FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein-Updated Part29@Pg58 - Page 37

Originally posted by: pvlaks

Hai saru wish u a very happy and prosperous new year 2012 😃😃

at last yehan comment dene keliye me first ho gayi😃 🥳

kya bathaoon saru 😍 i swear story already maaloom hai aisa laga hi nahi 😃👏 uthna acha se story ko aage leke gayi ho👏 fantastic update...starting scene se lekar end tak 😳 yehi haal tha😃
ped pe chadke amla thodke lana is 😆 such mein hassi ruka nahi...dartha bhi hai lekin akshi ko nirash bhi nahi karna chahtha hai😳 chooo chwweett hubby😳😍 John ko munna ki nature ache se malom pada hai 😆 isiliye bechara maan bhigaye kaam india mein se hikarne ko😆i liked the way akshi expressed the gd news to munna😳😳 a very beautiful update saru 😳👏 now continue sooon...waiting for the comng parts very eagerly😳

Hi Lakshmi di... Happy new year for u too... 🤗

Thanku so much lakshmi di... I'm very glad that u liked the updated.. I felt so happy when u said u didn't realize dat u read the similar story already... thanku so much for the compliments...

will be updating next part very soon... 😃

Originally posted by: shweta31

wobderful part di too gud...👍🏼superb part...😛this detailed os is more fantastic than previous one...😃especially that monkey scene too funny...😆naitik happiness to get the news so sweet...😍plzz keep writing like this excellent part...😊try to update next part soon...⭐️love u a lot!!!!!!!!!!🤗

hey sweta... thanku so much... I'm very happy dat u liked the part more than the OS... will be updating next part very soon... love u tooo... 🤗

Originally posted by: _naksh_raz

Saru di 🤗

This part was soo nice...It was an edited version on the OS..nah😃😃😃

It was really good..the beginning and the thousands of the neck kisses..and the eye lids..remind me of 13th July☺️☺️☺️..I was shocked😲😲😲..as you wrote it so comfortably this time..and even more..and then you ended it with Piya bawari😳😳😳..Reminded me of the golden days!!

The whole part was of good news..The Mango part was hilarious,Naitik climbed up..woh bhi itne mushkil se..aur upar toh bandar tha..bandar and bandhar ka bacha..bechare..dono hi bandhar ko plead karna para🤣🤣

Bandhar chalegaye...fir he got the mangoes and came off...Hayye..Naitik is such a sweetoo...😆😆😆

Khatthe aur Meethe..she ate them all..and i bet very licarioushly(oops i think this is a bajan(dialect of Barbadian..language>>>Meaning..wanting to eat it more more..just bcz of the feeling..like over-eating)😆😆

And i learnt a word in telugu udukubothutanam, had difficulty in trying to pronounce😆😆,but i think i got it..

Then taking out the callender😉 i liked this..to see if she missed her Periods and goign to the doctor and telling him...Naitik is buddhu..He thought she was calling him...but..instead he got better news!!

Eagerly awaiting the next part !!!

Do continue soon!!

Thanks for the PM

Love you

Raz😆

hey raz... 🤗... first of all I'm so happy to read the comments.. I was little bit busy yesterday so I was late in replying... I'm very happy dat u liked this improved version of OS... n haa nice to know that I improved writing romance... 😳.. this is a very good compliment for mee... 😳

but raz... I think ur hindi is more rocking than mine... 😉😆😆... aamla means not mango... aama means Indian gooseberry... 😉... but no problem... amla or mango... the concept is the same... akshi wants to eat katha and naitik gave them... 😳

yaa dat telugu word is little bit big word... it means the slight anger which we get when someone teases us.. I dont know the exact word in hindi or english... so used that... 😛

will be updating the next part very soon raz... as usual my jhappi's... 🤗🤗🤗
love u too... 😃

Originally posted by: sejal719

saruuu

awesome part... i liked it... i already loved ur os and now i love this even more lol...

