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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: SONAMB404
raina you are a amazing writer.. 😊
keep writting 👍🏼

so sweet of u dear thank u so much for liking my ff..

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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

again a nice part raina.. eagerly waiting for next part

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
again a nice part raina.. eagerly waiting for next part

really thank u dear i will update next part soon

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Riddhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Eagerly waiting for next part
Nice part

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz
Eagerly waiting for next part
Nice part

thanks dear

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

hey raina please update ff next part soon i am waiting

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
hey raina please update ff next part soon i am waiting

ok dear i will update tomorrow but not this ff..first ff "tum mile"

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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Riddhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Raina please update tum mile today

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz
Raina please update tum mile today

ok dear i will try

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

PART 3
nk-totally confused ??
all ss members are too confused with nk except dadda ji
nk-mai kya ? i mean
dj-munna..tu bahu ne uthakar phere le
nk-uthakar par kyu dadda ji ?
ms members are shocked to hear this..
rj-jamai sa wo ak apne aap uth nahi sakti hai na isliye
nk-kya matlab ye !
dj-munna kaha na bas wo hi kar
nandini-par bauji nk kaise ?
dj-saare sawalo ko jawab tum logo ne milega par munna ki shadi ke baad
nk became angry to hear this..his eyes became red..but he takes ak in his arms..
nobody is happy in ss family..for nk
pandit-to theek hai beta ab aap dono phere shuru kijiye..
nk ak ke leker apne saat phere poore karta hai
saath hi me ak ko kabhi kush na rakhne ki kasam bhi leta hai..
aur ak ko apni jagah baitha ta hai..
pandit-beta ab aap vadhu ki maang me sindoor bharkar..use hamesha ke liye apni jeevan sangini bana lijiye
nk-ji
varsha aakar ak ka ghoonghat uthati hai..
for the first time nk saw ak's face..her beautiful face, innocent smile..all things attracts him suddenly...
nk smiles to see her and ak too
and he puts sindoor in her maang...some pinch of sindoor falls on ak's nose too..
varsha-aree wah ak nk ji tujhe bahut pyaar karenge
ak- :)
nk is only gazing ak without a blink
pandit ji- ab aap pati patni hue.. dono apne bado ka ashirwaad le lijiye
nk-ji
dj-rehne dijiye pandit ji hamara ashirwaad hamare baccho ke saath hamesha hai
and all smiles..all ms ladies take ak to her room for her bidai..nandini and rashmi too joins them..only mens and guest are in the hall..
nk came in reality to see what happemed with him when mohit calls his name
mo-nk
nk-hmm
mo-ye tune kya kia yaar..tujhe usi waqt madap se uth jana chahiye tha yaar
nk-nahi yaar pata nahi mai aisa kyu nahi kar paya
mo-tu ek aisi ladki ke saath reh sakega jo kabhi chal nahi sakti
nk-pls yaar..waise hi mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha ki maine kya kia..aur tu hai ki
mo-accha theek hai..ab jo bhi hai teri shaadi ho gayi hai..ab to bhabhi ko apnana hi padega
nk-sab use apna sakte hai par mai nahi
mo-tera na kuch samajh nahi aata hai..manap me bhabhi ko aise dekh raha tha mano pehli nazar me pyaar ho gaya ho
nk-aisa kuch nahi hai yaar..pyaar wo bhi uss apaahij se
munna ! dadda ji calls nk.
nk-dadda ji aap..wo mai
di-aaj kaha hai aage dhayan rahe mari bahu ke baare me ek bhi shabd na sune hu..
nk-par dadda ji..maine galat kya kaha..hai to wo apa.
dj-aisa kuch na hai..uska ilaaj chale hai doctor ke paas aur wo theek bhi ho jave gi..bas ek accident me uske pair par kuch kharabi aayi thi
mo-par aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki dj ki bhabhi kabhi na chale
dj-koi baat nahi hamari bahu ko hum utna hi pyaar aur sammaan denge..jise sabhi gharwalo ko
nk-ji
dj-accha chal bahu aane wali hi hogi
ak ki bidai ke liye rj varsha sunaina sabhi use leker aate hai..but she is taking a stick in one hand while walking and crying loudly ..nk feels very much embarrased in front of all relatives to se his wife like this..
everyone gives their blessings to naksh
aur ak ko nk ke saath car me baithakar vida karte hai..
IN THE CAR
only naksh and mohit are in the car and ak is crying continuosly
mo-pls bhabhi aap chup ho jaiye..ab to aap apne piya ke ghar ja rahi hai
nk is not interested what he is talking about
ak shyly sees nk..who is looking at outside
mo-kyu yaar bahar kya dekh raha hai..itni sundar bhabhi saath baithi hai aur tu hai ki
ak- :)
nk-hmm..
mo-kuch baat hi kar le bhabhi se..suna hai aaj pehli bar inse mil raha hai
nk-mai bahut thaka hua hu..tu pls apni bakwaas band karega
and ak continuosly watching nk and his mood
mo-to theek hai mai hi bhabhi se baate kar leta hu aur waise bhi kal se to tu mujhe milne wala nahi
nk makes irritating faces
mo-ha to bhabhi aap ye bataiye ki hamare dost aapko kaise kage
ak-bahut acchhe
nk pretends to sleep but he is listening all their talks
mo-waise aap bhi bahut acchi hai..bahut khoobsorat..kyu nk
nk- no reply ..
ak-rehne dijiye mohit ji shayad inhe neend aa rahi hai
mo-aare wah bhabhi par aapko mera naam kaise pata ?
ak-inhone itni baar aapka naam liya isliye
mo-very intelligent..dekhiye ga kuch dino ke baad iske muh par sirf aapka naam rahega
nk-bas kar ghar aa gaya..
everybody at home is waiting for nayi dulhan eagerly especially gayatri and bhabhi ma..dj and company reached at home before naksh..and standing outside of ss for newly wedded couple
nk car se nikalta hai..par ak..he came other side of car and give stick to ak..and she also came out form the car..
gayatri and bhabhi ma are very happy to see ak
but nk is very surprise to see their reaction..
nk to himself-ye ma ko kya ho aisi bahu paakar bhi itni kush..strange
gayatri naksh ki aarti utarti hai aur dono ko andar lekar aati hai
gay-bilkul chand ka tukda hai meri bahu..kisi ki nazar na lage
geeta behen -par bura mat maanna gayartri behen bahu me bhi ek daag hai
gay-hame usse koi farak nahi padta geeta behen..hamara munna uss kami ko pura kar dega..
nk-mai kaafi thak gaya hu maa thora rest karna chahta hu..itna kehker apna gathbandhan ak ke haath me dekar nk waha se chala jata hai
ak became sad to hear like this
bm-ye munna bhi na hamesha gusse me hi rehta hai..tu chinta mat kar bahu..abhi rasmo ke liye wo aa jayega..tab tak tu mere kamre me aakar baith
ak-ji bm
gay-ha bahu tu apne kamre me raat ko hi ja sakti hai na isliye
ak-ji maa..
and they take her in bm's room
PRECAP -naksh suhaagraat and ak im beautiful nighty..hot hot !!

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