AbhiRa FF- Manmarziyaan ( A/N on Pg 29)

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Prologue


" Akshara…. I will be back in 10 min. I need to pack few things.. Tum yahi wait Karo" said Abhimanyu before leaving for the hostel to get his backpack

Akshara turned her face and passed a soft smile but she received a disgusting look in return

"I know girls like you try to woo boys from rich families to fulfill your needs

Aas pass bhi mat dikhna mere bete ke" warned Harsh in a harsh tone

"Sorry sir aap galat samaj rahe hain main bas... " Akshara tried to defend herself

"Hnnn tum bas Abhimanyu ko tuntune se gaane suna ke phasa rahi ho yahi na" replied Harsh before Akshara could complete

"Apko jawab dene ka man toh nahi phir bhi de deti hun...Singing mera passion hai main kisi ko impress nahi karti gaa kar" replied Akshara feeling humiliated and disgusted at the man standing in front of her

It fumed Harsh more and he snatched Akshara’s guitar and broke it into two pieces and said "Naya lene ke paise aa jaye toh naya tuntuna khareed lena"

Akshara was shocked to react to what had just happened it was her first guitar that her parents gifted her and last one because they left her when she was 12.



That is it for the prologue. Waiting for all your reviews :)



P.S. Tagging a few who commented on previous post and ones who are not tagged please drop your reviews too 🤗




Index

Chapter 1 on Page 3

Chapter 2 on Page 7

Chapter 3 on Page 12

Chapter 4 on Page 15

Chapter 5 on Page 18

Chapter 6 on Page 19

Chapter 7 on Page 23

Chapter 8 on Page 26

Chapter 9 on Page 28

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful 🥰 start. Loved it..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hooking prologue zenu

Start writing part 1 pretty soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mehersudha

Beautiful 🥰 start. Loved it..

Thank You Meher 🤗
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Hooking prologue zenu

Start writing part 1 pretty soon

Thank You Nidhi❤

I will post it soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I was curious to read your FF .As sam had nominated your name on reader choice award . Since that day I was looking for your FF. Now finally, you tagged me .so I will surely read this .


this is the first time i m reading your work. I will share my feedback later🙏🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: beanstalk04

I was curious to read your FF .As sam had nominated your name on reader choice award . Since that day I was looking for your FF. Now finally, you tagged me .so I will surely read this .


this is the first time i m reading your work. I will share my feedback later🙏🤗

Thank you so much Madhu🤗

This is my first long FF earlier I wrote TS and OS only

And if you want to read previous works they all are there in Asmani's Index which is pinned on first page 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely start Zenu. .. Waiting to read the story.....

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Loved it Zenu… left my comment on Wattpad

Posted: 3 years ago
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This is beautiful prologue ♥️ Will be interesting to see Akshara's reaction on this in the story

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