Pehli Raat Shaadi ke baad - AbhiRa OS - last part - page 6 - Page 5

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Finally!!! here goes the part 2 and last part of this OS.


Part 2


Akshara took her phone to check the message, while Abhimanyu was hugging her from behind resting his chin on her shoulders. It was a voice message from the same patient who met Akshara sometime back. The message sounded, "Aapke pati aa gaye aap ko lene toh puri baat nahi ho paayi." Abhimanyu getting irritated, freeing her from his hold and muttering,"Pati nahi aayega toh ye aayega kya??" She played the next one,"Waise main aapke live sessions attend karna chahtha hoon. Can you give me an appointment." Abhimanyu snatched her phone and replied to him saying,"aapke liye samples hi teek hai. koi zarurat nahi hai live attend karne ka." Saying so, he locked the phone and placed it on the table. Akshara was fuming in anger now. He slowly went near her, taking her palms in his, smiling at her like a lost puppy trying to pacify her. She pulled her hands out of his forcefully and turned the other side. While he tried to justify his act, she started with her rant, "Tum mere patient se aise kaise baat kar sakte ho?? Main tumhare kaam mein toh interfere nahi karti. Toh tum kyun?" Abhimanyu taking in a deep breath continued, "Akshu... woh tumse flirt kar raha tha toh maine socha..." Akshara pounced on him like a lionless,"Kya socha tumne?? Aur tum mere decisions kaise le sakte ho? Who gave you the permission? Abhimanyu was equally angry now, "What do you mean by permission? Mujhe kisi ki permission ki zarurat nahi hai. Tumse judi har cheez, har baat pe sirf mera haq hai aur main tumhare decisions lene ke poore haq raktha hoon. I don't need even your permission." He was sounding like a dominant husband. Akshara was taken aback by his words, "Really??? Mere decisions par tumhara haq hai lekin sirf suggestions dene tak na ki tum khud decide kar lo." Abhimanyu did not want to stretch it long, holding her hands by her elbow,"Dekho it's simple, tumhare saath koi aur aadmi baat kare mujhe pasand nahi. You are mine and all mine. Bas baat khatam" he growled with his eyes widened. With Akshara, he has always used his softest tone ever and this is the first ever time she heard him growl. Though Akshara shocked by his behaviour, in deep she was happy to see his love for her. However, it was a matter of concern of her that he was getting too protective and possessive which will spoil their relationship. "Fine.", she took the box of halwa in her hand. placing it on his hands, "Toos lo. main gajar ka halwa dene aayi thi aur yahan mere pati dev mujhe karela ka kadava juice pila raha hai." She took her bag and left the cabin leaving the door to shut.


Abhimanyu muttered to himself,"Aisa kya kaha maine, kya kiya, itna gussa?? Main na usse call karoonga aur nahi baat. Usse khud aane tak intezaar karoonga." It was half an hour, he took the phone to check if there was any message from her. "Aadha ghanta hogaya. Na koi call na message. Matlab isse toh meri parvah hi nahi." He couldn't wait more than that. "Main khud hi call kar leta hoon. Meri toh biwi hai aur mujhe hi toh manana padega" with a stupid smile on his face he dialled her number. He heard a phone ringing in his cabin and realised that she had left the phone. He hit himself on his forehead," Kya karoon mein iss ladki ka??? Ya toh phone bandh rakthi hai ya phir kahi chod deti hai." Before he could find her, he had to attend a patient. He was continuously busy that he could think about anything else. It was almost three hours when he returned to his cabin. Sitting on his chair and stretching out, he realised that he had to talk to Akshara. He ran quickly to the music room but found it empty. He went out to the exit gate to check with the security if she has left and got to know that it's been more than a hour since she left. He was worried and irritated at the same time. "Ghar chali gayi bataya bhi nahi... kaise batati? phone toh mere paas hai." He called Neil to check if she reached home. Neil told him that she has not reached yet which made him to worry more. Before he could cut the call, he heard her voice from behind. He asked Neil to immediately switch on the video call. The moment video call was on all that Abhimanyu saw was she tripping over the carpet and falling down. He shouted from the phone,"Gutne mein hai tumhari aankhein. Dekhe nahi chal sakthi. Har waqt girti padti rahti ho." Akshara without looking at him while trying to get up asked Neil to cut the call as she was not interested in talking to him.