love the monkey part it was soo funny lmaoo... only you would think of something like that... lmaoo... loved it...

plz write more soon

ttyl

bye love you <3

hey seju... 🤗
I'm very glad that u loved the part more than the OS.. n the monkey hehe... u know naa I love to write funny n cute parts// 😳😉😆... will be writing more very soon to torture ur sh... 😃
love u tooo dear 🤗

Originally posted by: Abommi

Loved Your Update😍

Monkey Scene Was So Funny😆And Naitik Climbing Too😆

I Couldnt Get You That Telugu Word di

Good News::You Expressed In Words That Awesome👍🏼❤️

Finally,Budhu No.1,No.2 😆🤣

This is for You di🤗

Happy New Year 2012

hey anu... u always make me happy by writing my names differently... I loved this one also... I'm very glad that u liked the part... n dont worry abt the telugu word... it means a slight anger which we get when someone teases us funnily... 😉 hug for u too... 🤗

n haa Happy new year... 😃

Originally posted by: nakshcrazyfan

yar kaise baate karte ho. I just said ki pm me nxt tym. Y wud there be a prblm in adding u in buddy list? And it's ok. Vaise bhi buddies aise baate nahi karte.

I'm so sorry for asking like that.. I'm happy to get a new frnd... will be pming u without forgetting frm next time... 😃

Originally posted by: fazeel

wow saru nice part...😃

i loved monkey part and i love when akshara say monkey is female he he...🤣 really she sooo funny yaar

where u get this idea baba really fab...👏 scene saru

i already liked ur os and in this part i loved it saru

and naksh scence was tooo romatic ...😍

waiting for next part..😛

thanks for pm...😃

hey nas... Thanku so much... I'm very glad that u liked the part... our akshara is not less naitik... she is as funny and as naughty as naitik... 😳...

thanks for the compliments nas... I usually keep on imagining naksh whenever I'm free... dats where I get the ideas... 😳 will be updating next part very soon.. .😃

Originally posted by: saru.g

hey raz... 🤗... first of all I'm so happy to read the comments.. I was little bit busy yesterday so I was late in replying... I'm very happy dat u liked this improved version of OS... n haa nice to know that I improved writing romance... 😳.. this is a very good compliment for mee... 😳

but raz... I think ur hindi is more rocking than mine... 😉😆😆... aamla means not mango... aama means Indian gooseberry... 😉... but no problem... amla or mango... the concept is the same... akshi wants to eat katha and naitik gave them... 😳

yaa dat telugu word is little bit big word... it means the slight anger which we get when someone teases us.. I dont know the exact word in hindi or english... so used that... 😛

will be updating the next part very soon raz... as usual my jhappi's... 🤗🤗🤗
love u too... 😃

Originally posted by: Asawari_naksh

First of all wish you and your family a very happy and prosperous new year...🤗

Awesome update Saru...😃

Beutifully written...have to agree you have improved in romantic part 😳 But you know we are Naksh fans so never satisfied with their romance, the more the merrier...😳😆 Again SMP ☺️and this one lead to Akshi's pregnancy...😍

I don't mind reading your OS again as I thought it was the best...😃 So don't be sorry and be happy that you are giving the readers like me another opportunity to read your beautiful writing...😉 Overall a wonderful update.

Thanks for the PM 😃

hey ashi... Happy New Year for u tooo... 🤗.. nice to know dat I improved in writing romantic parts.. 😳... but its true that u girls never satisfy with their romance... always want more.. 😳...

Its nice to know u liked the OS and also this part... I'm soo happy... Thanku so much... 😃

Originally posted by: _naksh_raz

😳😳😳..oops..i seriously thought that meant mango..ROTFL...i never know it was gooseberry...lol...im so embarrassed...thanks for telling me..yaad rakhungi...aur haan...my hind is much more rocking🤣

hehe... lol.. 😆😆... u stay away frm indian naa... so its ok even if u dont know the meaning amla... 😉