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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

very very very nice part...
naksh ka amazing dance...on one of my favourite song...
love it...
naitik ka akshara ko hot bolna...so sweet yaar...
everything is soo cute...
amd beautiful...like our naksh...
well done
do update next part soon...
****/5 stars

Aww how sweet sona dear ...thanku thanku thanku thanku so much for liking this part nd gave comments dear. .this is so beautiful ...u liked it awww...
Yup our naksh r d best ..thanks for ur stars dear ...I will try to wrote many more parts like this ...😛
Hpy frdship day again...
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Posted: 10 years ago
happy friendhship day to u too...
love u :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

happy friendhship day to u too...
love u :)

Love u too...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
all the scenes are superb.. naksh outing was amazing.. naitik ka akshi ko bakri bolna was nice.. mandir scene park scene gurudwara scene rain scene.. every scene is nice and wrote beautifully.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

all the scenes are superb.. naksh outing was amazing.. naitik ka akshi ko bakri bolna was nice.. mandir scene park scene gurudwara scene rain scene.. every scene is nice and wrote beautifully.. waiting for next part

Tqq tqq so much misri dear for liking this part nd gave comments dear. ..sach a beautiful nd lovly comment dear ..I will do update next part soon dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-16
Both stood nd akshi got emmbresed..because she was wet nd also she was shivering ...
Na-ghar chale ...
Ak-aaj tumne apni duniya mujhe dikhai ..ab meri bari hai tumhe apni duniya dikhane ki ..
Na-matlab..
Ak-wo masti jo tumne nhi ki ..
Na-but kal to shadi hai na..
Ak-hmm to kya hua ..hum ghar chalege na to waha one day outing with me..
Na-done ..aaj to tumhe sab aache laga na ..
Ak-bhut bhut ...I love u ..gave hug ..moving her hand on his back..mujhe bhut tand lag rahi hai ..
Na-chalo ...both sat on buke nd went in home ..
Akshu said bye ..but natik hold her hand ..
Ak-chodo na ..
Na-nhi..gave naughty smile..
Ak-esse mat smile karo pls...saw on his eyes..
Na-kyo ...
Ak-bas esse hi ..
Na-akshu ..bolo na pls kyo..
Ak-kyoki ..
Na-hmm..
Ak-jab tum smile karte ho ..gave hug..bhut cutee lagte ho ..blushing. .
Na-laugh ..tum na ..bandariya ..ho..
Ak-broke hug..sach mai ..pulled his cheeks ..ur smile is so cute in ur face ..
Na-thanku ..but tumrai nhi hai ..
Ak-kya .😲bandar mai itni tarif kar rahi hu ..nd tum ..mai ja rahi hu ..
Na-akshu ki to puri face hi cutee hai ..kyo ..
Ak-smile ..tqq ..he came close ..nd gave kiss on her cheeks ..like rimjhim romance. .she felt this ..
Mai jau ..
Na-bye ..gave flying kiss. .she also ..both returned home ..
More parts coming soon😳
Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Next morning ..everyone was busy in wedding preparation .koi dress lene koi decoration ..koi khana ..un short every one was busy of both side..everyone shouted so much ...
Sab ready ho rahe in ..evening ..akshu also getting ready. .
Mus in room...she was half ready ..
Mu-tu ye gown pehengi meri wedding mai..
Ak-aur kya pehnu ..india to bilkul nhi ..us din tujhe bola ki mera duppata set karne k liyd kisi ko bhej de ..to kiya hi nhi ..
Mu-didi ..akshu ko ye red saree pehna do ..pls
Ak-kya saree ..mai samal nhi paugi..
Mu-just try na ..maine tere liye hi li ..aur natik ko bhi Indian dresses bhut pasand hai pls ..
