AbhiRa OS: Sealing The Promise - Page 8

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

Tum do no na poore ki poore pagal ho 🤣 i'm dying reading your comments.

Aree woh toh hum hai hi... Koi shak nhi bacha hai... After all ek bande ke liye hum ye show dekh rhe hai... Iss se bada aur kya hi proof hoga hamare clownigiri ka 🤣

@ishqdinoorhai9 please try Stand up comedies. I think you are gonna nail it. You gave me such a good laugh, and your timing is just

Ab main itna bhi khaas nhi ☺️haan thodu sa... Ittu sa hun log tamatar phenkenge mere par main stand up comedy karne gyi toh...

Tareef karne ke liye main shukriya ada karti hu writer sahiba

Waiting for the hug 😁and your take on these episodes.💕

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

Legit me after reading this comment

This is one of the best comments I have received on this thread and I am running out of words to express my sheer joy that you found this OS good enough to shower so much love☺️

@bold: ugh just give me a hug already

🤗🤗🤗 No really, it was brilliant - eager to read more from you, whenever you post them. :)

What a masterpiece this is Mushfika! I'm speechless with the way you pulled off all the characters, emotions and painted it right infront of my eyes! one of the best OS i have ever read. like wow, really! 👏

with the horrible drama these days in the actual show, this was a breath of fresh air. I would love for you to write more and bless us with nice stories that make more sense the the show itself

Few things i loved about this os:

1. Abhimanyu ASKING akshara "what is it that's bothering you?. even though he had an idea, he still ASKED. this is called good communication skills.

2. Akshara actually opening up to abhimanyu and telling him that she is scared and worried shit for arohi, the family, and for failing him. again, great communication

3. I love the subtle gestures and all the emotions and physical contacts that transpired during the whole convo when akshara opens up to abhimanyu. When she puts her head on his shoulder, again not an actual hug but still needing for his warmth for her to confide in him was a magical scene you wrote Mushfika👏

4. Abhimanyu seeing through akshara's lie. this is far fetched any ITV show so i couldn't be more happy reading that part

5. last but not the least, the forehead kiss. that one paragraph of abhimanyu going to his surgery but then coming back to place a kiss on her forehead more for himself than akshara to assure that she is in one piece and really sealing the promise of always protecting her with a kiss👏 i dont rememer the last time i read such a meaningful OS

It is a sincere request from all of us that you keep writing and please tag me when you do because i wouldn't want to miss your work like i did this one (saw this after 5 days what!!!)

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Ye ice cream waise hi pighli jaisi light jaane par pighalti hai. Main smjh skti hu aapka batti Gul ho gya hai aaj ka episode dekh kar par hum par apni kripa drishti banaye aur aur sundar sundar lekh likh kar dein... Humein intezaar rahega.

Meri mast comedy ke baad kaam ki baat par aate hai.

I know how much a comment means to a writer and I can totally relate to this. The encouragement a good quality comments gives is like jhatka of 440 volt. But really, dil se, jigar se, jaan se, kidney se.. this one shot have my heart ❤️❤️❤️

@bold: basically! 😆

@red: ☺️and your comment has MY heart! What's your name btw? It's fine if you don't want to reveal your real name , vrtual name is fine too.Asking so that it's easier for me to address you LOL😆

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Tum do no na poore ki poore pagal ho i'm dying reading your comments.

Aree woh toh hum hai hi... Koi shak nhi bacha hai... After all ek bande ke liye hum ye show dekh rhe hai... Iss se bada aur kya hi proof hoga hamare clownigiri ka

@ishqdinoorhai9 please try Stand up comedies. I think you are gonna nail it. You gave me such a good laugh, and your timing is just

Ab main itna bhi khaas nhi haan thodu sa... Ittu sa hun log tamatar phenkenge mere par main stand up comedy karne gyi toh...

Tareef karne ke liye main shukriya ada karti hu writer sahiba

@bold: LMAO you are giving me major Geet vibes from Jab We Met for some reason! 🤣

Originally posted by: Manju1066

Waiting for the hug 😁and your take on these episodes.💕

Aww Manju!🤗 I hope I didn't disappoint you with my venting in my previous post thenIf I did, Dil se maafi chahti hoon😳

Originally posted by: Mridzy

🤗🤗🤗 No really, it was brilliant - eager to read more from you, whenever you post them. :)

Originally posted by: Anokhi01

What a masterpiece this is Mushfika! I'm speechless with the way you pulled off all the characters, emotions and painted it right infront of my eyes! one of the best OS i have ever read. like wow, really! 👏

with the horrible drama these days in the actual show, this was a breath of fresh air. I would love for you to write more and bless us with nice stories that make more sense the the show itself

Wow, look who commented!😲

Thank you so much for the kind words🤗I truly appreciate that you took the time to read this shot and even happier that you commented🥳Lots of love to you :)