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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

HELLO FRINDS
i am RAINA...i think a well known member of this forum..
thank u all for appriciating my ff " tum mile "... so here i want to write my new ff..and want u all lke my this ff too..
for this ff i will not compromise with my old one...so don't worry about that...hope u all like my this ff too...
ms and ss are same as in the show..a very traditional family..
akshara is a very shy,innocent girl..who can't speek a single word infront of any stranger..
and naitik is very modern boy..but traditional too..always do what ever he want..
but life is not a bed of roses..for them too..
they will have a arrange marriage here without any meeting,zero interaction and more than that without any love..
so friends pls like or comment if u like my itroduction...i will start this soon...

Edited by rainanaksh - 10 years ago

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hirannaksh

@hirannaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow !! raina ur new ff
i am eagerly waiting for first part
keep rocking

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Riddhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Good luck Raina for your new ff
Eagerly waiting

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hirannaksh
wow !! raina ur new ff
i am eagerly waiting for first part
keep rocking

thank u so much dear

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avisha

@avinaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

superb intro!!!! waiting eagerly !!!! :)

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avinaksh
superb intro!!!! waiting eagerly !!!! :)

thank u avi...

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahwishsolanki
Best of Luck

thank u dear...

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 1
MORNING AT 6 am.
maheshwari's ki laadli beti akshara...is singing a sweet bhajan..oh kanha..
dadi-rooj apni son chiraiya ka bhajan sunkar maan shant ho jata hai..kyu badi bahu
rj- ha ma bas bal gopal se yehi mangti hu ki meri bacchi ki shaadi ek aise ghar me ho jaye jo use bahut kush rakhe
dadi-kyu nahi hoga bahu hamari bitiya hai hi itni pyaari
rj-ha ma..par
then vishambhar come
vish -ma hum aapko batana bhool gaye ki aaj akshara bitiya ko dekne singhania saheb aa rahe rahe hai
rj-ji kya..apne pehle kyu nahi bataya..
vish-shaurya ki ma aap chinta na kare sab ho jayega
rj-ji mai ak se bhi keh deti hu ki vo taiyaar rahe
vish-ji
HERE IN SS
gayatri calling nk's name
gayatri-munna chal uth ja beta dekh 10 baj gayi hai..aur vaise bhi dadda ji bahut naraz hai tujhse..itni raat ko jo kal aaya tha..hal uth ja
nk-pls maa sone dijiye..
gay- bilkul nahi..
sunddenly dadda ji voice
dj-choti dulhan
gay-ji dadda ji
dj-aaj mai munna ki shadi ke liye vishambhar maheshwari ke ghar ja raha hu..ladki dekhne..raj banna ko bata dena
gay-ji dadda ji..par ek bar munna se
dj-koi zaroorat na hai
gay-ji jaisi apki marzi
IN MS..
rj-ak chal jaldi se acche se taiyaar ho ja
ak-kyu ma ?
rj-tere rishte ki baat karni koi aane wala hai
ak-kya..nahi ma mujhe koi shaadi nahi karni hai
rj-kyu ?
ak-nahi ma..mai phir se aap logo ko dukhi nahi dekh sakti
rj-dukh kaisa meri bacchi
ak-ha ma jab bhi koi ladka mujhe dekhke jata hai..aur phir mana kar deta hai..tab aapke aur bauji ki aansu dekhe hai
rj-vo rishte aree vo sab kya jane meri beti ko..dekhna tujhe bhi aisa ladka milega jo tujhe har kami ke saath poora karega..
ak-par ma
rj-kuch nahi bas taiyaar ho ja..mai varsha ko tere paas bejti hu
ak-hmm..