Than she got ready with d help of girl ..like in karwachauth she wore saree red..looking so beautiful ..
Mu-waaw tu kitni pyari lag rahi hai ...
Ak-thanku ..tu bhi ..gave hug ..now barat came with shout voice..waaw teri barat aa gai lagta hai ..
She went in balcony ..nd hode her saree behind one girl ..natik was dancing ..nd saw here nd there ..he was searching to akshu than saw her face ..in balcony ..said hii ..he wore red serwani ..akshu was so hpy that both combinations is red...he said in isara that will u come infront of me I want to see u fully ..but she didnt ..pls could u ..no ..than she took one flower nd throw on his face ..
He didnt give any response..she gave flying kiss nd said sry in esara but he was still same ..
Now every one was stood in door ..main door ..mus mom doing aarti nd all ..natik was lill angry .than some flower leaf s coming on his face ...
Na-are ye ..nd saw their was fan wer all leafs putting in thali nd coming on his face ...akshu stood behind ..than after that ..vry less leafs put nd he saw one latter..took it ..
Na-mera sapna ho tum jisse maine dekha usse bhut pyare ho tum ..meri jan mera aarman ho tum ..kyoki duniya mai sabse jayada pyare ho tum ...mere natik .tumhari akshu ...
Than he saw to akshu ..nd becoming surprised .that saree ..wo bhi red..
Na-amazing ..came near In whisper voice ..tum is duniya ki sabse beautiful girl ho ...
She blushed ..thanku ..
Than all r went iiside of house ...naksh also ..all girls saw to jutte akshu also...she took but natik hold her hand ..
Na-are are ..ladke wale itni aasani se giveup nhi karege ..
Ak-aacha ..hum bhi ladki wale hai esse har manne walo mai se nhi hai..
Na-dekhte hai ..he took shoes nd went ..
She saw to natik nd made face that why he didnt give ..
Na-went near with jutte..gussa ho ..
Ak-mai kon hoti hu na ..
Na-are ..jo bhi aCha par jhute nhi milege..
Ak-haa tum yaha chair par baith jao ..
Na-nhi ..
Ak-aacha ..baitho mai koi upas kojti hu tumhse jhute lene ka ..she hold her shoulder nd sit to him on chair but chair broke nd he falls ..
Na-aauch ..this is cheating..
Ak-took jutte uu ..every thing is fair in love nd war ..natik ..
Na-she trun back but natik said aaa ..she went near ..
Ak-sry lagi kya bhut jor se ...
He hold her nd made sat on his lap ..haa lagi na dil pe ..
Ak-aa chodo ..this is cheating..
Na-every thing is fair in love nd war ...he gripped her so tightly. .
Ak-radha ..suno ..
Girl-ji didi..
Ak-lo jutte ..she took nd went ..
Na-haa ..ab to bilkul nhi choduga..
Ak-mat chodo ..jutte to gye ...natik koi aa jayga pls chodo ..
Na-nhi ...he cuddled his hand on her hand ..nd also he is facing to her back ..deep nack touches to him..
More parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
He lost in her skin nd touch her bare skin with his lips ..
Ak-aahh..natik ..with this touch ..she gripping his hand more tightly ...
Na-I love u ..his hot breath touches to her bare shoulder ..
He took dori of blouse in his mouth ..nd open this ..
Ak-natik...koi ..yaha .pls chodo ..
Na-akshuu ..tum meri soch se bhi jayada sundar ho ..nd kisses on her back ..
Ak-tum bhi ...lost ..
Na-he was come in near of her nack ..like in every hug natik coming ..
His noses touches to her nack ..
Na-r u so beautiful better from my imagination ..tum mujhe drems mai bhut tadpati ho ..
Ak-tum bhi ..smile ..
Na-aacha means mai roj tumhare sapno mai aata hu naa.
Ak-kyo batau ..wo mera sapna hai .
Na-par mai to batauga ..tum to aati ho pucho mat kya kya karti ho ..
Ak-she put hand on his mouth..bas haa ..jo hai bolo mat ab..
Na-are suno na..aati ho ..phir mujhe dakka deti ho bed mai ..
