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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello every one hope i come here regularly
actuallu my old ff ka pata ni kaha h may be it closed
so i write a another story which i think before da leap in yrrkh but not write my views but now i want to share plzz it not so good but i try my best hope u all like n bare my english its not so good
STORY
STORY start with
Natik found a letter in which his bussiness trip or for bussiness purpose but he hide it
akshara- kya hide kar rahe ho natik maine dekha abhi
natik(shocked)- arr array akshara ku kuch nahi
akshara -aacha ha natik ji mujse aap jhoot nahi bol sakte to kyo bol rahe ho
akshara natik se vo letter lene ke liye bhagti h natik ki taraf natik catch her n hold her in his arms
akshara -natik kya he yeh saab
natik -aap meri taraf aa rahe the tho itni beautiful wife ko chodne ka maan kaise kare
akshara- natik aap na batahiye aap kya ha is letter mein
natik (show) bussiness letter h out of india ka ek saal ka bussiness tour package
continue later
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waaw di dont think that u r not gud in engish..dont tell again nd again that u r not gud ..
So nice nd different ff pls continue this nd write long parts...
I m waiting. ..so nice. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hmmm...very nice start neeru..do continue more today
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Posted: 9 years ago
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meri bhi english bahut kharab hai... :(
phir bhi mai agdam bagdam likhti hu..
don't say like this..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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short yet sweet part hain neeru...
congratulations for ur new ff...
nd ha plss do try to finish it fully...
all d best...
no one is perfectionist so chill
just give ur best leave the rest... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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koi mujhe mere new ff. ke liye bhi best of luck bolega ya nahi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hirannaksh

koi mujhe mere new ff. ke liye bhi best of luck bolega ya nahi

if u open thread den i wish na...
aise hawaa mein kaise wish karu bataao???? 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --pranu--

short yet sweet part hain neeru...

congratulations for ur new ff...
nd ha plss do try to finish it fully...
all d best...
no one is perfectionist so chill
just give ur best leave the rest... 😊

ok sorry aage se ni bolu gi mujhe lagta hai ki mein galat english hurt na karoo kisi ko
n write it continue actually boss aa gaye the so work jyada h aur shaam ko bacha karne ni deta 10/10:30 tak sotaa h uske baad i tried so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hirannaksh

hmmm...very nice start neeru..do continue more today

defo aaj try karoogi
n write it continue actually boss aa gaye the so work jyada h aur shaam ko bacha karne ni deta 10/10:30 tak sotaa h uske baad i tried so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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akasara- par natik aap yeh chupa kyo rahe hai
natik - akshara mein nahi jana chata aapko aur family ko chod kar
akshara- but ek saal
natik (in middle) ek saal chahe aur i dunno want ot go there i like to stay in india wid my family
akshara- kot prob nahi haii mein dekh lugi
natik- lekin akshara mein nahi ja sakta
akshara -par!!
natik- aur duggu bhi badi class meinaa gaya hai uski studies
akshara- koi nahi vo abhi 6th mein hi ha mein manage karlugu
natik- but i dunno want to go plzz not force mi
akshara- natik
natik- samjo naa mein apni family se alag nahi rahe sakta
akshara- ok natik jasi aapki iccha mein force nahi kar nahi lekin baki sab
natik- mein aaj hi is letter ko no mein summit kara duga
akshara -ok natik
naik cell phone ringing
natik(on phone) ok i come
natik aacha akshara abhi jana h phone aaya h guptaji ka mein yeh aa kar summit kara duga
choti maa (voice) akshara akshara
akshara- choti aa aati ho
natik - aacha akshara chalta hoo n kiss her on her cheeks
akshara- natik aap
natik- kya bole
ashara- kuch ni jayiyeee
akshara -choti maa apne bulaya
choti maa- ha vo akshara yeh kaam tum bazar se kar dogi
akshara -yeh bhi koi bolne ki bhat h abhi karti hoo
after vsome time
garbage collector(raddiwala)- bhabhi ji kuch raddi deni hai kya?
bhabhi maa n choti maa -ha deni h isliye kai bhar phone kiya
choti maa- late hai kya hisab se
raddiwala- bhabhi maa sahi tol duga aap laahiye har bhar dede h
choti maa- thik h mein lati hoo
choti maa- akshara ke bhi room ka le leti hoo
akshara2 (oh! mein bhi) cholo mein de deti ho jo kaam ka hoga dekh lege
bhabhi maa- devyani le aayi kya? akshara ke bhi room se
choti maa- ha bhabhi maa
bhabhi maa- ek bar aur paper dekh lena
choti maa- ji , yeh kaun sa letter hai
bhabhi maa- kya hai isme
choti maa- bussiness letter hai natik ko ek saal ke liyeout of india tour ka offer hai
Raddiwala- bhabhi ji aur h kya
bhabhi maa- abhi tum jayo jitna hogaya utna de do baad mein bulayege
bhabhi maa- par akshara natik ne bataya nahi
chotimaa- aap jannti hai na vo kaisa ha
bahbhi maa- family ko akshara ko sabko chod kar nahi jana chata hoga janti ho usse but yeh aacha fayada hai
chotimaa- bhat karge unse
bhabhi- mujhe dena ltter
natik come ack(in room)
akshara akshara vo letter kaha hai
chotimaa n bhabhi maa- hamare paas hsai
natik-aa aapke pass
both- tumne aur akshara ne humse yeh chupaya but bhala ho radiwale ka
natik-raddi?
akshara come back
choti maa apne jo samaan magaya tha yehi h na
choti maa- haa
natik- choti maa aur bhabhi maa ko letter ka pata lag gaya h
akshara- kya natik
both- aa choti maa -aur tum ja rahe ho natik
natik- nahi mein nhi aur mein pucha tha akshara aapka bhi ticket hoga kyunki is project aap bhi handle kar rahi hoo
bhabhi maa- chalo aacha hai khae ki prob nahi hogi
natik- aaplogo ko mazak mein nahi
choti maa- bas tum dono aur duggu naira sab ja rahe hai
akshara- duggu par iuski studies nahi vo nahi bol to natik aap hi chale jayige mein nahi
natik- aapko bhi chalna hoga isliye hi to
bhabhi maa- tum sb ja rahe ho
akshara- dugu ke next month se exam he uski studies
chtoi maa- thik hai duggu baad mein chotiyo mein chala jayega tum to jaho aacha project hai
tum dono aur nair ko le jayo aur koi naa nahi mein raaj baana se bol dugi
akshara n natik -ok bhabhi maa ek saal ki bhat hai isliye maan gaye but abhi duggu ko kuch maat kehna
yeh rishtaa plays in backround
but duggu come from da school - kya nahi kehna chate mujse
akshara- duggu school se aa gaye
duggu- ha maama
duggu(in mind kuch nahi batte bade log)
duggu on phnoe wid yash n aanya di
duggu- aapko logo ko pata hai bade log kuch chipa rahe hai mujse
both -yeh bade log aaise hi hote hai
yash- aare duggu ho sakta hai nahi hogi batane bali baat
aanaya- chod na duggu chal
after FIFTEEN days
natik -bhabhi maa aur choti maa letter aa gaya hai aur pass port bhi kaal niklana hai din mein 12 baje capetown ke liye
akshara- kal kal to duggu ka first exam kaise mein nahi jahoo baad mein duggu ke sath aa jayo
natik- yeh nahi ho sakta mein khud bhat is bhare mein
choti maa n bhabhi maa- aare tum dono tension maat lo mein saambhal lugi
Edited by --neeru-- - 9 years ago

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