Kaira SS sinking... Withdrawl part 20 updated - Page 9

Originally posted by: jannatsara

Honestly speaking I never ever like kirti's character in serial ..but in Ur story she is just fabbb...so smart..

Though I felt bad for Kartik plz torture him more..wanna see some kairav and naira moment and plz show some naira and rishab moment too..

I know I am demanding.. It's not my fault kyu ki writer listen my word and so day by day my demand is increasing

🥰 yes boss

❤️❤️ what an update!! Keerti is on a roll 😉💃 love how in your story the supporting cast is also useful unlike the show. Can't get enough of this story.. finally kaira will be face to face in the next update... Feel bad for kairav,stuck in between the crossfire

Awesome..... But want Naira and Rishabh scenes closeness wale more & more in front of Kartik.

I eagerly wait for ur update every day.... Please update soon...

Wonderfully written..

Originally posted by: vinovember

❤️❤️ what an update!! Keerti is on a roll 😉💃 love how in your story the supporting cast is also useful unlike the show. Can't get enough of this story.. finally kaira will be face to face in the next update... Feel bad for kairav,stuck in between the crossfire

Keerti plays an imp role hear!! Agar kaira ko hi choda toh its only jhagda and misunderstandings😪

Originally posted by: shiny9911

Awesome..... But want Naira and Rishabh scenes closeness wale more & more in front of Kartik.

Achha!! Ok then😉

Originally posted by: arooshee

I eagerly wait for ur update every day.... Please update soon...

Wonderfully written..

100th comment🥰🥰🥰🥰

Thanks for liking my work.. will update soon

Part 10 (mini update)

Capetown basi GV mein enter hote hain..

What was infront of the Goenkas was a smiling and hopeful kirti.. an aggitated Naksh and a tensed Rishab then they could see a tall man who was checking the surrounding intensely but then again they could sense the fresh breeze that has come along.. Naira.. she slowly tilted her head from bhola’s side and greeted everyone with a smile.. she was visibly excited to be there..

Goenkas were all numb.. they couldnt react.. khush bhi nahi hoparahe the aur dukhi bhi nahi.. sab awkward se khade the..

Naira also felt a bit a odd abt the reaction.. so to cover up.. Swarna went on to hug and welcome everyone..

Swarna- hi beta.. flight kaisi rahi aapki..?

Naira- achhi thi.. aap bhi aaram se aagayin?? Aap bhi hamara wait karleti.. toh sath mein aajate..

Swarna- Nahi beta.. yaha kuch bohot imp kaam tha..

Swarna then fakely introduced Naira to everone

Swarna- yeh Naira hai.. kirti ki nanad.. aap log shadi mein to mile hi the.. but recently ek accident mein inki memory mein thoda..ummm

Naira- gadbad hogayi.. but i remember most of it.. spc the imp ones.. she said looking at Rishab with a wide smile..

Swarna- aur yeh Rishab hain!! Naira k..

Naira- mangetar!!!Fiance ko hindi mein yahi bolte hain na..

All went more awkward..

Naira was all wierd to see how diff the goenkas were than she expected.. she was now a bit uncomfortable..

She went and stood besides kirti..

Naira- bhabi.. lagtah hain.. apki baat man leni chaihiye thi.. yaha to sab bohot weird behave kar rahe hain..

Dress change karni chahiye thi kya??

Naira was wearing a beautiful floral mini-dress!!

Kirti - nahi.. woh tum kisi ko pehchan nahi rahi ho na.. issiliye wierd lagraha hai!!!

Then kirti signaled everyone so that they behave a bit normally!!

Everyone hugged keesh and welcomed Nairhab!!!

Kartik had went into his room earlier not being able to handle his restlessness.. Naira ka majnu.. kairav k papa pe havi horaha tha.. woh situation ko tackle nahi karparaha tha.. kairav jisne apni mumma ki awaz sunli thi.. he wanted to go out but kartik was holding him for his dear life.. like a support unit.. kairav was getting restless too..

Manish and suhasini were all tensed and sad.. knowing how difficult it was for kartik..

Swarna then tried to show rooms to all of them so they could rest!! But something happened.. kuch aise jo sab k dil mein tha magar koi nahi yakeen kar paraha tha ki.. itni jaldi yeh sach hojayega😌

Part 11 will be updated @ page 16😂 jitni jaldi 16th page open hoga utni jaldi update hoga haha.. lets see ye trick kin kinko aati hai🤫🤫

Manish and Suhasini will still blame Naira .

Well excited for Vedika's reaction.

Will she be jealous that Naira is moving fwd too and getting handsome Ri😆..

Kairav is the only one I pity right now.

Poor decisions of adults have harmed the poor child so much