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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: zummi03
it was awesome..👏cont soon..

thnx for reading it!!
will continue soon!!😊

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Tafseer
awww....how is ur health now??? plzz take care of urself.....n need not to worry 4 da updates....plz take ur tym, but take care of urself.......
anyway......dis part was very gud n sweet....it was gud to see dat simram dint interuppted dem......do continue soon....

well im ok right now!!ooh ill take care of myself.
hmm happy to know that u liked the storyline.
keep reading!!😊

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: riya_luv_sv
WELL WHT 2 SAY DEAR......S IT IS ALWAYS THE BEST.........GR 8 JOB DEAR ONE...........I M TOTALY IN LUV WTH UR FFS

well thnku for liking my ff,s .more coming up!! thnx for reading it!!
well its not that great but its ok😊

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ArchanaSub
hey...thnx 4 addin em as ure frnd.....take gd care of ureself...Im happy 2 noe ure exam results....CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...n ure ff is jst too gd...itz awesum......update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

even im happy with my results .thnx !!
i could achieve it only with all ur support.
thnx for reading my ff's😊

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ilovenaksh
omg sweatha i hope u r fine now...cant believe u were sooo unwell...i evn wrote in one of the pm's that hope evrything is alright...v all r soo srry for getting restless for the updates...get well soon
and ya the update was superb as uusual and keep writing
thankyou so much and ya once again hope u r alright

yeah im allright now guys!! well ur one of my best friends now!! thnx for being soo caring!!
well im happy to know that ur xams went well.😊

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: niki_mehra13
hey its really good..keep updating...:) jus love reading your ff's..wen u gonna post de 24th part in your saath saath ff?..waiting to read that too...keep updating both your ff's...its really nice reading them...makes me feel better especially looking at de current situation in de serial in which naitik is jus in his bad mood is really getting me irritated..hope he becomes fine..keep up de good work...n take care of your health too :)

thnku for reading it dear.
wel i have posted the 24th part !1 read it and pthost ur comments😊

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: live_life
OMG that was so sexy1!! sooo romantic!
Thank oooo so much....keep updating.

thnx for the compliment!!😊

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: rock_angel
great job
really waiting for the next part

will post the next part soon!!😊

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nisha08angel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

nice update !!!!!! loved it !!! sooo romantic..........

contt.. soon .......

nyways congratz !!!!!!! u did second .......... yupieeeeeee........

& tak care of ur helth as well !!!!!!!!

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

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part 6
well this part is a bit long!!

