NaKsH- A jOuRnEy TiLl EtErNiTy (ch 7 is @ pg 21)

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Posted: 12 years ago

A NEW FAN FICTION!!!

LETS ENJOY OUR NAKSH JOURNEY WITH A NEW STORY LINE!!

THE CHARACTERS ARE THE SAME AS IN THE SHOW...
I AM STARTING THE STORY FROM THE BANTWARA SCENE..

CONTENT
CHAPTER 1:- PAGE 1
CHAPTER 2:- PAGE 2
CHAPTER 3:- PAGE 6
CHAPTER 4:- PAGE 10
CHAPTER 5:- PAGE 14
CHAPTER 6:- PAGE 18
CHAPTER 7:- PAGE 21

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Edited by jasminedayal18 - 12 years ago

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chapter 1

naksh and the whole family is very sad with decision of dj.. bm is trying her level best to persuade dj to end the bantwara...

but her pleas are falling on deaf ears.. dj is firm on his decison

on the other hand naksh are surprised and hurt to learn about the recent developments at ss.
ak:- naitik what is happening in our house, y do we have to face so many problems?? y everytime we both have to face them all alone??
nk:- akshara please calm down!! till now we have solved every problem with the help of our parents and have never decided anything ourselves... see now we have got the oppurtunity to do it ourselves.. akshara bura to mujhe bhi lag rha hai pr agar hm ise dusre nazariye se soche to hme ab sabhi faisle khud lene hain. hmare kisi bhi kaam mein rok tok nhi hogi...
akshara:- pr naitik hm maa- bauji se bat nhi kar payenge, unke pas baith nhi payenge.. 😭
nk:- arre meri jaan.. bantwara siraf dj k gusse tk hi hai.. unka gussa shant ho jane do fir dekho kaise pura parivar pehle jaise ek saath rahega..
jaan now stop crying...
akshara:- ap thik keh rhe ho naitik.. hmare liye yeh ek nya experience hain.. ise enjoy karna chahiye pr naitik ap baki logon ka bhi to socho... maa ne to hamesha se hmara sath diya hai to ab sab kuch ek dum se...(naitik puts his finger on akshara's lips)
naitik:- ap dusre logon k bare m thoda kam soch kr apne pati k bare mein bhi soch liya karo... acha akshara..mujhe to bohot bhuk lagi hai.. kuch khane ko mil sakta hai kya??
akshara:- naitik pr abhi to maa rasoyi mein khana bna rahi hongi to main wha kaise jaun??
naitik:- rasoyi wale khane ki kon bat kr rha hai??
akshara is confused and looks at him
naitik:- main to... (goes closer to akshara an holds her) in sundar hontho ki bat kr rha hun..
akshara:- naitik maa aa jayengi.. kya kr rhe hain ap?? plzz chodiye

naitik:- maa nhi aayengi akshara..ap thodi der k liye in sab chizo ko apne dimag se bahar nikal dijiye..
akshara tries her best to come out naitik's hold but then finally gives up
akshara:- naitik apko to bas hr wqt romance hi sujhta hai..
acha chlo ab main khana bnane ja rhi hun.. ap tab tak fresh ho jaiye..
naitik:- hmm thik hai pr usse pehle ek kiss😉
😳she kisses him on the forehead and runs away!
naitik:- iska badla to main lekar hi rahunga akshara...n goes out to take bath...
akshara reaches the kitchen and is shocked to find two stoves and every necessary thing used for cooking in small containers besides the stove on the smaller slab..
she feels bad about everything and is about to prepare the food.. she finds a note near the bigger stove... she is stunned to read the note... and is about to fall when naitik comes there and holds her...
[color=red] precap:- naitik and akshara are talking when suddenly akshara feels dizzy
Edited by jasminedayal18 - 12 years ago

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AngelicDesires

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for your responses.. i would continue in the evening!! Edited by jasminedayal18 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice part continue soon

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Sameera Badar

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nycc Part plz ryt next part soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb ff continue soon ...
eagerly waiting 4 ur ff...😍

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice ff part continue soon

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Very nice part. Continue soon. Waiting eagerly.

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CHAPTER 2

Akshara finds a note near the bigger stove. she is stunned to read the note... she is about to fall when naitik comes there and holds her..
he takes the note from her and reads it and is shocked..

