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Posted: 10 years ago

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Akshu enjoyed party with frds than..every one doing masti ..here natik also busy with his frds ..alok muskan busy in each other ..

Akshus frd-tu har gai ab hum jo kahge tujhe karna hoga ..kyoki tune ans nhi diya ..

Ak-what mai kisi se nhi darti hu ..Bolo kya karna hai...

Frd-tujhe boys wash room mai jana hai bas ek bar ..

Akshu was shocked to listen ...

Ak-no..ye kya hai..

Frs-looser..ye ye..

Ak-mai looser nhi hu ..she is not interested but said oki..but mai turant jaugi aur turant aaugi..man..oo god help me ..ye log kya kya kara rahe ..

HERE NATIK TALK WITH HIS Frds sudden weter came nd skkiped all drinks on his shirt but but by chance. ..

Na-ye kya kar diya ..uff ab to mujhe ..

Wet-sry sir ..galti se gir gya..

Na-koi bat nahi ...mai clean karke aata hu..he went in washroom ..which akshu gang didnt see...

natik went in washroom nd unwore his shirt nd jekect..upss...door was open..🤣

Outside akshu nd frds..

Frds-go😆😆nd laugh

Akshu was so nervous but slowly went wer was only natik

He didnt see to akshi ..suddenly door closed ..akshu try to open d door but its not open...

Ak-door band ...feared ..she also didnt see to natik ..shouted ..little..kholo ..pls..

Natik felt someone is here turn ..nd shocked. .🤣

Na-aaa in loud voice ..he wore jeans not shirt...🤣

She saw nd shocked ..shouted. .

Ak-aaa 🤣

Natik -bachao pls ..koi hai ..Came ..but try to hide his body with his hand ..🤣

Akshu shocked to saw natik ..went close ...nd put her hand on his mouth ..close her eyes ...both pinned with wall..natik saw to akshi from vry close ...nd lost ..

Ak-dekho ..esse kyo chilla rahe ho ..maine tumhe nahi dekha dont worry ...mai tumhara rape nhi karugi ..🤣bakwas mat karo ek ladke hoke chilla rahe..kuch to bolo ..confused ..oo sry skiiped her hand nd open her eyes..

Na-tum yaha kya kar rahi ho ..matlab ..she saw to natik ..natik felt shy ..turn ..

Ak-sry ..wo mere frds ne bola ..sab milkar majak kar rahe the ..I m sry ...

Na-tum log bhi na ..kya kya karte ho ...mujhe kapde pehnne do pehle idar mat dekhna..🤣

Ak-pehno ..mai kyo dekhugi ..I m not interested ..she moves but due to unbalance ..she falls ..aauch ..but natik hold her ..she hold his bare stomach vry tightly. .he saw in her eyes ...she also ..to touch his body he moved her hand on his back ...he felt like if he saw one minute more to akshi than he felt he doing love to her...so he try to stand to her ...she stood nd trun..

Ak-sry ...wo mai gir bach gai ...man ..ye kya ..

Na-its oki ..wore her shirt nd jacket ...tum door open karo..

Ak-nahi ho raha hai ..

more part s coming soon

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

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He also try to open d door but door is not open..

He-pata nahi mai yha kyo aaya ...aaj kal kisi ka koi bharosha nhi...

Ak-excuse me ..haa ..tumhe kya lagta hai ..tum hi sachi ho ..aaj kal bhajan karne wale ..bhi disco mai kya kar rahe ..aur haa door open karke change karte hai ...saram bhi nhi aati..

Na-mujhe kya pata tha ki ladki ..boys bathroom mai aa jaygi ..warna karta hi..

Ak-aacha ..tum sochte kya ho ..masti majak ..ye sab karna aata hai..kuch kiya to nahi na tumhare sath..

Na-oo haa sayad kar bhi do ..kya bharosha ...

Ak-shout up..oki ..mujhe koi interest nahi hai ..

Na-masti majak mai hi kuch bhi kar sakte ho tum log..

Ak-dekho jayada ..mat ..suddenly ..door opened ..someone came ..

Boy-sry to disturb u both ..pls mujhe washroom use karna hai ..aap log apna kam bad mai kar lijiyega🤣

Naksh shocked to listen this

Na-hum kuch nhi kar rahe the...

Boy-I know itni beatifull couple ..yha bathroom mai disco mai lock the ...ofcourse kuch to kar rahe honge..

Na-ye kya bakwas hai..hum dono koi couple nahi hai..aur haa na khabhi banege ..got it..

Akshi is in so much in anger..she hold his short boy ki ..

Ak-mere frd ne mujhe band kiya ..bakwas mat karo hum dono gf bf nhi hai ...aur na hi honge...nd leave ..

