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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 5

naksha broke of seeing simran .naitik was surprised to see simran. she came forward and hugged naitik and akshara din't like this at all. she tried to suppress her anger by assuring that they were just friends.
naitik got ready and naksha came down for breakfast.
naitik had to leave to the office for an urgent meeting.he ate fast and was about to leave when simran said that she too was coming with him to the office.naitik agreed but he noticed a hint of jealousy in akshara's eyes. he smiled to himself and left for office.😡
naitik was busy in the office he had back to back meetings. akshara helped gayatri mom and bhabhi maa in the kitchen she prepared naitik's favorite dishes.
akshara had not been feeling good and was having a mild headache which got worsened. bhabhi maa asked her to go and rest and naitik in between his meetings had called akshara but she had switched it off when she went to rest.he called gayatri mom and she informed him that akhara was having headache and she was resting.naitik made sure that akshara was alright and rushed on to the meeting hall.
akshara was woken up by reshmi who had come back from her friends house .it was already evening by then.reshmi, akshara and nandini sat chatting for a long time.
akshara knew that naitik had important meetings and wasn't expecting him early.she served dinner for everyone but did not eat her's as she thought of eating with naitik. gaytri mom and bhabhi maa tried forcing her to eat but she wuldn't budge.
it was prety late when the meeting came to an end. naitik and simran got into the car and while driving back home simran said that she was feeling really hungry and culdn't wait so she suggested tht they eat from outside.naitik was not too impresed with this idea but he din't want to make his friend feel bad so he gave in and they went to a hotel.simran ordered the food and asked what naitik wanted and naitik said that he was not feeling hungry.

it was pretty late when they reached home and akshara was waiting for them.simran hadn't expected this and she asked why akshara hadn't slept yet and naitik answered that good wife's r like this they wait for their husbands and this brought a mile to akshara's face.
akshara had heated the food and had kept it ready on the table. she was about to serve the food when simran butted in and said that they already had food. akshara was nearly in tears hearing it when naitik asked her to serve the food.akshara looked at him .simran asked but naitik u said that u r not hungry and ab kya hua??
naitik stood up and went to akshara he stood before her with a smileand said he knew akshara wuld not have eaten anything and will be waiting for him .akshara was happy to hear this and she wanted to really hug him .simran said that she was feeling exhausted and she went to sleep.


akshara served food and naitik asked her to sit down.he asked her to feed him and she did so and he also fed her. they finished dinner and akshara went to the kitchen to wash the plates. she finished the job and was walking to her rom when naitik pulled her onto him and kissed her forhead. he asked her about the headache and she said that she was feeling much better.he lifted her up and carried her to their room.
he placed her on the bed he started kissing her and akshara hugged him.he tenderly kissed her cheeks and slowly made his way to her lips.he kissed her for a long time and akshara managed to stop him and she asked him to get changed. he agreed and came back freshened.he came and sat next to her on the bed.he moved his face closer to hers and cupped her face in his hands and kissed her gently and slowly.
she wrapped her arms around his neck and he started kissing her deeper and deepe.soon they forgot about the world around them. they dozed off in each others arms.🤓

next morning akshara woke up and she tried to get up from the bed but culdn't do so because the pallu of her saree was stuck under naitik's pillow.she pulled it from under him and went to get freshened up.



well this is it guys !! ill try adding the next parts soon.sorry for the delay!!
Edited by nasco - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
it was awesome..👏cont soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww....how is ur health now??? plzz take care of urself.....n need not to worry 4 da updates....plz take ur tym, but take care of urself.......
anyway......dis part was very gud n sweet....it was gud to see dat simram dint interuppted dem......do continue soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WELL WHT 2 SAY DEAR......S IT IS ALWAYS THE BEST.........GR 8 JOB DEAR ONE...........I M TOTALY IN LUV WTH UR FFS
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey...thnx 4 addin em as ure frnd.....take gd care of ureself...Im happy 2 noe ure exam results....CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...n ure ff is jst too gd...itz awesum......update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg sweatha i hope u r fine now...cant believe u were sooo unwell...i evn wrote in one of the pm's that hope evrything is alright...v all r soo srry for getting restless for the updates...get well soon
and ya the update was superb as uusual and keep writing
thankyou so much and ya once again hope u r alright
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
hey its really good..keep updating...:) jus love reading your ff's..wen u gonna post de 24th part in your saath saath ff?..waiting to read that too...keep updating both your ff's...its really nice reading them...makes me feel better especially looking at de current situation in de serial in which naitik is jus in his bad mood is really getting me irritated..hope he becomes fine..keep up de good work...n take care of your health too :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
OMG that was so sexy1!! sooo romantic!
Thank oooo so much....keep updating.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
great job
really waiting for the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
hey awesome ff...
it is soo romantic..............
cont. soon...
plz PM me whenever u update............

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