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Thank u soo'much once again 4 ur support n encouragement which leads me 2 write more 4 u all'here is the "6th part of my ff'..

PART-6

(Continues')

(in singhania's mansion, sitting everyone together -daddaji concludes his talk on phone n he comes near 2 babhi maa')

D:humne nandini ki vivaah ki mannath maangi thi na'ab jab usne poora kiya tho mannath tho poora karna hi hai na'aur mera ek pehchaan waale ne kaha hai ki aaj se agar hum 1 maheene thak waha pooja kareinge tho mannath bhi poori karlenge aur is shaadi bhi achi tarah nibha paayenge'aur meine tho apni saari parivaar ko saath le jaane ko kiya tha na'

G:ji daddaji ye accha hoga'aur hum rashmi ke liye bhi acchi rishthe ki mannath maanglenge'.

B: ha choti dulhan tum theek keh rahi ho'lekin munna ka kya karein..?

A:babhi maa..,unki sir dard tho kam ho gayi hai..aur kal thak tho poori tarah theek ho jayenge'

D:tho theek hai bahu..,hum sab log kal subah hi niklenge'

G:ji daddaji..,hum log jaane ki thayyari karlethe hai'

(in naksh room..,akshara goes near 2 naitik')

A:naitik..,aaj kitne dinon ke baad ghar mein sab bohoth ghushi se pooja karne ke socha hai na..?

N:ha akshara..,(n he holds her hand n says)lekin mera sir dard ka kya hoga?hm?😉

A:naitik voh tho mein bhool hi gayi thi aapko bohoth zor se sir dard ho rahi hai'accha..,tho mein aapko voh daddaji waala kaadha banaake pilaa doo..voh tho aaj kal sirf peth dard ke liye hi nahi kuch logon ke liye tho sir dard ke liye bhi kaam aatha hai'kyun?mein laaoo?😉

(hearing this he suddenly leaves her hand')

N:nahi nahi akshara..,voh aap yaha aathe hi door ho gaya'aapne bhi akshara..,kya jaadoo kar diya'(he says in his naughty shaughty smile')😉

(akshara n naitik laughs together..)

(in singhania's kitchen'babhi maa,gayathri n akshara..akshara suddenly rubs her head..)

B:kya hua bahu..?

A:kuch nahi babhi maa',voh thodi sir dard ho rahi thi

G:kaise nahi hoga..poora din kaam karthe raha'beta ab tum jaake aaraam karo mein baam leke aathi hoon..

A:nahi maa..,mein theek hoon..,yeh tho abhi theek ho jaayegi..

G:theek hai beta..,lekin agar zyaada hone laga tho tum mujhe bataana mein tumhaare liye dawaayi leke aaoongi..theek hai?

A:ji maa..

(night at naksh room..,both akshara and naitik r sleeping but suddenly akshara starts shivering n she goes near 2 naitik..n he wakes up')

N:akshara..,(n he seems her shivering n he suddenly gets up from the bed..)

A:akshara..,aap itni zor se kyun kaamp rahi hai?(n he touches her forehead..)aap ko tho bohoth zor se bukhaar bhi hai'

(n he calls akshara n wakes her up..)

N:akshara..,aapko bukhaar thi aur bathaaya thak nahi(he gets tensed)

A:nahi naitik..,voh kuch nahi hai..voh tho subah thak chali jaayegi..(she says in low unwell voice..)

N:aur kal thak aap aise sehthe rahenge..?bilkul nahi..aap pehle ye paani pijiye mein maa se kehkar aapke liye dawaayi leke aathi hoon'

A:nahi naitik..,ab hum maa ko parshaan kyun karein..mein ye paani pee lethi hoon'thodi der thak sab kuch theek jayegi'

N:lekin akshara',

A:meine kaha na naitik..,sab kuch theek ho jaayegi aur kal tho hamein mandir bhi jaana hai na..voh bhi poora 1 maheene ke liye..

N:theek hai akshara..,agar aap keh rahi hai tho'lekin zyaada hogaya tho pls aap mujhe bathaayiyega'

A:ha naitik'.