Akshara had been for shopping. She bought a lot of things to decorate their room for tonight. She wanted to surprise Abhi and make it as a special occasion for them. Manjari seeing all the stuff smiled at her. She had bought things to create an entire candle light dinner set up. It was almost 8.00 PM when Abhimanyu came home. He rushed to his room where he got the surprised of his life. There were scented candles all over the room making the atmosphere so calm, soothing and romantic. The path for their bed was decorated with flower petals. He looked at their which was filled with rose petals. The entire scene had made him go crazy that he immediately wanted to take Akshara in his arms. He called out her name when a voice message played for him,"jaake pehle fresh ho jaao. phir hum saath mein dinner karenge." He smiled to himself. There were a mix of emotions running inside him making him restless. He finished his shower, all dressed up he sat down for the dinner to be served. He saw her walking towards him. She was wearing a pink organza saree with a spaghetti blouse. She had kept her make up and accessories very minimal. She looked ethereal. He was lost in her completely. Everything seem to fall out of place for him and the only thing that he could see was "HER". She sat down in front of him and asked him to start with dinner. While he nodded in a no, she fed him with her own hands. He licked her fingers giving her goosebumps and turning her red. She pulled her hands at once and looking down, breathing heavily, she said "khaa lo please. I am sorry mujhe aisa baat nahi karna chahiye the." Abhimanyu pulling his chair right next to her, "I am sorry too." He did not want to talk more and spoil their moment. He asked her for a dance and she switched the music system on. It played

"ye moh moh ke dhaage

tere ungliyon se jaa uljhe"

Abhi muted the system and asked her to sing for him. Sitting on the couch, he made her sit on his lap and handed over the guitar to her. Akshara gathered courage to bring her voice out as she was feeling jittery sitting on his lap. Her body was shivering, she had turned red from top to toe. While pulling the strings, she continued.

"Koi toh toh na laage

kis tarah girah ye suljhe

Hai rom rom iktaara

jo baadlon mein se guzare"

Abhi was completely turned on. He couldn't control himself anymore. He run his fingers all over hands. His lips planted soft kisses on her bare back moving her hair. She dropped the guitar down and rested her head on his shoulders giving him full view of her neck and cleavage. Abhimanyu tried to adjust himself a little so that they can be comfortable and accidentally pressed the remote which was now unmuted.

"In lamhon ke daaman mein

pakiza se rishte hai

koi kalma mohabbat ka

dohrate farishte hai....."

It was perfect for their night. Abhimanyu traced her collar bone with his fingers while still nuzzling his nose on the nape of her neck. His hands travelled beneath her saree on her bare skin towards her navel. His kisses became deeper. It felt like his lips would leave an impression her skin. She could no more take it and stood up from the couch and went towards the bed. He followed her. Pressing his hard chest against her back, his one hand played with her navel while the other caressed her hands from shoulders downwards. She clutched her saree tightly, bit her lips and curled her toes. She had never felt special nor loved in her entire life. All her life she was ill treated and looked down upon by her sister. She did not know her worth and what she can do until she met Abhimanyu. He was her man, her life, her everything. With these thoughts running in her mind, she turned and hugged him tightly. She kissed him all over his face and pulled him into a lip lock. It was soft one but soon turned wilder. Their tongues waddled. Her one hand through his hair while the other dig into his shoulder leaving her nail marks. They had to pull out from each other as they were gasping for air. He gasped, "Akshara.... I need you now." Saying so, he lifted her in his arms, placed her gently on the bed, he undraped her saree and placed her hands on his shirt asking her to unbutton them.

Her hands ran all over his body. She chuckled while touching his abs, his muscles. Abhimanyu was more than happy to see her getting affected by him, fantasizing him. He started kissing her neck down slowly moved towards her cleavage leaving a love bite. Their foreplay continued until Akshara told, "Make me yours completely." He was waiting for her command and entered her slowly while she moaned his name in pleasure.

They were always one soul and today their bodies became one. It was one beautiful night to remember. Their "Pehli Raat - Shaadi ke baad". They were finally one in all respects. The shining moon and the twinkling starts which lit the sky in the night where the witnesses to their love.

Both gasped for breathe and were feeling heavenly. The night was getting darker and Abhimanyu saw her sleeping peacefully in his arms. He kissed her forehead and said, "I love you" with that he fell asleep slowly.