akshara went down after getting freshened up. she saw reshmi, bhabhi maa and gayatri really busy and asked them why they were all so busy and the said that they r preparing for the karwa chauth function.
and gayatri mom tells akshara that this is her first karwachauth and special for akshara . akshara a smiles and then gos to the kitchen to get tea for naitik.she went upstairs to his room and y that time naitik was already up and she gave tea to him. he took it from her and sipped from the cup while talkinh with his secretary on the phone.after hanging up he went to bath.by the time he came out akshara had kept his suit
ready. she saw that he had not dried his hair properly and she dried his hair with the towel and naitik just stood there smiling staring at her.he put his hands on her shoulders and was about to kiss her when simran appeared.they saw her and quickly broke off.
simran asked why he is not ready yet and naitik said that he'll get ready in a few minutes.he went to his dresser to change .naitik came out wearing an olive stripe suit and seeing him come out simran went to him and adjusted naitik tie .
akshara felt a jolt of anger and she found it hard to control her anger.naitik was also taken aback.he looked up to akshara who gave him a cold stare and he was about to say something when simran pulled him out of the room. as soon as they went reshmi came inside "bhabhi" u see this is why i hate simran !!we should teach her a lesson and akshara just nodedd her head in agreement .the though of simran touching naitik rose her blood pressure levels. HOW DARE SHE ??? touch her naitik.al day long akshara sat wondering about it and her headache surfaced again. her face was red and she had a frown on her face due to the pain and gayatri mom sensed something wrong.she asked akshara if something was worrying her but akshara said she was allright.gayatri mom left her alone so that she could rest. doctor had prescribed some medicines and akshara was forced to eat by bhabhi maa since she was taking medicines.and maybe due to this sakshara fell asleep on the sofa in naksha room.
naitik and simran came late and gayatri mom told naitik that akshara was not feeling well and she was in their room.naitik ran upstairs and saw thet akshara was sleeping on the sofa.
he went to her and just moved his hands on her forhead and said what happened to u??
he saw that she was sleeping in an odd position and so he lifted her up careful not to wake her and took her to the bed.he placed pillows belowe her head and then sat beside her ruffling her hair and then gave her a soft kiss on the forhead.gayatri maa who had come to see whether akshara was allright saw this. she was really worried if there was something wrong between naitik and akshara.but now seeing this she felt assured that there is nothing wrong between them.
next day akshara woke up late and was greeted by naitik who was already up. he came and sat beside her and started to ruffle her hair ooh!! how did it soothe her??she felt happy and her headache also was gone. naitik told aksharaa that he is having an urgent meeting with a big client of his and he has to go for it soon.
at the breakfast table gayatari maa and bhabhimaa were serving food to the others when naksha came down.gayatri mom noticed that kshara looked way better .akshara served naitik food and gayatri mom told naitik that tday is karva chauth and he'll have to come home early to break akshara's fast.simran butss in saying that all these r useless and some people have food in between .gayatri mom says that only some people do that but the rest does this in the right way.simran was a bit taken aback hearing that answer.she din't open her mouth anymore.after breakfast naitik and simran left for office.
in the office naitik and simran emt witht he client discussed their delings and everything.simran had some other things in her mind. she thought of a plan and asked a frnd of hers to calup naitik and fix a meeting with him at a place wich a was far from their office.her frnd manish did so and naitik had to agree and he was sure that he will reach home in time .sot hey went to the place and waited fro manish to come but he din't turn up and it got pretty late.naitik was getting restless and wanted to go home when manish came there limping and injured. he siad that he had met with an accident and wanted help.naitik culdn't gow go without helping him.they went to a hospital manish said was nearby .the doctor tok a whole lot of time to clean the wounds and leave manish. all this was planned well by simran and fortunately for her naitik had left his mobile in the office
akshara got ready in a red colour lehenga wich was given to her by gayatri mom.she wore matching jewellery and was looking pretty .
its a long time since the moon has come up everyone except naitik had arrived and they had started to do the pooja.akshara felt really bad and she had to answer other people's questions.she was about to cry and just then she felt a hand on her shoulders she turned and saw it was gayatri mom.she asked akshara to break the fast looking at naitik's photo but akshara still said that naitik will come. but gayatri mom said that she tried clling him but he did not pick up the phone.akshara nearly cried and she looked down to hide her tears.gayatri mom asked her t break the fast and eat something a she had not eaten from the morning.but akshara din't budge .
night
it was really late when naitik and simran arrived.naitik was looking really tired aksha ahad been waiting for him .gayatri mom wanted to stay with her but akshara ahd asked her to sleep.naitik was completely worn out and had forgotten about the karavchauth. he went upstairs right away and slumped on the bed. by the time akshara came up he had fallen asleep. how this had broken akshara's heart .she tried to control her tears and she sat on the sofa thinking about the possible reasons why naitik din't turn up.
she fell asleep in that position.next morning naitik and akshara woke up late as they had slept late.reshmi came up to cll them and naitik went nd opened the door.akshara who was still dressed in the lehenga came tosee who it was amd reshmi said that everyone was waiting for them for breakfast.
naksha said that they wuld be ther in a few minutes.naitik looked at akhara who was looking really good in the lehenga but before he culd save anything akshara had gone to change and get freshened up.
they changed and went down.akshar was wearing a light read colour printed saree and was looking beautiful in it. naitik and akshara were coming down the stairs when akshara felt like her head was spinning.she stopped in her path ,caught her head and called "naitikji"naitik supported her and she fainted and he lifted her up.he took her to the bed and a doctor was called.the doctor checked akshara and said that she had fainted since she hadnt eaten anything since yesterday.all were shocked and simran was more shocked coz she din't expect this she culdn't stay without fod even for someime.at it daned on naitik that he had got too preoccupied with his work that he forgot all about the karvachauth function.he felt guilty and akshara din't look at him.she lowered her head.the dosctor gave the prescriptions and asked akshara to take rest.dadaji and naitik's dad went to see the doctor off.reshmi went to get food for akshara .
naitik sat beside her and akshara looked down .he asked her why din't she break her fast and it was gayatri mom who answered him.
naitik yeh kya hain?? it was ur duty to break her fast and u r the one to be blamed for.naitik felt really guilty and he apologised to akshara.and then suddenly naitik kissed her forhead.akshara turned red and bhabhi maa and gayatri mom smiled while simran pouted.
reshmi came up with the tray and naitik fed her. naksha were left alone in their room.

well thts it guys!! waiting for ur comments!!