OS: Will find you back - Page 2

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Yay I am the first one

Unreserve

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Noorie darling🤗

How can you do this girl !

I can feel their pain through your words. 😒

How beautifully you have described this conversation. And I totally agree that this should be happen between AbhiRa. Much needed one.

You know what ye rista team really need to contact you before writing any story. And believe me they will proud of you to write such an amazing story for AbhiRa ❤️

Bhaviii 🤗🤗

I was getting bored and there was too much in my plate and makers ruining the potential lead to this ☺️

Hai na... They need to have a base to the story. And I just don't know why makers are not realising it.

Hahaha. Phir kya pata jo joote main maarti hun wo mujhe pade 🤣

And thank you so much... This means a lot ❤️

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

How? How do you do this? Kahan se aati hai yeh baatein tumhare paas? The depth and understanding? Har rishte ki baarikiyon ko samajhne ke liye?

This really, really made my heart sad, but by then end of it, I was left with hope. Hope ki aaj nhi toh kal, sab theek hi hoga. We just have to keep fighting the good fight!

It scares me how much I identify with these two characters, but Abhi and Akshara have my whole heart <3

Thank you for writing this :') and I hope Utkarsh or someone reads this so that they get good ideas and wonderful dialogues xD

Noor, you're amazing ❤️

Love,

Avni

Avni 🤗

I don't know yaar. Like I said, life does not ask before taking the tests. So bas wahin se :) also makers ruining the potential is a good inspiration I guess... I wrote this in an hour. And I was just so happy that I directly typed and saved time 😆

I just hope it does not feel disjointed. Bcoz I just wanted to let their feelings out and reveal the past... That's why asking 🙈

They will meet... Either fate will make them meet or they will find a way to make fate do it for them

Same and especially the real complex these two characters are for me. Which u will read about in Can I l Love You

Avni tbh, I left hope from the makers. I am not experienced writer like them and I am no superior but still I feel the lack of it these days ... Toh I just hope they improves

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Noor.. U r back with a bang darling.... I did not want this.. But yes, they have hurried into this relationship... And even if they seperate, they will find their ways towards each other... They are made for each other

Anuu 🤗 I am still not properly back... Still trying to get my feet back to writing...

Tbh, I want it bcoz I know they will find a way to be back with each other. And I want their falling in love phase. And this will give them base and the potential will be used

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Woow Noorie just woowwww

Just one word for this "PERFECT"

Have I ever told you that I love ur writing style if not then I am telling u now

Nidhiii 🤗🤗

Thank you so much ❤️ have written a story after so long ... So all these words really help >

Originally posted by: serenepeace46

It's breathtakingly beautiful but poignant as well

Felt every emotion with them

Love it so much

Love to you Noor ❤❤❤❤

All the best for your exams 🤗🤗🤗

I am so glad they made them feel their emotions and you liked it ❤️

Love ya back 😳

Thank you ❤️

Originally posted by: mtina0207

This is very well written... Too good a story line

Bahut Tham ke likha hai... Thehro hai and Gehraiyee hai

Why dont u convert this into an SS ... and have a go at it

maza aayega

Tina, I just so glad you liked it ❤️✨

Nah re... Ek ghante mein kaam niptaya hai. Kal chemistry ka exam hai. Padh kar toh jaati nhi but dard bana rehta hai 🤣

Bcoz I am a lazyy writer and maine koi story likhi hai ye after a long time. Toh u know bas ka ich nhi hai 😆

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Tina, I just so glad you liked it ❤️✨

Nah re... Ek ghante mein kaam niptaya hai. Kal chemistry ka exam hai. Padh kar toh jaati nhi but dard bana rehta hai 🤣

Bcoz I am a lazyy writer and maine koi story likhi hai ye after a long time. Toh u know bas ka ich nhi hai 😆

Koi na

keep writing aise chotu chotu... keep entertaining us

🤗

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Hayeeeee Noorrr

The depth of their conversation 🥺❤

Now that we are not getting separation but maybe there is going to be a conversation like this I will imagine this OS instead of that😭

They are broken but their love will heal them surely.

Bichad kar phir milenge... Yakeen itna tha

Beshak Khwab hi tha... Magar haseen kitna tha❤️

It's a khwab coz Manish will accept them

Awesome OS Noor 🤗

Dukhti nass pad haath rakhti hai 😩😩

We need conversations yaar... Koi batao makers ko. And we need a good separation track and their falling 'in love' phase because this around, we need development. Whatever happened till now gives them base and the passionate love story but both need calmness too.

Makers the potential u have >>>>

Aayeee haaye. Sacchi bas ye khawab na reh jaaye 🙈

Thank you Zenuuuuu

Originally posted by: mtina0207

Koi na

keep writing aise chotu chotu... keep entertaining us

🤗

Hope so ye sadiyon purana talent jo laut kar aaya hai wo wapas se gumnaam zindagi na jiye toh definitely will keep posting such os

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Dukhti nass pad haath rakhti hai 😩😩

We need conversations yaar... Koi batao makers ko. And we need a good separation track and their falling 'in love' phase because this around, we need development. Whatever happened till now gives them base and the passionate love story but both need calmness too.

Makers the potential u have >>>>

Aayeee haaye. Sacchi bas ye khawab na reh jaaye 🙈

Thank you Zenuuuuu