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avisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

wow... another super part... super liked it! !!! keep writing

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: avinaksh
wow... another super part... super liked it! !!! keep writing

thanks avi dear..

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varsha

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wow nice dear such a lovely part

keep it up 👏👏👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Lovely part.. looking forward to it..
precap is interesting.. wrote soon

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: varshanakshiran
wow nice dear such a lovely part
keep it up👏👏👏

thanks varsha for ur lovely comment

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raina verma

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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh
Lovely part.. looking forward to it..
precap is interesting.. wrote soon

thank u pragati for ur beautiful comment

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Riddhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Awesome part Raina
Do update Tum mile please

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz
Awesome part Raina
Do update Tum mile please

thank u dear for liking it..but i think u like tum mile more than this..so i will update it soon..

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Sonam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

wow...nice part yar
do write more

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raina verma

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PART 4
nk is doing rest in his room & thinking about his future..
when mohit came here
mo-kya yaar itna udaas kyu hai?
nk- khush hone k koi wajah hai to bata de
mo- kyu nahi itni sunadr biwi mili hai to isliye hi khush ho js
nk- biwi hmm..kya karoonga aisi khoobsurati ka yaar jab wo mujhse kadam milakar nahi chal sakti
mo- tu aisa kyu soch raha hai mere bhai..bhabhi ko apne pyaar me itna rang de ki wo kabhi tujhse peeche na rahen..tu samajh raha hai na mai kya keh raha hu
nk-hmm..mai koshish karoonga
mo-accha chal neeche rasmain shuru hone wali hai..aur mere udaas dulhe jaldi se aa ja..maa bula rahi hai
nk-aata hu
here all ladies bring ak in aangan for her muh dikhayi..
nk came down from his room..rashmi teases him..
rashmi-dada aap bhi bhabhi ke saath baithiye..
nk-nahi mai dadda ji ke paas jata hu
some ladies says..aree munna aa bahu ke paas aakar baith ja..warna kabhi aisa mauka nahi milega..bahar aise bahu ke paas rehne ka..phir to jo karna hai bas wahi..
nk and ak gets embarrased to hear this..
nk-ji mai aya and he went from there
on this ak became sad..
all ladies do her muh dikhayi rasam and praises ak very much..
AT NIGHT
gayatri brings ak to nk's room..
gay- ye lo bahu aaj se ye hi tera aur nk ka room hai..
ak noded her head
gay -aur tere kapde yaha cupboard me laga diye hai..theek
ak-ji maa..
then nandini,rashmi,mohit trio brings nk in the room and gayatri went from there
rashmi-ye lijiye dada aa gaya apka room
nk-isme batane ki kya zaroorat thi ma janta hu
mo-ha par tu ye nahi janta ki bhabhi bhi tere saath yahi rahengi
nk-mujhe ye bhi pata hai..
nandini-accha ab tum dono inhe aaram karne do aur yaha se chalo
mo-aaram nahi ab to apka bhai kaam karega
ras-dada kaun sa kaam karenge didi
and ak is shyly smiling..
mo-rashmi tum bhi na kuch nahi samajhti
nk-yaar tu chup kar aur yaha se ja
mo-aree wah itni bechaini..good..
nk-tu jata hai ki nahi
mo-ha ja raha hu..aur ha happy suhagraat mere sher
and he ran from there quickly and closes the door from outside..
ak is sitting on the bed with her long ghoonghat..and nk closes the door from inside..there is a pindrop silence between them.
nk-wo..wo..mohit bhi na kuch bhi kehta hai
ak- :)
nk-mai wo..ak ji.
ak-nk ji
nk-ji kya ?
ak-aap mera ghoonghat nahi kholenege
nk-oh ha wo mai bhool gaya
he slowly slowly sit on the bed and open her ghoonghat..
ak closes her eyes..
nk astonished to see her beautiful face..
nk-aap bahut sundar hai ak ji
ak opens her eyes says ji
nk-amm..mera matlab hai ki aap change kar lijiye phir hum so jate hain..
ak nodded her head sadly..
ak-par kaha change karu..yaha bathroom ahi hai
nk-bahar hai..par mohit ne door lock kar diya hai..to aisa kijiye aap yahi room me hange kar lijiye
ak-par aapke saamne kaise
nk-aare nahi..mai uss side face karke baith jata hu..aur aap change kar lijiyega..
ak-ji
ak took her nighty from the bag and ready to wear it..it was a beautiful red coloured with a thin strip and without a upper gown..she hesitate to wear it..but she can't do anything..
after some time..
nk-ho gaya
ak-hmm..
and he turned back to lay on the bed..but his eyes stucked on her beauty again..
ak came in front of mirror..
ak-aahh...
nk-kya hua.
ak-ye pin mere hair me...aahh
nk-mai dekhta hu
and he came near her..
he again saw her through mirror..ak's back was facing him and he is doing his work..
nk-ab theek hai
ak-hmm..
from back he just hold her from her waist tightly and put his lips on her neck..and starts kissing her passionately..
he turned ak to kiss her on lips..and about to kiss her..but suddenly he stop..
ak-nk ji..
nk-ak ji aap bed par so jaiye aur mai sofe par
ak-nahi nk ji aap yahi soiye aur mai sofe par
nk-ok..
and she laid on the sofa..and nk on bed
both are facing eachother
nk-aap comfortable to hai
ak-ji
nk-aur aapka pair (leg)
ak-ji...gud nite
nk-gud nite
AT NIGHT
ak was shivering badly due to cold..nk woke up in the middle and saw her..
he quickly get up from bed & went near her.
nk-agar aise ye sooyengi to beemar ho jayengi..he took her in his arms and put her on the bed..she was in deep sleep..he saw ak's legs which was open and touch it delicately..
after some time he too laying beside her..there is only one blancket so he covered her with him in it...and continuosly looking at her innocent face..
nk to himself..sorry ak ji..mujhe nahi pata ki mai kya kar raha hu..aapko pehli baar dekhte hi mai hamari zindagi ka kadva sach bhool gaya..mai aap se pyaar karna chahta hu..bahut pyaar..par shayad mai aapki is kami ko kabhi poora na kar paau..
he forwarded his hand on ak's face..and caresing her eyes..cheeks and then lips..ak was about to yawning ..so he quickly take his hand back..
nk-nahi nk ye tu galat kar raha hai..bina pyaar ke ak ke saath ye sab karna..nahi ye galat hai..mujhe apne aap ko aur ak ko thoda time dena hoga..
he make a difference between them..and just sleep..
IN THE MORNING
nk is on ak..holding her waist tightly..ak wakes up and saw nk with her..she gets really happy..
ak-nk ji pls uthiye
nk-hmm..
ak-nk ji mai hu ak..
nk quickly gets up and rubbing his eyes ti see her
nk-oh sorry..wo atually mujhe bed par akele sone ki aadat hai isiye dhyaan nahi raha
ak-its ok..
she fixed her nighty and get up from bed but due to disbalance she falls on the bed above nk..

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