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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: riya_luv_sv
awsome sweatha...............toooooo goood it was really romantic and lovely.......i m sooooo happy that naitik dint fall for the trick that simran did.[:D/]....he take that u mean women..... 😡....update sooooon

thnx for the comment riya!😊

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shwetha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Uussmann
he went towards her and stroked her hair.akshaar was woken up by this and she opened her eyes.she saw naitik sitting by her.she got up and sat on the bed.they had an eye lock session and naitik saw the pain in akshara's eyes.

really love this part good going

thnx for reading yaar!!

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Archana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#263

swetha dat was lik THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........I mean d way naitik realizes how much he luvs aks n thn d part wer naitik romances wid aks was really cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1....so wen r u updatin next?????????????????

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: ArchanaSub
swetha dat was lik THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........I mean d way naitik realizes how much he luvs aks n thn d part wer naitik romances wid aks was really cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1....so wen r u updatin next?????????????????

ill be updating tday !!😊

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Richa

@cutie_pie21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: nasco

thnx for reading it.
ill pm u when i update next!!
teen shabd??😊

oh thank you for taking soo many pains for me pm n all but have u added me in ur buddy list ?
haan teen shabd naksh to kahenge nahi toh socha main he keh doo?😆

Edited by -Love_Naksh- - 15 years ago

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Richa

@cutie_pie21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: nasco

ill be updating tday !!😊

today that would be gr8 plzz update soon😉

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juleika

@julz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#267

awesome..loved it...continue soon...:) can't wait..yours jus too good..👏

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shwetha

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#268

im sorry its a bit short!!

naitik and akshara washed their hands and they retired to bed.akshara sat on the bed.she felt releived but her headache did not subside she din't want to tell it to naitik.naitik saw this and he applied balm on her forhead.akshara was so happy naitik understood ehr soo well.
both lied down on the bed and usually akshara is shy and it was naitik who sneaked close to her and hugged her.but tday it was the opposite akshara came close and she rested her head on naitik's chest.naitik lovingly stroked her hair he circled his hands around her slender body and both dozed off.
in the morning
naitik woke up first and she saw akshara still sleeping.he stroked her hair and he moved his hand to her forhead.he took the hand away fast.akshara was having high fever . naitik quickly got up .he put a pillow under akshara's head.he was really worried and naitik went to call gayatri.gayatri came running from the kitchen .she went to naksha 's room and went to akshara she touched akshara's forhead she was really angry at naitik.afterall he was the reason for akshara gettting soo unwell!!
she asked naitik to get ready and take akshara to the doctor.she tried to wake akshara up.she called akshara amny times but he was not waking up.she realised that akshara's condition was worse.she immediately asked naitik o call the doctor.he did so and doctor arrived ,he checked her temperature,gave an injection to akshara and checked akshara's blood pressure and he said that her bp had gone low and that's why she got unconsious.he prescribed medicines and asked akshaar to take care of her health.
naitik really looked guilty and sad.resm and nandni scolded him and gayatri din't add more fire and she gave akshara her medicine and went down.naitik looked at akshara sadly.

maheshwari house
rajshri was in the kitchen and varsha was helping her. sunaina chachi,anshu ,omikaka and dadi ahd gone to one of their relatived house.varsha noticed that rajshri looked worried and she asked rajshri abt it and she told varsha that she was feeling uncomfortable tday .she said that she was feeling like seeing akshara.varsha told this to shaurya and vishambahr and shaurya agreed and they decided to visit akshara tday.

singhania house
naitik went and sat near akshara he took her hands and gave it a soft kiss.he told akshara that he was really feeling guilty for hr condition and he was about to say please don't hate --!akshara covered his mouth with ehr hand and she asked him not to say anything like that andsaid that she loves him more than anything , she asked him to be with ehr forever and naitik said he wuld be with her and hugged her tight.

u look sweet when u read my update
ulook sweeter when u read my update and smile
u look sweetest when u read my update,smile and comment
so try to look sweetest😉

don't foget to press the like button!!

Edited by nasco - 15 years ago