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hirannaksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

nice part neeru...
naksh without naksh...
let's see how they will manage..
but its really nice part

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: --pranu--
So cute lovely nd emotional part...
But dugguko alag math karo na pls...

All stay in capetown na???
Waiting for next update...
Hope all stay together...
Do update soon neeru

thanx for like dis part too pranu

ya i too not so happy to see foursome r not each other

duggu without nakash but dis part of story n how duggu feel n how naksh solve dis n ya one day foursome sure go to campetown

even i want a ff on fousome and outside India but firstly complete dis ff

hopw u like next part abhi duggu nahi hoga but plzz like it otherwise i am not able to write

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Nairaksh
Nice part
Aww duggu
Poor soul is alone
Capetown journey but without duggu
Please usse bhi le jao neeru

ya defo but this da twist n da story

waiting to go duggu with them but tab tak aacept it

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
nice part neeru...
naksh without naksh...
let's see how they will manage..
but its really nice part

sonal thanx for liking it

ya naksh without naksh is hardly acceptable but ya its a story how naksh feel n ya defo they foursome go capetown sure

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deepshikan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Nice part
poor duggu baby
he vl hv to live alone
do update nxt part soon:-)

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: deepshikan
Nice part
poor duggu baby
he vl hv to live alone
do update nxt part soon:-)

thanx vishu for like dis part😊

Edited by --neeru-- - 9 years ago

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

next part

at the capetown

there mountain ans scenery shown

Natik- kitni aachi air blow ho rahi hai

akshara- ha natik but duggu aur family ki yaad aa rahi hai

kash vo bhi hamare saath hota

natik- ha akshara but uski exam na hote to vo bhi aa jata

Akshara- ha, vo to sahi hai ek saal ki uski padai distrub hoti hai phir ek saal bhat to jana hi hai vapas

natik- kyo kar rahe ho akshara

akshara- natik phone laga rahi ho ghar par

natik - abhi to sabhi se bhat kari thi

akshara- duggu se ho jaye ek bar

natik-ok

phone bell ringing in ss house

bhabhi doing some work

girja dekh na

choti maa -girja kahi bahar gai hai mein aati hoo

suddenly duggu come in pick da phone

akshara- hello

duggu- about to put (rakhna)the phone

akshara- kaun duggu

duggu- maama ka phone hai n want to goes

choti maa comes and said

duggu tumhari maama ka phone unse bhat kar lo nahi to mein bhat nahi karugi tumse

dugu- hello mama

akshara- duggu beta naraz ho mujse but beta kya karti sorry bhand mein ja sakte to aapko le jate beta

duggu- maama zaroogi tha k ya

akshara- ka beta naira choti thi isliye use le gayi nahi to use bhi chod jati

duggu- sachi

akshara-muchi

duggu- maa sorry aap jaldi aa jao ab

akshara- ha beta exam katam hoge to tumhare le jayugi

duggu- ok maama tears n become happy

akshara- acha aab nazaz to nahi ho na mama

duggu- nahi mumma lekin jaldi se mere exam katam ho gaye

duggu become happy n exited n goes to his room

bhabhimaa - kaha ja raha lala

duggu-study karne taki jaldi se eh exam over ho jaye aur mein mama papa naira ke pass chaoo

duggu- abhi to 2 week aur hai

choti maa- to bhabhi maa bhat karne se hamesha dil halka hota hai aur galat phemii dur hoti hai

Natik - ho gai bhat akshara khush hai duugu

akshara- haa tabhi cell riging

akshara- ha maa

natik- inke to mphone hi chalo rahe pata nahi jo banglow diya hai company ne usme kab chalega

kis side hai location dekhta hoo

akshara- maa kaise ho

rajshri -thik hi hoo itni der se phone laga rahi ho lag h ini raha

akshara- maa mein duggu se bhat karrahi thi narazki door ho gai uski mein bhahut kush hoo

rajshree- samjati hoo maa ka dil ke ek saal tak kaise rahogui tere bina

akshara- maa hamara maan kyo banaya

rajshri -taki sabho sambhal se majbood banke

akshara- rakhti hoo maa natik bhula rahe hai

akshara- natik kya hua maa se bhat kar rahi thi

natik-yahi bhat karni hai phele company ne jo buglow diya hai dekh le

akshara- chaliye

at the buglow

natik- finally mil gaya kitne phone aur location dekhi

akshara- naye desh mein time to lagegna na hum buglow ka nam singhaniya sadan rakhe

natik- apki j oiccha vaise se bhi yeh ek saal tak hamare pass hai mein formalities puri karke n key lekar aata hoo

manager-comes

after some formatities he gives the keys

akshara- wow buglow kitni aachi location sea aur mountain ke bhich mein kitna aach hai scencery

natik (in romatic mood) aur hum dono yaha akle aur koi nahi

akshara- natik- romatic bhand mein hogiye luggage jamane mein madad kiyjye

next part - natik jalyoy akshara to create a acting to flirt with a girl

Hope u all like is too 😊

Edited by --neeru-- - 9 years ago

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

nice part neeru..

finally duggu ak ki patti hogayi woww..

nd nice banglow...

do update soon for next... :)

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Pragati-naksh

@Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

poor duggu bechara missing his parents.. but its nice that now akshara duggu ki patch up ho gayi.. waiting for next part akshi ki jealousy

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Nairaksh

@Nairaksh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Nice part neeru
Duggu is okay now
His anger cooled down good
Please show a little about naira also
New beginning in naksh life
Good update

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