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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
well this is for al my fans.thnx for ur wonderful replies. well this is a bonus for u guys since im happy that i culd do well in the prelim xams conducted at school.thnku for all ur support

part 4
well naitik joined office and was doing well and his ideas and prospects were liked by the contractors and dadaji and naitik's dad were very happy. so 3 months went by and akshara's college had started after the holidays.
naitik used to drop akshara and naitik to the college.akshara used to meet varsha as they wer in the same batch.their studies were going well and naitik was by now a well known business man and the singhania industries had scaled new heights and everyone praised akshara's luck.
akshara was also happy . naitik used to help akshara in her studies.akshara used to help reshmi and nandini , reshmi and akshara shared a good relationship between them. after college reshmi and akshara would tell nandini all about the happenings at college.meanwhile nandini was enjoying working at he singhania industries. she helped naitik draft letters and other things. she was happy with her work.
one day akshara was sitiing on the couch and studying and dozed off on the couch.naitik entered the room and saw akshara sleeping on the couch. she stood there for a moment looking at her .she looked so beautiful even in her sleep and that was soo tempting. he closed the door and went to akshara
he took her in his arms and was walkinh towards the bed when akshara woke up.she looked up at naitik and smiled at him. naitik was in a mischevious and he started kissing her on the cheek.he placed her on the bed embraced her from behind. His breath is touching her shoulders and giving goose bumps. She slowly removed his hand and tried to get out of bed and he pulled her close.kya jaldi hai??
akshara blushed and giggled.He turned her to his side and pressed her close to him. He opened his eyes and mischievously looked into her eyes. He moved her hands from his chest and circled behind his neck. He circled her and pulled closer and kissed her throat.She moaned and closed her eyes .he smiled at her .He moved down kissing her and biting intermittently with passion.He moved up and kissed her eyelids.He embraced her tightly and rolled back bringing her on top of him. He pulled the blanket over both and took her into possession.
akshara woke up the next morning and smiled remembering the last night happenings.she got out of bed and took a bath. she went down wearing a blue colour saree.she looked extremely beautiful. she went down to the kitchen and helped bhabhi maa and gayatri maa to make breakfast.
bhabhi maa asked her doesn't she have to go to colege tday? and she says that their first semester is over and they r having a mini vaccation.
bhabhi maa and gayatri were happy becoz they loved akshara a loot and enjoyed her cheerfulness.
akshara gave dadaji and nadini tea. naitik's dad was out of station for a few days.then a car pulled up in the driveway and a girl got out. she was around akshara's age .reshmi saw her and immediately pouted her lips.akshara noticed this and asked her who is the girl and reshmi replied that she was simran didi naitik's friend but she is really a show off and has an attitude that she was superior but inspite of all this everyone at home liked her except nandini and reshmi.
akshara wonderd about naitik. the girl came inside and akshara could say that she was beauttiful and was dressed ina jeans and long top.gayatri and bhbhi ma hugged her and then simran came to akshara
is this my naitik's wife?
akshara felt a monster kick in his stomach when simran said "my naitik"but she produced a smile.
they asked simran about why she was here and she said that she had come there for some work asignment given by naitik's dad and wuld be there for a few months.gayatri adn bhabhi maa sks her to stay with them and she agrees.well reshmi and nadini were not happy about this decision at all!
akshara was going upstairs with tea fro naitik when simran called her.simran went with akshara upstairs .simran asked akshara where is she going and akshara said she was going to give tea to naitik.
simran started laughing at this and said naitik and tea??😉
akshara was like so what?? simran said that naitik doesn't drink tea and u may get scoldings if u go with tea as he gets angry at simple things. akshara din't like these talks and felt like kicking simran but went to naitik's room while simran followed her .while our naitik was waitng to get akshara in his hands and had been hiding behind the door. he heard footsteps and he snatched the tea tray from her hands placed it on the table and pulled her into a hug. well this happened in a flash so akshara culdn't react and naitik had not noticed simran.
he hugged her tight and even gave her a peck on the cheek he turned and saw simran standing there. he said tum??


well what happens next??
u have to wait and watch the fun??
well post ur replies and tel me what u feel about simran and naitik??😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
omg it was just awesome!!!loved the simran character.its now going to strenghthen their love for each other.lovely!!!just sooooooooo curious to see what is going to happen next!!cant believe it!!lovely!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
hey it's really awesoooooooome................
i just simply loved it...............
u have really written it in a beautiful way..............
the romantic scenes were just mindblowing...............
keep up the good work dear...........
and do cont.soon...............
and thanx a lot for the pm...............
rocking............
excellent.............
amazing..............
superb............
just too good.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey its awesum...kahaani mein twist???? gr8!!!! Simran seems to be interesting......but she shud not cum between Naksh....
but anyway it was very gud....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
awwh i cant imagine naitik biting akshara tho....lol that wud b sooo cute
hahe simran wiill now realize naitik will even drink tea widout shakkar for akshara./
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
It was jus wow..loved the simran's character..cont soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
ure srsly makin it interestin...keep up d gd work...plz plz plz plz continue soon......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
first of all a big apology to u guys!!😭
im really really really sorry for being late
i can explain.i told u that i wuld be updating on 15th july but culdn't update because i was bedridden with severe fever coupled with body pain and headache.
i din't go to school for a week and i was completely exhausted due to the consumption of antibiotics and capsules.
i managed to get to school within a week but was really exhausted by the time i reach home.i just listened to the lectures and my friends used to write the notes for me.
i was advised to take bed rest and was not allowed to take strain.
i tried sneaking online but wasn't successful because my mom, dad or brother was always around me since i had fainted a couple of times during my home stay.
i can understand ur feelings because i was mad at myself for not being able to update.
and well a good news for u guys.
i did my xams well and im in the 2nd position thnku for all ur support and prayers.
ill be updating the story tday.
😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
hey congratulations for your results..how r u now?? have been waiting for your update..:) pls do update it today as u said so..cant wait..:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
hey y s t that wn u do such a good wrk i will only read it in between.....not fair.......well abt the story.....AWESOME..........yaar ..............t s tooooo good.....i just really lve ur way of style.....do update na./pls

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