Boy-omg tikhi thi..ekdom hot ..which natik listen ..

Na-kya kaha ..felt bad ..jayada bakwas t karo ..use side mat dekho wo ..meri gf hai ..gussa ho gai ..kuch mat bolo usse ..point his finger on his mouth..

Leave ..

Natik thought-ye maine kyo bola ...mai usse nafart arta hu phir bhi ...someone call to natik ..

Here akshu in so much in anger..went near her frds ..

Ak-tum logo ne hame band kar diya..

Frd-hame...

Ak-us natik ko aur mujhe ..

Frd-are yr ...thoda sa majak pls na ..tu bhi to karti hai ..

Ak-anger ..jayada haso mat tum log..

Frd-aa to gai na ..

Ak-us natik se tang aa gai hu ..kuch serious karna hai ..

Frd-matlab ..

Ak-guys use drink pila de kya..

Frd-not a bad idea...

Ak-idea ...ab dekho natik ji ...sry sry gan gurudev..

Natik stood than one weter came gave coco cola to natik..

Na-ye kya hai mai drink nahi karta hu..

Wat-sir ye to coco ..cola hai ..

He took ..but felt somthing ulta sidha...here

All akshu hide ..saw ..

But sudden muskan came ..

Mu-ye kya ho raha hai ..kya kar rahe ho ..all saw to muskan ..

Ak-kuch nhi bas esse hi ..

Mu-batao ..

Ak-wo natik ko drink de rahe hai ...

Mu-kya ..but ye sab galt hai ...wo drink nahi karta hai..

Ak-ho gya na dekho ..saw natik put blank glass to table..

Mu-oo god isne to pi liya ..she run all also ..

Mu-bhaiya aapne drink pi ..li..sry ..akshu ne sab k sath milke aapko ...

Suddenly natik falls on floor nd shivering ..

All saw nd became painc to saw natik..

Ak-ye kya ho raha hai..

Alok came nd all frds also ..every one came..

Mu-bola tha na akshu majak aacha nahi hota hai but ..tum log mante nahi ho ...bhahiya ..

Al-natik..

Ak-sat on floor ..I m sry natik..maine to thoda sa hi milaya tha ...sry ..pls tum utho na ...

Alok caressing her foot nd hand but he is still same...

Frds-worried ..sry ..aaj k bad no fun..

Akshu cried little...

Ak-mujhe nahi pata tha ye sab ..I m sry natik ...bas majak kiya ..mai kisi ka bura nahi chachti hu ..pls uth jao tum..

Natik-???????

So guys this is next part hope u all r liking this part also ...after so many days I wrote..but aage likhugi is ff ko..pls press like button if u like nd gave comments waiting ...

Precap-all went for picnic ..

Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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SA-SIMRAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

nice part
plz update next part
i also like naksh nok jhk its diffrent hai
and plz Ruchi aapke pahle ff ka name batao na
plz

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Waiting

Aw😳w my princess

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN
nice part
plz update next part
i also like naksh nok jhk its diffrent hai
and plz Ruchi aapke pahle ff ka name batao na
plz

Thanku simran for liking this part nd always gave sweet comments 😳 yup I will do update next part soon dear. ..

My first ff is meri aasiqui tumse hi..second one is this..I wrote three os natik ka sweet surprise nd pyar mai jalan..pyar bhari ek sam😊

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_nakshi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Very nice part

feel good fresh story...

disco mein every thing is awesome naksh in bathroom and naitik shouting bachaao heheheh

finally akshi ki sharaarthi ka full stop lagne wali hain...

picnic omg I am eagerly waiting...😆

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SA-SIMRAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

thanks for reply
nice updatefinally naksh fall for each other but slowly slowly
first time naksh is in disco kash serial mein bhi aisa kuj dikhte

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: --pranu--
Very nice part
feel good fresh story...
disco mein every thing is awesome naksh in bathroom and naitik shouting bachaao heheheh
finally akshi ki sharaarthi ka full stop lagne wali hain...
picnic omg I am eagerly waiting...😆

Aww 😃thanku so much for liking this part nd waaw u said my story is gud nd fresh ...😳yup I also enjoyed wen I wrote this part yr .😆 U never know kya hoga princess akshu is so naughty😆 yup I wil do update next part soon

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

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Edited by ruchinaksh - 10 years ago

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nakshkidiwani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: SA-SIMRAN
thanks for reply
nice updatefinally naksh fall for each other but slowly slowly
first time naksh is in disco kash serial mein bhi aisa kuj dikhte

My pleasure simran...yup swlly swlly felt..serial mai kaha milega ye sab thabhi to socha sayad likh du ..kam se kam ff mai to soch le ...😳thanku so much for liking this part nd gave comments dear. .