TUMHARA SAMAAN ALAG KAR DIYA HAI.. AB ARAAM SE JO MAN MEIN AAYE KAR SAKTE HO
he keeps the note aside and hugs akshara
naitik:- jaan dont worry... sab thik ho jayega
akshara is very sad and does not say anything..
NAITIK:- akshara i will eat only bread toast.. mujhe bhuk nahi lagi hai..
akshara:- par naitik...
naitik:- arre main pehle se hi kafi mota hun.. paranthe khila khila kar aur kitna mota karoge???😆😆😆
akshara :- acha ab zyada batein mat banao. jaldi se office jao warna meeting k liye late ho jaoge.
naitik :- ok meri jaan

in the evening
naitik comes back from the office and straight away goes to his room and hugs akshara from the back... akshara gets scared due to the sudden hug and turns around
akshara:- apne to mujhe dara hi diya naitik..
they both have a hearty laugh... and suddenly akshara feels dizzy...
naitik:- aj meri jaan ka din kaisa tha?? kya kiya pura din??
akshara does not reply as she feels uneasy...
naitik :- AKSHARA kya hua?? he moves her aside from his hug and finds her in an unconscious state...

he gets scared and wonders what has happened to her... he drags her to the bed and makes her lie down.. n kisses her on the fore head..

he sprinkles a few drops of water on her but she does not give any response...
he looks at the time and it is 9 30.

naitik:- raat bohot ho chuki hai pr mujhe abhi doctor se bat kar leni chahiye..

he calls the doctor and tells her the situation of akshara...
the doctor asks naitik to try waking her up by sprinkling more water on her...

he does so and feels a movement on her lips... he is happy to see her gaining consciousness... he tells the doctor about it... but the doctor asks him to bring akshara to the hospital for a few tests and routine check up..

he is tensed but tries to hide it on seeing akshara looking at him..

akshara:- kya hua naitik?? itne ghabraye hue kyu ho??

naitik :- kuch nhi jaan.. bas thoda dar gya tha..

akshara:- arre thoda chakkar hi to aya tha isme darne wali kya baat thi??

naitik:- akshara chahe chakkar aya ho ya aur kuch.. apko apni health ka dhyaan rakhna chahiye..

akshara:- hmmm.. naitik apne khana khaya??

naitik :- nahi.. or apne??

akshara :- main to apka wait kar rhi thi..

naitik:- akshara maine kitni bar kha hai ki meri wait mat kiya karo.. par ap kabhi sunti hi nahi ho..

akshara.. arre baba agli baar se kha lungi.. abhi to laane do...

naitik :- hmmm thik hai

akshara gets up still feels a bit of weakness but hides it from naitik. she goes in the kitchen...

naitik (to himself):- mujhse jitna marzi chupa lo jaan.. par mujhe pta hai ki tum ab bhi thik nahi ho or bohot kamzor ho gyi ho...

naitik is engrossed in these thoughts when he suddenly finds akshara back in the room..

naitik:- akshara.. kya hua?? ap to khana banane k liye gyi thi na?? to itni jaldi kaise aa gyi??

akshara:- naitik.. idhar dekho.. main khana hi lekar ayin hun... kya ho gya aapko?? itna pareshen kyu ho??

naitik:- haan.. ni kuch nhi, aj meeting k baad bhi bohot kaam kiya to thoda thak gya hun or kal nye client ne ana hai..

akshara:- acha.. chalo ab yeh sab batein chodo.. jaldi sa khana kha lo warna thanda ho jayega..

naitik:- hmmm
as soon as akshara is about to put the first bite in her mouth.. naitik stops her..
akshara:- kya hua naitik??

naitik:- main apni jaan ko khud apne hatho se khana khilwana chahta hun..
akshara blushes and they both feed each other..

after they eat the food.. both of them hug each other and lie down...
naitik:- jaan hme kal doctor k paas jana hai or tum bilkul mana nahi karogi.. main appointment le chuka hun..
akshara:- naitik ab doctor k paas jsne ki kya zarurat?? ab to main bilkul thik hun..
naitik:- ek bar routine check up krwa lete hain phr koi tension nhi..
akshara looks at him and naitik gives her a assuring look... and they both sleep...

precap:- naksh are at the hospital and the doctor is a bit tensed while looking at her reports...

Edited by jasminedayal18 - 12 years ago