Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam-Naksh FF - Page 7

a very guddd part..thnx for wting it long this time....keep writing long...update soon

update soon...we all are waiting.

I loved naitik's dailogue....You have promised me during the wedding that you would walk along with me for seven lives and one life has just started.....its so pure and true
I loved this part
plz continue

both 7 & 8 part was awesome.....and 8 part was bit emotional...continue soon...

Oh!thank you so much guyz................I was really surprised to see so much of response for my last post........I had exams during the past few days and that was why my storylines were pretty short..............But now, I've a short vacation for the next 10 days................will try 2 write more......But anyways, my short storylines were compensated with some of the most romantic episodes ever in the history of YRKKH......so continue reading my posts and replying to it........
Lots of love,
yrkkhluvinangel.

really awesome work...i eagerly waiting for the next parts.

very nice part

hmm Its really cute. Keep going👏👏👏

Guyz, sorry for the delay....my brother and bhabhi had come for a vacation, and I was busy helping my bhabhi with some work.........Here's part 9......

Part 9


Just then, Shaurya's cell phone rang, it was from home. Suddenly, sweat broke out from his forehead. He looked at Vishambar, tensed. He asked Shaurya not to tell his mom anything for time being and that they slowly make her understand everything. Shaurya picked up the phone, gaining strength. He asked his mom(who almost fell unconscious hearing that Akshara was hospitalized) not to worry and that all of them were there with Naksh. Inside, Akshara slept peacefully, holding Naitik's hand as he caressed her hair. Soon, Naitik also fell asleep.
After sometime, Vishambar and Shaurya decided to leave since it was getting late. Rajshekhar had left early because, Gayathri was also getting tensed. They entered the room and saw the cute couple sleeping next to each other and smiled. They decided not to wake them up and asked the nurse to tell them about their departure.
After sometime, Akshara woke up to see Naitik sleeping next to her. Somehow, she began to feel that she was going away from him and looked at him, helplessly. She began to cry silently, thinking about her fate. She wanted to apologise to him as she couldn't fulfill any of the promises that she had given him. She looked away from him and silently accepted her fate.
It was then that she felt a kind of darkness entering into her eyes. She twisted with immense head-ache and she started to get blackouts. Soon, she started to vomit and Naitik was woken up, by this. He held Akshara and noticed that she was vomiting furiously and ran to doctor for help. The doctor came and asked Naitik to wait outside. Naitik reluctantly went out of the room and walked towards the idol of Lord Krishna kept in the temple. He kneeled down in front of the idol, folded his hands and started to cry helplessly, like a little child. He was alerted by a soft touch on his shoulder and was stunned to see his mother-in-law standing behind him……………

hey itsreally good...pls cont soon..howz ur bhaiya n bhabhi??? hope everything is fine..have fun..hey pls do post soon..cant wait..:)