DIL KA RISHTA- NAKSH FF (last part @ pg 106) - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: akshranatik

nice story

what is FF?can somebody tell??plz..

ff is fanfiction
it is a imaginary story or wat we want 2 see in show
written by fans
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: naitikakshara



ff is fanfiction

it is a imaginary story or wat we want 2 see in show

written by fans


oh thats gud 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
thnx shikha di 4 lovely siggy.luv u.
really sorry guys 4 d late update actually my net wasnt working and i was busy 2.
hope u all enjoy part 10


part 10:

akshara enters the kitchen and stood there in shook seeing the condition of the kitchen.she stood at one place and looked at the kitchen in 1 glance.suddenly she felt 2 hands wrapping around her waist.it was naitik saying:main janta hu akshara ki aap kya soch rahi hai.maine 1 chai banane me kitchen ki kya halat kar di.i'm sorry akshara mera 1st time tha jo maine apke liye kuch banaya.pehli galti me to mafi milti hai na.i'm sorry.
akshara:its ok naitik main samaj sakti hu.koi baat nahi main iss kitchen ko pehle jaisa kar dungi.
naitik:nahi akshara sirf aap nahi main bhi apke sath is kitchen ko thik karunga.akhir kharab to meri hi wajah se hui hai na.
akshara:na baba na.aap to rehne hi dijiye aap kitchen ko thik karenge phir to ho liya main akele kar lungi aap jakar fresh ho jaiye.
naitik:akshara plz plz plz mujhe bhi help karne dijiye na warna mujhe bahot ajeeb lagega.
akshara:no no no kuch ajeeb nahi lagega aap jaiye main kar lungi(and she pushes him out of the kitchen)
after finishing the work akshara comes wid tea.naitik takes a sip.
naitik:akshara apne isme chini nahi dali?
akshara: dali to thi kyu apko kam lagi?
naitik: kam nahi isme chini hai hi nahi.
akshara: aise kaise ho sakta hai?(she takes a sip from her cup of tea).kahan kam hai naitik bilkul to sahi hai chini.
naitik: phir mujhe kyu kam lag rahi hai.lijiye akshara aap mere wale cup me se chai pi kar dekhiye.
akshara(taking a sip from his cup): bilkul thik hai naitik.aapko kyun kam lag rahi hai.apki tabiyat to thik hai na.
naitik:thik hai? aisa nahi ho sakta laiye main phir se pi kar dekhta hu.
he takes a sip again and said:hmm ab ye mithi ho gayi
akshara:ab?ab se apka kya matlab hai.
naitik:mera matlab hai ki apke pine se ye chai mithi ho gayi hai.
akshara:kya mere pine se? aap kya kehna chahte hai saaf saaf kahiye na
naitik:akshara,jiske muh se kisi aur k liye burai nahi nikal sakti,jiski muh se sabke liye pyaar bhari baatein nikalti hai uske chhune se to neem bhi metha ho jata hai to ye chai kya cheez hai.
akshara understood everything and while blushing she said:aap bhi na naitik.
akshara:achha naitik bataiye aaj hum kahan ghumne jaenge?
naitik(thinking): aaj kahin nahi
akshara:kyu kyu nahi
naitik:kyunki my sweet wife hume yahan 1 mahina rehna hai aur bhi se saari jagah ghoom lenge to bad me bore ho jaenge.
akshara:hmmm ye to maine socha hi nahi. and very sweetly she said ok.

i know this part is not as interesting as previous ones but i promise that next parts would be much much better.continuing soon.guys plz comment.


Edited by VivaciousBhavya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
loved the update
chai waali scene is nice.
naitik is soo romantic
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really nice part.........sweat one.....chai convo was very nice..... continue soon
your ff are very good a big round of applausešŸ‘
Edited by joysorrow - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: joysorrow

really nice part.........sweat one.....chai convo was very nice..... continue soon

your ff are very good a big round of applausešŸ‘

thnk u so much
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
very nice cute part, the convo was good...............but I would have loved 2 see some kitchen romance while cleaning up...............anyways, keep it up.......and update soon,if possible! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
nice update....please continue soon....eagarly waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
i just read al ur 1o parts..............its vey nice...........just thinking if u were the cv of the show we al had been very happy...........bt i know it is never possible in reality.
u r doing a gr8 job...........waiting fr ur nxt part.
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nyc... chaye wala scene was to awesum...
continue soon..

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