Awesome as usual!!
Really interesting progress of your story 🤗
The GIFs just made the entire thing so HOT !! 🔥 The chemistry and fire is just popping out of the GIFs you've posted. Very apt choice, fitting the story's narrative perfectly 
I'm curious to know the process by which Akshara will become conscious of him. As in, looking at him as a man, apart from her mentor. Till now, he's been focusing on her, admiring her beauty, noticing her big beautiful eyes and pouty lips, and looking at her like a partner would, keeping himself in control.
But the last couple of updates showed that she has just now noticed his pretty eyes, sharp jawline, feeling his hands on her neck, and how close he was to her. She's getting affected by him slowly. This process will be great to read, wherein she'll get butterflies in her stomach thinking of him, when she'll feel shy when he's around, and when she'll blush and turn red when he comes close to her.
It'll be interesting to see her consciously acknowledging how she's getting attracted to him. And realizing his attachment, possessiveness and closeness to her as well. Even though I think subconsciously she has given herself up to him, and likes him caring for her and controlling her (only to push her to be the best).
Very clever and beautiful writing 👍🏼❤️ Really liked the way she was confused about why she felt guilty for staying up to revise lessons with Akshay. She didn't know why but she felt guilty. She's falling for him without even thinking about it that way. It'll be wonderful to see him too noticing her slow realization and teasing her or hinting towards that.
Also, a big Kudos to you for the thought that she doesn't need him to achieve her position career-wise. That's the empowering thought we need in today's world and I'm so happy to see this being reflected in your amazing story Thank you so much for writing this!! And yes, she looks small and fragile but her inner fire and drive make her so strong - that's simply superb!!! Wow 👏👏👏
Very nice knowing how his entire family likes her and talks about her regularly 😃 That's so cute and also gives an indication of how serious he is about her to be openly discussing with his family about her routine and his strict attitude with her.
And does Abhimanyu dream about doing unspeakable things to her here too? ☺️ On-screen we see Abhimanyu dreaming of being intimate and physically close with Akshara.
Here, it must be a very challenging thing for him to have his desires in control and keep distance from her, just like you've described: she's with him almost 24/7, but he still has to stay away from her physically. She is his, but not yet his in the true sense. Looking forward to that journey where she becomes his in all senses, from just being his mentee. He's already hers, so needless to say that 😆
And since she's the youngest intern who's here after finishing her MBBS, I think she must be 22. And since he's not found this deeper connect with anyone till now, and also because he's such a senior and experienced doctor who's regarded as one of the top surgeons, he must be at least 35 years. It takes people a minimum of 30-32 years of age to finish their studies to become a surgeon. Then he would have practised for at least 2-3 years to reach the top, well-known position that he's in right now. I like it this way and their considerable age difference makes them even hotter and increases their appeal even more for me 😳
Eagerly looking forward to the next part!! Thanks so much for writing and posting here 🤗 Excited to read the next part!!
Edited by HahaHeheHuhu9 - 3 years ago
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