old Niece...daughter of Parth and Shefali Birla.

He decided to inform his family about it so he decided to call Abhimanyu

Abhimanyu's phone vibrated and he looked for the caller it was Neil, he scanned the surroundings to see Neil because 20 min back he was in the same room

He received it and heard a panicked Neil struggling to make a coherent sentence

Abhi requested him to tell clearly "Neil shant hoja dhang se bata kya hua Siya Ball kya bol raha hai"

Neil finally took a breath and said "Bhai Siya is kidnapped...They took her with them I'm following the kidnapper's van and luckily I bumped with a police officer she is helping me to reach Siya and we have also informed the police station they will send their team soon."

Abhi couldn’t believe what Neil told him. He loved Siya a lot whenever he comes back from the hospital after working for long hours Siya scolds his Chachu for overworking in her cute voice.


His little princess was missing.


Manjiri noted the changes in his expression and questioned him " Abhi kya hua beta?"

He narrated the whole incident and the room filled with laughter and happiness got into panic mode and the cries of Shefali and Manjiri were heard in the living room. Guests took their leave.

All of them were worried for Siya as she was the only child in the house

Birla's already started making calls to high officials to bring their granddaughter back safe and sound.

Officer and Neil finally reached a building where the car stopped.

Officer had got an idea about the risk of going inside the building but Neil was getting impatient to see Siya.

Neil made a call to his family " Bhai Siya mil gayi hai hum use bacha lenge don't worry"

Officer decided to go inside with Neil and they found Siya and a kid on the 2nd floor

Officer whispered " Neil dono bacchon ko sath leke dusri side ki stairs se nikalke Gadi main baith jana aur intezaar mat karna mera"

Neil questioned, "Are you, sure Officer?"

Officer nodded

The officer fired and the gunshot was heard by the kidnappers they panicked and started looking around to see who did it officer was silently hiding behind a pillar and Neil carefully took the kids with him but unfortunately, a kid hit the table and they were caught. They were 5 goons in the building and the only option was to fight with them till the backup team comes to the rescue.

Goons caught Siya at gunpoint and Neil screamed to leave her.

They hit Neil with a stone on his head. He tried not to lose his consciousness and help Akshara to save the kids but that injury didn't help and he collapsed.

Now Akshara alone has to save all four of them.

After struggling for a while finally, the team reached and Akshara could save all four of them from goons with few injuries and scratches.

After 2 hours at Goenka House

Everyone was praying for well being of their Angel. With each passing minute, they were getting restless and helplessness was written over all their faces. Neil informed about Siya 2 hours back and they did know the exact location and his phone is unreachable for the past 1 hr 45 minutes.

Neil entered carrying Siya in his arms who was asleep while coming back.

Parth and Shefali ran to meet her

Neil in a hushed tone said " Shhhh shant ho jaiye Aap sab Siya so rahi hai main room main sula deta hun use"

He carried her inside follwed by Parth and Shefali.

Finally, they all sighed in relief and thanked the Almighty for saving their angel from the clutches of kidnappers.


The new person standing at the door caught their attention.

Harsh came forward and said “ Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?”

They both recalled their first meeting.

That's it for the first part.

Waiting for all your comments❤️


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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Loving the story Zenu..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Wow! Superb start zenab 😃


Maja ah gaya read kar ke.


Parth aur shefali ki daughter Siya and uski kidnapping.


Yeh story toh jabardasth hai.👍


Now I have understood why Sam Nominated your name on reader choice award cause you deserve it. The way you have written ch 1 ii actually grab my attention on the story.


Now i am looking forward for ch2🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳😍😍


Shukriya dost kahani likhane ke liye 🙏🙏🙏🙏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Zenab, topic pe pg number bhi update Karo dear. New readers ko ch 1 dhundhne mein problem hogi 😬

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Pepper,

zara,

Subha,

Mina,

Veena

simmy

Pooja 2

Alice

mudita

Jolly

Reeya

And Helen


guys this is really interesting ff . First ch updated on page 3.

Written by Zenab78 aka zenab.

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