IN SS
nk-uff..ye saari CD's phir toot gayi..maine ma se kaha tha ki inhe hata de..mujhe kharab cheeze bilkul pasand nahi hai
kya hua dada ? rashmi says
nk-ye dekho
rash-to kya hua dada
nk-tujhe koi fark nahi padta par mujhe padta hai
rash-aapko to sirf dadda ji hi theek kar sakte hai..par abhi vo bhi nahi hai
nk-kyu kaha gaye dadda ji
ras- aapke liye ladki dekne
nk-kya? aur vo bhi bina mere
ras-ha
nk-nahi mai ye nahi kar sakta..aur vo bhi daddaji ki pasand ki ladki se bilkul nhi..ab mai kya karu
ras-chup chap shadi aur kya
IN MS
all are waiting for dadda ji and then he arrieved
dj-radhe krishna
all ms-ji radhe krishna
vish-ji aaiye na baithiye
dj-hmm
rj serves him sharbat ,samosa ,chai etc
dj-ji manne kuch na chahiye..bas aap apni bitiya ko bulayie..phir aage baat kare
rj-ji mai abhi ak ko le ke aati hu
vish-ha theek hai
rajshree aur varsha akshara ko neeche leke aati hai
and dadda ji..shocked to see her..
but di-smiles..baitho beta
ak-ji
dj-thare baare me maine bahut kuch suna hai shankri se..aur aaj dekh bhi liya
ak - :)
dj-wahi bhola pan hai jaisi mari choti dulhan me hai..wah bahu..tu to mare munna ko bhi bahut kush rakhegi
rj-ji bahu..matlab
dj-vish manne thari beti ghani pasand aayi hai aur mai isse apne ghar ki bahu banane ko taiyaar hu
vish and rj became happy to hear this..
vish-dhanya vaad dadda ji..aap aisa kijye apne baaki gharwaalo ko bhi yaha lakar ak ko dikha de to
dj-uski koi zaroorat na hai..vo mari baat ko kabhi mana nahi karenge..khaas kar mara munna ..har baat mane hai meri..
rj-ji theek hai to hum apne pandit ji ko bukar sagai ki tareekh nikal va lete hai
dj-ha ye theek rahega..par mai chahe hu ki ye shaadi isi hafte me ho jaye..aur sagai shaadi dono ek hi din ho jaye
vish-jaise aapki marzi
dj-theek hai mai chalta hu..radhe krishna
all ms-radhe krishna
shaurya-par bauji sabko ak ke bare me pata nahi hoga to phir kaise
vish-shaurya beta jab unhone kaha hai ki kisi ko koi aitraaz nahi hoga to phir kyu chinta karte ho?
sh-ji
rj-aakhir hamari beti ko uske sapno ka rajkumar milne wala hai kyu ak
ak-shyly went from there..
IN SS
dadda ji calls everyone in hall..but nk is not there
dj-maine bas ye kehna hai ki jo ladki mai mare munna ke liye pasand karke aaya hu vo laakhon me ek hai
rb-ji dadda ji..hame aapki pasand par poora bharosa hai
nandini-par bauji ek baar nk ko uss ladki se milava dijye..vo bhi use dekh lega
dj-manne kaha na uski koi zaroorat na hai..uski shaadi wahi hogi jaha maine pasand kia hai..bsa ab tum log munna ki shaadi ki taiyaari karo..
bm and gay..
gay-dekhiye na bhabhi ma..munna ki shadi aur vo ladki na dekhe aise hota hai kya?
bm-tu chinta mat kar choti dulhan..vo kabhi muna ke liye kuch galat nahi sochenge..
nandini-ha choti ma aap chinta mat kijiye aur ye dekhiye apni hone wali bahu ki photo
bm-aree wah ye to kitni sundar hai
gay-ha bm hai to sundar..mai ye munna ko dikha ke aati hu..
GAYATRI IN NK'S ROOM
gay-beta tu neeche kyu nahi aaya
nk-kya faida aane kya
gay-kyu?
nk-aur kya hoga to vo hi jo dadda ji chahenge
gay-tu aise kyu keh raha hai beta..mai ho naa ..ye dekh mai hone wali bahu ki photo layi hu.bata kaisi hai
nk-bahu ? ha a a..mujhe nahi dekna
gay-dekh na munna aise muh bana kar mat baith tu
nk-kaha na maa nahi dekna..aap logo ko jo theek lage wahi kariye..mujhe kuch nahi karna
gay-iska matlab tu shadi karega
nk-mujhse kyu pooch rahi hai
gay-javab de na munna
nk-ha karoonga..par baad me agar koi gadbad hui to mai uska zimmedaar nahi rahunga
gay-theek hai ab to photo dekh le
nk-nahi maa ab to usee mandap me hi dekhunga
and here is day dreaming about her would be husband..