(n they both lays down in the bed n naitik keeps his hand near akshara')

(morning everyone w8s 4 akshara in kitchen 4 packing foods)

G:babhi maa..,bahu ab tak aayi kyun nahi'

B:choti dulhan..voh thayyar ho rahi hogi'vaise bhi humein tho abhi thodi der mein nikalna bhi hai na'

G:ha babhi maa'

(their going time arrives n daddaji n rabhanna comes 2 main room')

D:munna aur bahu kyun nahi aayi ab tak'

B:ji..,pata nahi..abhi aajayegi'

(at NAKSH room..naitik suddenly wakes up n takes his hand from akshara'n he looks into clock..)

N:kya..?ye tho bohoth der hogayi hai'aur akshara abhi thak uthi nahi..(n he touches his forehead 2 check her fever..)OMG ..ye kal se bohoth zyaada hogaya hai'(n he goes down')

G:munna..,tu ab tak thayyar nahi huyi..,aur bahu..,voh kaha hai'??

N:maa..,voh,akshara ki thabeeyath theek nahi hai..kal raath se unhe bukhaar thi aura b voh bohoth zyaada hogaya hai'

B:kya bahu ko bokhaar hai..,aur tumne hamein bathaaya thak nahi'

A:nahi babhi maa..,voh mein aapko bathaane hi waala tha ki akshara ne mana kiya'unhone kaha ki is raath aap logon ki pareshaan kyun karein'

R(Rajbhanna):lekin ab voh hamaare saath aayegi kaise?aue safar bhi tho itna lamba hai'

R(Rashmi):maa..,mein babhi ke saath yaha ruk lethi hoon'

G:lekin beta..,hamein tho tumhaare lie bhi mannath maangni hai na isliye tumhaari hona bhi tho zaroori hai'ek kaam karthi hoon..mein yaha ruk lethi hoon..

B:lekin choti dulhan..,teri bhi tho hona zaroori hai'tu tho rashmi ki maa hai na'isliye jiske liye hum mannath maang rahi hai uska maa aur pita bhi saath main hona zaroori hai'

D:tho phir ab hum karein key?

G:tho daddaji aap logon ko koyi aapathi nahi hai tho mein yaha ruk lethi hoon'vaise bhi aap mein tho sabki zaroorath hai na'

G:lekin munna tu sab akele kaise sambhaalegi..voh bhi 1 maheene thak?

N:maa..,yaha gulabo aur maharaj ji hain na..,voh hamaari madad karegi..aap log chintha math kijiye/?

B:lekin munna meine tho dono ko 1 maheene ki chutti di hai'isliye kyunki hum jaa rahe hai...

N:phir bhi aap fikar math kijiye maa..,mein sab sambhaalunga'

D:accha..,agar tu keh rahi hai tho..theek hai'

G:lekin apna khayaal rakhna aur bahu ka bhi'

N:ji maa',

(everyone goes near the car'at that time nandini n rashmi comes near 2 naitik n tells )

N:naitik ,tum aur akshara ko 1 maheene ke liye akele chod diya hai..accha moka hai..

R:ha daada'

(naitik smiles n says aap dono bhi na..)

(everyone gets into the car n they begins their long journey 4 one month..)

PRECAP:akshara n naitik alone at home 4 one month with lots of romance on air''.)

Will be continued''''''''''''

This time tried 4 a bit long'hope u liked it..if u lyk then pls press LIKE button ..ur precious comments n suggestions r always welcome'.😊

Thank u'..😊

Edited by shamasallfav - 15 years ago
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heyy am awesome yaar
lovely part
plsss update sooon
waiting anxiouslyyyyyy....
only naksh 4 one month
cont soon
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heya am luvly part dear !!!
NaKsh alone 4 a whole month !!!! 😲😲
wowwww dats gud yaar 😉😉😉
cont. soon dear
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wow am awesome 1 month nd no hadi only naksh wah
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woooww shama!!!! naksh together for one month😛😛...............thts gonna be a sure treat to read!!!!!!..........keep up the gud work...ur awesome!!!👍🏼

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