Sorry being late. I hope this did justice. I tried making it not too explicit but I had write few things to give the feel to readers. Please let me know your comments.😳

Forgive me for the errors as I have not proof read and it's just on spot.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Res... I will read soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

OMGGG☺️ so perfect for our abhira

kya likha hai seriously😳 i was in abhira land🤪 you really went all wild🤪😳 it was so pure and 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Can't describe in words👏👏👏 loved it plz write more stories on our beloved abhira⭐️ thank you for this Masterpiece😳⭐️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ashuuuu 🤗🤗

He is so possessive about her... He is irritated but that voice messages too😆

She planned surpise too well by leaving her phone he was thinking she might be angry... Perfect plan

And then Mrs. Akshara Birla Or better Mrs. Girija Abhimanyu Birla who keeps tripping, slipping and falling 🤣

His dialogue "Aankh ghutno main hai" Is funny logon ka dimag hota hai Akshu ki aankh hai😆

Then their dinner date and she was feeding him

Cute cute cuteeee 💕

Moh moh ke dhang in bgm and AbhiRa in that scene

I could imagine it ❤

Last part was so intense and romantic☺️

Loved it ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice update

Abhi is such a possessive husband

But akshara definitely knows how to handle him

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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

Ashu🤗


Really aag lga di hai yr tune to aaj 🔥

We all know like these scenes we'll not get in the show but here we got it because of you darling🤗


You made my day with this OS.

Honestly I had a goosebumps specially in last part. 🙈


And yes I really love this Jealous Abhi and how nicely Akshu covered all things with her beautiful surprise.❤️


Abhi has gone mad with that arrangements he wants Akshu in his arms that time only.😉


Btw why did you end please shaadi k baad k bahut saare OS likhna


I am waiting😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ashu🤗


See you updated before I did 🤣

and what an absolutely dreamy and hot update this is


I absolutely love the power tussle argument between them and how Akshus stood her ground with him. He was a bit off but I love jealous Abhimanyu. He is married to her, has all the rights but he is jealous of a patient. Mera cutie pie

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I absolutely love how he thought he could last without talking to her. Mer pyaare Dr. Majnu did you not learn anything, Akshara can make you grovel. He did not even last 30 minutes, yeh karenge gussa!

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You captured their emotions so well. i love that no matter how upset she was with him she made his day special. Abhimanyu deserves to be pampered too. These two will heal each other with love and care one small step at a time. The last bit was steamy with the right amount of romance thrown in. Their chemistry could burn screens. I really want a happy akshu singing in Abhimanyu's lap in his room scene. This was so romantic. I want more!!!


Love


BLUE BLUE

Edited by Eternized_Blues - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago
#48

Ashu 🤗🤗


Too too too good sweetie.... ❤️


That Possessive Abhi is always a treat to watch.....


Brilliantly captured their emotions..... My god..... Brilliant writing.....


Last part mein.....I had butterflies in my stomach.....☺️


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Loved it....🥳


You kept ur word ... Its a real treat.....


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Loads of love....❤️


Keep writing.... And keep rocking.... 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Simran_h

OMGGG☺️ so perfect for our abhira

kya likha hai seriously😳 i was in abhira land🤪 you really went all wild🤪😳 it was so pure and 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Can't describe in words👏👏👏 loved it plz write more stories on our beloved abhira⭐️ thank you for this Masterpiece😳⭐️

Thank you Simran 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Ashuuuu 🤗🤗

He is so possessive about her... He is irritated but that voice messages too😆

She planned surpise too well by leaving her phone he was thinking she might be angry... Perfect plan

And then Mrs. Akshara Birla Or better Mrs. Girija Abhimanyu Birla who keeps tripping, slipping and falling 🤣

His dialogue "Aankh ghutno main hai" Is funny logon ka dimag hota hai Akshu ki aankh hai😆

Then their dinner date and she was feeding him

Cute cute cuteeee 💕

Moh moh ke dhang in bgm and AbhiRa in that scene

I could imagine it ❤

Last part was so intense and romantic☺️

Loved it ❤

Zen 🤗

Thank you for the lovely comments. I really want them to bring Abhi jealousy and possessiveness as a separate track instead of bringing in vamps l and villains in story . What say???

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