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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

starting is awesome neeru...
now we will get to read something which we expect from our CVS...
the life of naksh in Capetown..
do update next part soon

Thank sonal for like dis
Ya naaksh going to cape town but ek din India to zarror aayege jaldi
Ek new beg of life in cape town

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: --neeru--


Thank deepshika like my ff
What's ur name


my name is vishu
Edited by deepshikan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
sry double post
Edited by deepshikan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
nice story...
first part is lovely...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: karanhina

nice story...
first part is lovely...

Thank karan hina for like my story
May I know ur name
Edited by --neeru-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --neeru--


Thank karan hina for like my story
May I know ur name


She is my dear friend Ayushi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OK so many new members r in dis forum u all r welcome n enjoy here n ya like my story too😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 3
natik- bhabhi maa aap abhi bhi soch ligiye
akshara- ha bhabhi maa aur choti maa plzz ki nahi thoda loss hi to hoga
chotimaa and bhabhi maa- par ab ticket aa gaye
nk n ak -cancel kara dete hai hum nahi jana chaate
rajbhana enter in the room
akshara natik ab yeh ho sakta maine pucha detail li thi agar trip cancel kari to vo case kar sakte hai aur loss bhi bhahut hoga
natik n ak -chaolo thik ek saal ke baad hum sabke sath vaha phir trip par chalege
natik and akshara in room
akshara- oh! sorry natik n smiles
natik -akshara ke behind bhata hai aur akshara aage aage n a music playd
and after that catch her n come clse each other n lost in their eyes❤️
akshara- natik yeh kya zaroori hai
natik- kyo akshara aap mere sath time spend karna nahi chahati yaha to kheti ho time nahi aab kaunsa bhabhana
akshara- natik aap phir and hit natik's leg
natik- aahuch kya hai akshara
akshara- kuch nahi dikh nahi raha raat
natik- aapse bahas karna bekar hai
akshara-natik yeh kya kar rahe ho sara mera set kiya hua kharab kar diya
natik- kyo sahi jamaya hai dress upar sari niche
akshara- hathiye aap and she nikal deti hai sabhi things ko
natik- aare yeh kya kiya aap bhi
akskshara- nikati hai n throw napkin on natik face
natik- aare akshara sambhal kar
akshara (suddenly ) aare duggu ko dekhna kal jab jayege to milega hi nai
natik -ha cholo mil aaye
both goes to duggu's room
duggu sleeping
akshara - sorry duugu beta hamhe jana hoga tumhara exam hai nahi to le chalte
natik- ha duggu we both miss so much kash tum bhi chal pate
akshara-miss u beta n weeping
natik- rohiye maat akshara aa jayega exams ke baat
natik and akshara both kiss him on his forehead n goes
next day duggu wake up
akshara -aaj mein tayaar kar deti hoo
duggu- mamma aap hamesha khete ho aona kaam khud kiya karo aab aaj kyo
akshara- kabhi kabhi maama dil karta hai beta
duggu (in mind) aaisa kaha ja rahe hai muche nahi batata maine puchuga bhi nahi aur aane par baat bhi nahi karooga jane to huu
natik -duggu maine tumhare shoes polish kar diye hai
duggu- papa aapne
natik- ha dekho kitne ache se
akshara- ha 3-4 bhar polish karti in par
natik in tearly eyes akshara
akshara- ok beta n hug her
on the breakfast table
duggu -sabhi meri pasand kka hai choclate milk
akshara- ha beta
mahharaji -duggu aapna tiffin le lo
bhabhi maa chotimaa ,rajbhana n all r so happy n alos sad too
duggu open his tiffin n saw of his favourite dish
bhabhi maa n choti maa -yeh sab akshara ne banaya hai
natik- aaj mein tumhare chod aata hoo
duggu- ok bye
akshara(in tears) byee beta
at 11'clock
bhabhi maa n choti maa -sab tayari aab nikhlana chahyie sahar mein bahut traffic hai aj
akshara- maan nahi kara raha
natik- abhi bhi kuch ho sakta ho
rajbhana- aare ek saal ki bhat hai ghar ke bahar bhi socha
maheswari too come there n rajshree
akshara- good luck of journery n ug her in tera
rajshree- sabhal kara jana mein yeh tiffin pack kar diya hai isme aachar hai aur isme kuch swwets n inme dry fruit aur isme
vishwambhar- baas bass beta tum dona aache se jana n good luk
akshara- ha maa n hugs again her
akshara n natik touch all elders feet n hugs naman n karishman
a sad song plays yeh rishata kya khelata hai
both r go n all r tears eyes
their flight go to capetownnn
after sometime- duggu come from the school
mamaam maamaa
bhabhi maa n choti mmaa - duggu aa gaya
bhabhi maa- laala mein teri dress change kar deti hoo
choti maa- maine kaha lagati ho naksh
duggu- maama kaha hai
bhabhi maa- vo aati hogi abhi
duggu- no i want maama n goes in his roon
choti maa n bhabhi maa - kaise se smjaye ise
exam tak bhat hai phir bata dege n phir thode din bha yeh bhi chala chayegs
duggu- naira naira
in room naira nahi hai mummy papa use le gaye muhe nahi exam tak wait nahi kar sakte
duggu suddenly saw a letter -
akshara
duggu beta sorry abhi jana pata urgent tha nahi to wait kar sakte the
sorry mamma ko
duggu become emotional
and he come down
bhabhi la chan kar do dress
choti maa- kaha laga diya hai la mein khila doo
nakash sad but ok
natik akshara at cape town finally hum yaha aa gaye
akshara - ghar phone lagana hai
natik- aap na ghar ko nagi bhulegi
akshaara- u again natik
phone ring
all r come there n pick the phone
bhabhi maa- akshara
akshara- aapko kaise pta chala in tears
chotimaa- bhabhi maa phone ko speaker par dalo
bhabhimaa-hha pata kaise ni hoga tum hi hoge miss uboth
natik n akshara- hum bhi
all- kaise ho
nk n ak -aap sab bolege to kaisesunughi mein
sabtik hai abhi phuje hi hai
duggu come here
all r on phone
naman -duggu champ muuma papa ka phone aaya hai aa jaho
duggu- mujhe nahi karni kaha to unse
chotimaa -naraz hai samaj jayega
naik n akshara- ha choti maa thode din ki bhat aa jayega ya phir ek hi saal ki bhat hum aa jayege uski study kyo karab kare
natik- ha uska saal karab hoga ek hi saal hi bhat hai
next part- leap of 5 years!!?
duggu now in 10th standard
hope u like its not good bas aaise hi ek story sachi thi so share u all
its story about the relation of husband n wife n as well as their grown up children with my angle their teenage feelings and problems 😊😊
Edited by --neeru-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
So cute lovely nd emotional part...
But dugguko alag math karo na pls...

All stay in capetown na???
Waiting for next update...
Hope all stay together...
Do update soon neeru
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Nice part
Aww duggu
Poor soul is alone
Capetown journey but without duggu
Please usse bhi le jao neeru

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