Ak-sshhh...phir chup raho pls ...put hand on his mouth ..he skkiped. ..
Na-phir ..suno na ..phir mere pass aati ho ..bhut pass..
Ak-she put hand on her ears ..bas mujhe nhi sunna ..bas karo..
Na-laugh ...dar gai ..skkiped her hand ..phir mujhe ..
Ak-nhi ..pls..
Na-pillow se marti ho ..aur bhut fight karti ho ..
Ak-chii ..dat ...hit on him..
Na-tumne kya socha ..
Ak-kuch nhi ..jane do..
Na-nhi ..
Ak-jane do ..try to free her body ..
Na-sshh..she sat on his lap ..he touches to her face ..but I love u more than my life ..I should touch u but after first day of our wedding ...I want this touch will be feel after first day of marriage ..
Ak-smile ..nodded yes. .gave hug put face on his chest..hmm..
Na-waise ..maine ye hug bhi dekha hai ..aur haa aage bhi..
Ak-put hand ..ho gaya ..bhut tease karne ki jarurat nhi hai haa ..dad morning mai car bhejege ..pata nhi maine unse bat ki thi jaldi bulaya hai..
Na-kyo ..oki hum chalege sath..
She went phere was start ..both stood nd throw rose on each ...nd enjoyed ..now this time every one have dinner ...akshu stood in hull nd one girl came nd gave thread to her..
Ak-ye kya hai ..but she went ..she was confused ..but saw natik stood upstairs nd gave isara to binding to thread ..
She followed nd did same which he said ..now he skkiped one ring in thread. .nd swlly swlly it going to near her finger ..
She was so hpy ..nd ring went on her middle finger..it was so beautiful ...
She gave flying kiss ..nd said ruko ..than she said binding to thread in his finger ..he did same ..she also skkiped ring in his finger...
He was so surprised ..waaw ..in isara vry pretty ...
Both came near ..
Na-tum ..
Ak-haa mai bhi lai thi soch rahi thi kaise du ..but
Na-lo ye to engagement ho gai hamari. .
Ak-sshh...tum bhi na ..
Now one boy said to dancing ..this is d last time we r with each ..so ..enjoy d song ..nd apne couple ke sath mai dance kariye..
Naksh also started dance ...song played in background. .
Ak-hoto pe bas tera nam hai ..
Na-tujhe chahna mera kam hai ..
Ak-tere pyar mai pagal hu ..put his hand on her waist..
Na-mai subah sam ..dancing like couple.
Ak-janam I love u ..u love me ..janam I love u ..u love me ..
She resting on his chest ..nd wedding will be finished ..
Now bidai nd all..in morning both said bye to their frds ..sat on car ..
Bth was so hpy ..
Hold their hand ..d entering into house ..
Ak-tum jate hi bat mat karna pls ..
Na-I know thoda wait phir oki ..
Ak-hmm..
Both reached into door than ..rajshree saw to akshu ..nd she was vry hpy ..
Raj-meri bachi ..
Running in d side of akshu ..
Ak-mom ...than natik saw to someone nd skkiped her hand ..she was shocked ..kya..
Na-aap???😲
Raj-rajshree feed sweet
Akshu was shocked😲
Both gave surprise look😲?????
So guys howz this part ..I m waiting for ur sweet comments nd pls if u like this part press like button ..I m waiting. .
Precap-suspence. ..
Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohoo..
very cute and romantic part
saari leaves flowers omg...
and chair wali roamcne and dream hehehe...
dhaga wali scene and engagement is spl and cute...
ye last mein suspense kya hain???????
nk ki chachu aayi hain kya??
waiting for next part
update soon... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
Too much romantic shaadi se pehle ye haal hai to baad me kya kya hoga
Their cute talks ... New twist bhi diya end mei
Shukr hai kisi ne to ff update kiya. Yar boht wait krwaya tumne Ruchi. Ab next part jldi update krna.
Edited by Nairaksh - 10 years ago

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