NaKsH- A jOuRnEy TiLl EtErNiTy (ch 7 is @ pg 21) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Adhervika

Really nice update...👏👏

Do continue soon...😊😊



thanks a lot.. would update tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely ff read all parts continus soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mslakshmi

good job keep writing




thanks a lot... i would update tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: beoun

very nice part jasmine👏...naitik makng tea n select saree 4 her😍.luvd it...😃...i thought ki she is pregnant...bt anemia nikla..koi bath nahi...😊naksh ki cute cute scenes ho tho kuch bhi chalega😉.waitng 4 ur nxt part ..cntinue soon...



wait for the next few parts.. many surprises are in store for you people!!!

i would update the next part tomorrow
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: i4naksh

very nice yar keep writing


thanks a lot.. next part would be updated tomorrow!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

well written do write more n soon👏



thank ew!! would update the next part tomorrow :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetu_naksh

hey once again nice part...

continue soon😊



thanks a lot.. next part coming up tomorrow!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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guys i am sorry for the delay.. got busy with my school work.. 😭 this update is a bit short AND MIGHT BE BORING 🤢.. but the next update would be a maha update..


CHAPTER 4

naksh are stunned to find the whole family gathered in the hall. they choose not to stand there and move to their room but stop on hearing dj..

dj.. RUKO

(naksh turn back and are a bit scared)

dj :- bahu idhar aao..
(akshara hesitantly moves towards him)

dj(giving her a bunch of keys) :- inhe sambhalo.. aj se yeh sb tumhari hain..

everyone is stunned and look at each other's face..

dj:- aise kya dekheo hai?? tumko kya lagta hain -- ham apne bacho bina reh paye??

(all are happy that the bantwara is over)

naksh take blessings from every one.. and everyone gets back to his/her work

naksh in room

akshara :- naitik.. sbse dubara milkr kitna acha lg rha hai na!!

naitik :- ha akshara.. maine apko kaha tha na sab thik ho jayega..

(naitik and akshara hug each other)

in the kitchen:- bm and g3 are preparing food for every one

g3:- dj ne to pehle hme dra hi diya tha.. chlo ab sb kuch thik ho gya hai.. munna aur bahu bhi bohot khush hain..

bm:- ha.. main soch rhi hun ki aj hm sbki psnd ki ek ek sbzi bna
lete hain.. sb ki psnd ka khana hoga to khush rhenge.. or munaa bahu ko bhi acha lagega..

g3:- ji bm.. jaise apko thik lge.. hm abhi kisi ko kuch nhi btate..bhojan k samay hi btayenge..

(at this time akshara enters)

akshara :- maa aj khane mein kya bn rha hai.. layiye main apki mada kr deti hun..

g3:- nahi bahu.. tum araam karo.. sb kuch ho gya hai..
bm:- ha bahu.. tu jaake araam kr.. hm tujhe khane k liye bula lenge..

akshara makes a sad face and walks off from there..

at the dining table..every one is very happy to see his/her favorite dish..

naitik and rashmi collectively ask their mother

naitik, rashmi :- maa aj kuch special hai??

g3 :- ni beta.. bs wo dj ne bantwara tod diya.. usi ki khushi mein

naitik:- oohh... maa mujhe to bohot bhuk lgi hai.. main ab wait nhi kr skta..

after the food.. everyone goes to their room for sleeping

in the morning.. naitik wakes up by listening a very melodious voice..

he gets up and sees the time..

naitik :- abhi to 5 bje hain..ye akshara pta nhi kha chle gyi hain.. aur ye subha subha kya ho rha hai ghar mein!!

he comes out of the room n watches akshara singing the morning aarti.. he gets fixed their n keeps on admiring her..
rashmi comes their and says..

rashmi:- dada aj ap itni subha kaise jag gye..??

naitik :- aarti krne k liye

rashmi :- aarti krne k liye ya bhabhi ko dekhne k liye 😆😉

naitik :- tu bohot bolne lg gyi hai.. lagta hai teri dj se shikayat krni padegi..

the aarti gets over and naitik moves to get the prashad..

dj :- naitik aj office jldi aa jaiyo.. kuch kaam hai thare se..

naitik :- ji dj..
naksh look at each other and smile..

naitik has gone to the office and akshara is in the room

akshara(looking at the calander) :- sirf 20 din reh gye hain... pta nhi sb kuch kaise hoga... kitni sari taiyari krni hai.. mujhe to bohot tension ho rhi hai

g3 n bm come to her room and see her doing some work

bm :- yeh kya bahu..tum araam kyu nhi kr rhi?? doctor ne mna kiya hai na zyada kaam krne se...

akshara :- bs bm.. thoda sa hi rehta hai fr uske bad araam kr lungi..

g3 :- nhi bahu... chlo pehle dawayi khao or araam kro... fr bad mein sare kam kr lena..

after g3 n bm go... akshara gets busy in making the list of all the things that would be required in the function..
PRECAP
naitik is very happy and RUSHES TOWARDS AKSHARA WITH A FEW PAPERS IN HIS HAND.. EVERYONE EXCEPT DJ IS SHOCKED AT HIS BEHAVIOUR

hope you guys were satisfied???(though i am not--- because i wrote everything in a hurry) guys do you have some suggestions?? or want me add something in particular in the ff like more of naksh scenes or something else??
you can please feel free to tell me via pm or here in ur post...



Edited by jasminedayal18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cute part. Batwara has ended. Vaise y is akshi preparing so many things? Precap was fun. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the batwara track comes 2 an end...
EAGERLY WAITING 4 UR NEXT PART jasminedayal18😍
THANKS 4 UR PM...⭐️⭐️
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