AbhiRa OS: Sealing The Promise - Page 6

Originally posted by: Mridzy

Oh my my my!!! Where do I even start?! That was AMAZING! Like abso-freaking-lutely amazing. I could picture it happening before my eyes, and that's the mark of a brilliant writer - to take the readers right into the scene they have so beautiful painted. Well done!

Also, everything so was so in sync with the characters on screen - this is exactly what Abhi would do - from his anger, to his controlled mature tackling of the situation - well done! 👍

Can't wait to read more from you.

Oh, and also, please send this to the makers - THIS is what we need on screen!

Legit me after reading this comment

This is one of the best comments I have received on this thread and I am running out of words to express my sheer joy that you found this OS good enough to shower so much love☺️

@bold: ugh just give me a hug already

Originally posted by: slan

This is so beautiful!!!! Pleaseeee write more!

Thank you so much love!🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

And we would also get real conversation... Jo unke bond ko strength kyu kar rhe hai ye smjh mein aaye 👀👀 all I saw today is a thank you and he melted and she saying she want to meet him 🌚 and he took her to his home after challenging his father... I want the confident this guy have... I would have of course topped my exams too. He is doctor so he must be good in PCB ... Koi laa kar do re baba

Bro you spoke my mind! I'm usually a very positive person when it comes to shows and stuff but what they showed, especially today, i don't think i have been so pissed watching an episode.

@Bold:🤣

So beautiful.

Perfect timing for me to read this today and reinstate my hopes on this pair of love birds. I was never a fan od dream sequence but todays was mother of all nightmares.

Your OS is one of the best that I have read so far and your word flow is magical.

Thank you for gifting this to us.

Please keep writing.

WHen is the next one coming?

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

🤣🤣 You are hilarious

Haan yaar. I mean i loved how they fell for each other in the show where they tried to show that sometimes you dont even need explicit words to feel the instant connection with someone or grow feelings for them but now it feels like they sre going a little overboard with this whole falling and catching and eyelocks when really, they NEED to talk! Im losing my patience.

I guess we will need to survive this period with Mush’s OSes. So madamji aap pls hum readers ki upar meherban hoiye aur ek aur OS jaldi se post kijiye. Dhanyavad 😳

Ungrateful creature!! It hasn't even been 2 days and this girl is asking for another one. saans to lene de meri maa

Originally posted by: iheartChai

One word PHENOMENAL! 👏❤️

You captured the scene and their personalities so well. Right touch of dialogue progression that all of us wished we could see on the show 🤓 and another type of sweet tender romance without the trip and fall and eye staring over and over again😆 It is getting a bit repetitive since these two have literally not spoken properly since the engagement drama.

Grace!! I'm blushing so hard. if my mom sees me smiling and blushing like this, she is pakka gonna think i'm chatting with my boyfriend🤣

I'm so happy to be able to write something you enjoyed so much. thank you for being one of my constant supporters on my posts and now OS as well. Love you🤗

Originally posted by: Simran_h

Omggg i loved it⭐️ it was perfectly written👍🏼 i can feel each word and feeling😭 how i wish this to happen in the show😒

Plz continue this hospital track👍🏼

Thank you so much for the kind words Simran, means the world🤗

Hmm, I initially didn't plan this OS to have several parts but i will think about it :)

Originally posted by: scorp1AN

Beautiful 🤩

Loved the entire storyline.. ❤️

Akshara finally breaking down and sharing her feelings

Abhimanyu understanding akshu’s relationship with aarohi

And abhimanyu also reassuring akshara was sweet…

I am glad she got the support from abhi!

She really needed it as in the show, ppl are more concerned about aarohi than akshu (which is weird 😅)

Hope abhi and akshu share their feelings soon in the show also

Thank you for the beautiful OS 🤗

Omg thank you for such a lovely breakdown of what you liked about the shot. Loved reading it. I feel like you guys are gonna get bored today hearing me say thank you over and over again but I can't help it. you guys are the sweetest honestly! thank YOU for the beautiful comment🤗

Originally posted by: HahaHeheHuhu9

That was simply WOW!!! You're a gifted writer, with the rare ability to use words that paint a vivid picture of the story in the reader's mind! So many descriptions in your OS stood out as simply amazing 👏

Really enjoyed reading this! Please do write more on Abhira! 😍

Trust me my cheeks are burning at this point form all the blushing i have been doing☺️

These words will forever be so precious to me. thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and being kind enough to shower me with so much love and appreciation. Love ya! 🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

You are hilarious

I know right ... I am just awesome 😂😂🤣🤣

Haan yaar. I mean i loved how they fell for each other in the show where they tried to show that sometimes you dont even need explicit words to feel the instant connection with someone or grow feelings for them but now it feels like they sre going a little overboard with this whole falling and catching and eyelocks when really, they NEED to talk! Im losing my patience.

Exactly....humne inki love at first sight dikhan ki tareef kya kar di inhone toh sapne mein hi jeene ko bol diya ... Kya hi joker banate hai ye humein. I am already writing to them and giving away ideas.... Itna main padhai mein mann lagati ... Kaash.

I guess we will need to survive this period with Mush’s OSes. So madamji aap pls hum readers ki upar meherban hoiye aur ek aur OS jaldi se post kijiye. Dhanyavad

Sacchiii... Writer sahiba ab aap hi hamari ek matra sahara hai.... Humein viraan na chode please

🌚😂

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Oh my god your comment is killing me especially your comment on “kash mein itna padhai mein mann lagati” story of my life honestly

Underline - wah kitne sundar nivedaan hai aapki, if Mush doesnt melt with this sincere request im gonna go into sttack mode and stalk her to death. Waise kaha chhupi hai madam ji. Ajke k eoisode ka review bhi nahi diya

Tum do no na poore ki poore pagal ho 🤣 i'm dying reading your comments.

@ishqdinoorhai9 please try Stand up comedies. I think you are gonna nail it. You gave me such a good laugh, and your timing is just