My First FF::: Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se, part 15,122 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Awesome Stuti👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i give u⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️4 this update
loved it to the core yaar......kahan se layi aap ye idea😉😉....toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good............nw m desp w8ing 4 d 2nd part😃😃
the siggy is just perfect👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Thnz 4 d PM🤗
Edited by divi4u - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
simply awsum,mindblowing part...continue soon,waitin fr nxt part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73



PART 2-- Woh pehli mulalkaat...
😳

akshi was standing right outside Shoppers' Stop. It was 6.50... she was restless!!!
dressed in a white churidar and suit, with silver work. her black hair reflecting the streetlight, and shining in the moonlight. her chheks were the colour of a rose- bright red. waiting eagerly for naitikji, she was luking at her watch after every 30 seconds. for her, tym was moving miserably slow. the 8 and a half minutes she was wasiting for naitik, seemed like 17 centuries.

after this wait, her restless heart suddenly started beating faster. naitikji came to pick her up in a golden honda city.
she lifted her face to see who had honked... the cars headlight on her face.
naitik came out of his car, wearing a spotless white shirt and a blue jeans, he luked stunning as usual.😳

naitik opened the door of his car for akshi.
delicately, our wonder girl sat inside... naitik started driving...
for the first few minutes, no one spoke. the only sound in the car, besides the soft, romantic music, was that of aksharas beating heart...

naitik finally broke the silence...

N: hi akshara
akshi felt a lump in her throat..
A: hi naitikji
N: thank god! mujhe laga aap bol nai sakti!
A: a sweet smile..
N: aapki class kaisi thi? aap dhyaan de payi ya aapko bhi meri tarah is haseen lamhe ka intezaar tha?
A: meri class achchi thi naitikji.. mujhe bhi is shaam ki pratiksha thi..
N: my god!!! aap hindi kaafi achcha bol leti hain.. aapko english literature mein nai.. hindi mein graduiation karna chahiye...
A: kyon naitikji.. meine kaunsa bada teer maar liya hai?
N: nahi bas... aise hi bol raha tha..

silence returns in the car.. akshara notices.. naitik is in some deep thought...
she asks
A: kis khyaal mein kho gaye aap naitik ji?
N: nahi akshara.. bas mein yeh hi soch raha tha ki.. kya ap mujhe puri zindagi naitikji hi bulaengi? i mean, mujhe naitik se koi problem nai hai... ji bahut formal lagta hai.. naitik hi bulao..
A: aapko jo pasand hai... main aapko woh hi bulaungi.. naitik j... naitik..!!!😳


together... start laughing😆 😆 😆

they talk a little further about their favourites, their hobbies, their likes and dislikes, till naitik stops the car in front of a famous restaurant...

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
👏👏👏👏 Woww...It's awesome....The way you describe both naitik and akshara....👏👏
Really nice part....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Nice part sruthi waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
haayee dono kitne pyaare hai.....😳
again u did fab job👍🏼
plzzz cont soon........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
😳
owowwowo..stuti dii..watta awesomee..meeting it wass..!😳
as usuall..mind blowing update sweeetyy!
contiinue sooon..waiting eagerlly..!😉
thanks for d pm!
lov
sonii..!❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
gr8 again,they both r so ccchhhwweet,,, u wrote it so nicely,, continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
Great Update! Thanxz for the PM....
please make your ff a little long! 😳
Want more naksh moments...
PM me as you come up with the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Nyc update yaar... continue soon... u did a fab job...

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