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Posted: 10 years ago
New part is udated on page 27
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
after a long time
naksh ki nok jhok never ending
and chikni chameli hip. Dance by naitik omggg
do update soon
precap????
naksh dance and fighting hehe
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --pranu--

Nice part

after a long time
naksh ki nok jhok never ending
and chikni chameli hip. Dance by naitik omggg
do update soon
precap????
naksh dance and fighting hehe

Thanku thanku for liking this part nd gave comments princess I was waiting for ur comments yup I will tell u precap nd I will update soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
very good part ruchu
i really enjoy it...specially naitik ka chikni chameli dance...aur naksh ki fight...
but hope they patchup soon...
lovely part...
ur stars ***/5
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

very good part ruchu
i really enjoy it...specially naitik ka chikni chameli dance...aur naksh ki fight...
but hope they patchup soon...
lovely part...
ur stars ***/5

Thanku so much thanku sona for liking dis part nd gave comments to me nd thanku for stars jo 3 par atak k gye hai 😆 patchup amm uske liye read this ff
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh


Thanku so much thanku sona for liking dis part nd gave comments to me nd thanku for stars jo 3 par atak k gye hai😆patchup amm uske liye read this ff

ok ji
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for being late... naksh sweet fight was too good... dance scene is very interesting.. akshi ka popat ho gaya but love her anger.. do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

sorry for being late... naksh sweet fight was too good... dance scene is very interesting.. akshi ka popat ho gaya but love her anger.. do update soon

Aww thanku misri for ur sweet comments dear I thought to ask u read this ff also ...yup I will do update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-7
Akshu sat on bed thought about incident.. close her eyes ..Saw their fight wen natik touches to her...she felt her touch ..nd smile ...than sudden she open her eyes...
Ak-ye kya ho raha h akshu tujhe...ye ghan gurudev kyo djkh raha hai...esse kam tang karta hai jo phir sapne mai aane lag gya..oo god ise kuch to sabak sikhana hoga...
HERE NATIK ALSO SLEPT :-
Saw akshis face ..close his eyes..he turn here than there...cant sleep..
Na-kya ho raha hai mere sath ..nind aate aate kyo kho gai yr..ye akshu hai to thikhi mirchi par bhut sweet bhi hai ...nd thought ...oo god ..mujhe sona chahiye ...
Both slept..next morning:-
Akshu is so much in anger ...
Mus-kya hua..tu bhut paresan hai ..koi setani ..
Ak-kuch nhi ..mera mood kharab ho gya ..sirf natik ke karan..wo itna tang kar diya hai ..mujhe nind bhi nhi aai rat ko ..
Mu-matlab tu use pasand karne lag gai hai ...
Ak-no never..duniya ka last boy bhi hoga to bhi nahi...bas esse hi
Mus-chal chod na..meri shadi enjoy kar yr..akshu tu esse rahegi tang Karne wali aaj tang ho rahi hai..man na man jab insan tang hona suru ho jata hai na ..usse pyar ho jata hai 😃
Ak-bakwas mat kar tu ..aaj to kuch nahi hai na...ab to sangit h tin din bad..aaj ka kya plan hai..
Mu-hmm hmm tera fav..disco..
Ak-waaw waw in night ...kon kon
Mu-actually maine aur alok ne decide kiya hai hum apne frds ko..disco ..mai ek party denge ...
Ak-not bed ..haa ..pura maja aayga ..teri shadi ka ..gave hug..
HERE NATIK ND ALOK :-
Na-nhi .no never ..mai nahi jauga..bas
Al-pls yr ..kyo nakhre dikha raha hai ..waha essa kuch nahi hoga..
Na-par yr mai essi jagah par nahi gaya khabhi bhi..
Al-par try to kar..maja aayga..maine muskan ko bol diya hai ..akshu muskan sab aayge..
Na-kya ...thought wo aaygi ..hmm ..tu bolta hai to thik hai ..its oki ...
Al-ek minute ..akshu ka nam lete hi sir man kaise gye ..kahi ladai karte karte made teasly face..
Na-are yr wo nhi..tu janta hai na bhabhi ..unka dil na tut jaye ...
In disco In night:-outside all girls waiting for boys...
Ak-wore white short dress ..sliveless...nd open hair ..wore earrings with makeup ..looking hot ..oo god yha to ulta hai ..hum boys k liye wait kar rahe hai..
Mu-bas yr ..10 minute hi to hui hai..
Ak-haa haa ...
Than boys reached :-
All r coming expect natik..akshu saw nd little confused ..
Ak-man...ye kyo nhi aaya ..tu bhi na wo to pujari hai yaha kaise aayga...
Al-hii ...sabko hum aa gye ..chale ..
Mu-natik bhahiya nhi aaye kya ...
Al-are haa..wo car parking karke aa raha hai ..
Akshi face coming a cutee smile ...natik came he wore of course black suit looking hot ...akshi saw nd little lost ..
Natik didnt saw to akshi..
Mus-ab chalte hai ander...chalo akshu..
Ak-haa ..hmm ..
Sudden natik saw to akshi ..
Na-waaw first word ..but he dont see again...now all entering. ...
All have paired ..but akshu natik r single...
Al-hame to mark lag gya ..in dono ko kaise ...
Mu-ye dono ko couple bana dete hai...
Al-gud idea..
Ak-no never ..mai aur eske sath..
Mu-are yr ..tu to ..bas yha tum dono ki entry k liye na ..ander mat bat karna..
Ak-oki...
Al-natik ..
Natik saw to akshi nd her talks..
Na-hmm
Al-akshu k sath ..fine..
Na-fine...smile ..
Men gave disco mark to naksh ..
Men-sir mem ..pls hand pakad k ..aap apni girlfrd k kamar mai hat rakh lijiye..
Na-nervous ..kya ..nahi ..shocked ..
Ak-tum bhi in low voice ...she hold his hand ..natik felt somthing ...both saw in each eyes..
All-chale...
Naksh-hmm..)-
Na-saw to akshi from side ..but akshu didnt see ..all came nd akshi skkiped his hand...
Natik saw to akshi ..she run ..meet her frd..natik stood in side ..he dont know what he will do ...every one enjoyed ...
More parts coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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