hamaara pyaar...part-10..pg-37..updated - Page 13

Originally posted by: luv_naksh

it was awesomeeeeeeeeeeee....👍🏼sooooo romantic...😳
Thanks for the PM.....conti soon....😃

Originally posted by: cute_luv

Nice update am......
sry 4 commenting late dear....
Plz cont soon....

Originally posted by: pravz_me

shama ..itz awsum! supa cute!!

hope ul continue soon! ...n plz PM me.!

Thanks 2 all 4 commenting n supporting me'here is the part 5 of hamaara pyaar'do read n enjoy'😊

PART-5

(CONTINUES')

A:ha'hua tha'sirf ek baar'(n she moves into a different world)mera pehla pyaar'voh ehsaas jise mein abhi bhi sirf uske liye mehsoos karthi hoon'is duniya mein mera pyaar hi mere liye sab kuch hai'agar voh ek pal ke liye bhi mujhse door jaathi hai tho dil bohoth ghabra jaathi hai'usse milne ke baad mein tho ek anjaan duniya mein khogayi'jaha sirf voh aur mein'aur har pal uska saath jeene ki sapnein sajaathe rahi'jaha bhi dekhthi thi vohi nazar aathi thi'roz meri sapnon mein aakar mujhse dher saari baath kartha tha'aur muskuraakar kehthi thi I LUV U' mein use paakar aaj apne aapko sabse khush naseeb samajhthi hoon'(tears comes in her eyes)😳

(naitik stares a her'n after hearing all these he too goes into a world of love😳)

A:naitik,(she touches him n asks) ab aap, kaha kaha kho gayi'

N:(he says in a slow voice of love mein....aapki baathon mein..,aapki khayaalon mein....akshara..aap mere liye itna kuch sochthi hai'aur mein..?mene tho aapke kuch bhi nahi kiya hai na'ab aap se mein kya kahoon..ab tho mein aap mein poori tarah kho gayi hoon'

A:nahi naitik,aap aisa kyun keh rahi hai'aap ne mujhe sab kuch diya hai'lekin in sab cheezon se zyaada aapne mujhe bohoth pyaar di hai'mujhe aap hi ne pyaar karna sikhaaya hai'aur aaj mujhe aapse sirf ek waada hi waada chahiye..ki aap mera saath kabhi nahi chodenge'

N:ha akshara'mein kabhi aapko chodke nahi jaaoonga'har pal aapka pyaar banke aapki saath rahoonga'(he holds her hand)ye aapse mera janam janam ke liye waada hai'😳😳😳

(n then they hugs each other with lots of love b/w n he kisses her forehead'n he holds her hand but at that time house bell rings')

A:(suddenly)naitik'

N:ab kaun aagaya'aur abhi aana tha'shit..😉

(n akshara goes down 2 open the door...n she sees babhi maa n all with daddaji')

A:aap log sab saath mein'

Babhi maa:ha bahu'hum log yaha pahunch gaye tho tumhare daddaji bhi pahunch gayi thi..

Daddaji:bahu..,munna kaha hai'

Gayathri:munna?voh aapka saath nahi hai?aur humne tho usko dekha bhi nahi'use kya hogaya?

D:choti dulhan..voh munna ko sir dard hogaya tha'isliye meine use ghar behjh diya..

G:sir dard?aur voh bhi achaanak'kaha hai voh?

(everybody goes into naksh room')

G:munna..kya hogaya beta'

D:kaisa hai ab thaare thabeeyath'

N:maa'voh sir bohoth zor se dard kar raha tha'aur ab yaha aake thoda kam hogaya hai'😉(he points his eye 2 akshara n she smiles'😳)

B:munna..mein abhi tere liye davaayi leke aathi hoon'

A:babhi maa..,mein bhi aapke saath aathi hoon'.

B:theek hai bahu'

(n everyone gets out from the room..)

Will be continued'''''''''''''''

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Originally posted by: Drishti...

wowww!!..shama the update was awesomee!

yay im the first one to comment....and the first one to read i guess?..lol

well...it was very well written...keep it up :)

Originally posted by: shamasallfav

thank u soo...much drishti......🤗