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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: cute1122
waiting for next part!!!!!!!!

will post it by tday!!😊

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: riya_luv_sv
omg........nasco awsome work yaaar........t was sooooooooo sute and lovely

thnx for reading yar!!
well how ru doing now??

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: Tafseer

no no its okk dear......actually my name is shared by some boys also........
but ab toh pata chal gaya naa dat m a GIRL...........???? 😆 😆

im realy sorry!!holding ears😆

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#204

naitik remembered the morning scene but when he turned to face the bed.he saw that akshara looked so tired.she was wearing her purple colour night gown.she looked beautiful in it.naitik went an sat with her on the bed.akshara leaned onto his shoulders and she gave him a kiss on the cheek and then one more n the other cheek.naitik was shocked but was happy that akshara gave him two kisess.akshara thanked him for everything he did for her and they both lied down on the bed.they slept close to each other.

next morning naitik woke up with a smile.he got out of the bed took a shower and got dressed.he was about to go down when his eyes caught sight of a paper standing out of akshara's book.he took the paper and was abt to keep it in when he saw " I LOVE U "written on it.he expected that it was a note for him from akshara.he was shocked when he read the contents.
dear akshara
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i don't know whether u remember me!! but i still remember everything each and every moment of our meetings. im coming back akshara .
i still feel the same for u . I LOVE U !!!!
alok
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he culdn't beleive what he had read.no his akshara wuldn't cheat him.
no i won't beleive this!! hi held his head and he nearly cried thinking about it.
he kept folded the paper and kept it inside his pocket.
naitik's point of view
no akshara loves him. NO! NO!! SHE WON'T DO THIS!! NOT TO ME!! NOT TO ME AKSHARA !!he slumped ontot he sofa.NO HE SAW HER LOVE IN HER EYES YESTERDAY.SHE WON'T CHEAT ME!!
he heard footsteps and wiped his yes.he picked up his laptop and turned when akshara entered the room.she was wearing a blue colour saree .she smield at him and he tried to fake a smile but culdn't.akshara noticed something wrong and she came to naitik."naitikji kya hua??""aap teek to he na??"
naitik replied "haan main teek hoon"
akshara noticed that naitik was really sweating and she made him sit down.she wiped his forhead with the pallu of her saree .she checked whether he had fever,but his temperature was normal.she asked him if he was allright and he said that he was having a headache.akshara went to take the balm and when she turned back he was gone.
akshara knew that there was something troubling naitik and she was really worried for him.akshara went down and asekd gayatri maa whether she saw naitik.she told akshara that he went to office and din't even have his breakfast .gayatri mom saw that akshara was really worried and asked if everything was allright and akshara just nodded.
reshmi came ready to go for college she asked akshara :" bhabhi dada kahan hain"
gaytri maa: "aapki dada to chali gayi"
resmi :"chali gayi?? par kahan?
akshara:woh office gaya hain
rajshekhar came with dadaji hearing their conversation.dadaji asked rajshekhar if they had soem important meeting tday and rajshekar said no.
dadaji stood there thinking and hen asked rajshekhar to drop akshara and reshmi to college.
while in the car reshmi noticed that akshara was worried.she asked akshaar about it after they got out since she din't want her dad to know abt this.
akshara told reshmi that she was allright butreshmi knew her bhabhi so well and din't beleive this.but she din't probe more into the matter.

naitik had gone to office directly .he ent to his cabin and the maanger came with some files.he signed it and he rested his head on the table and he thought about the moment she had spent with akshara and then the letter came into his mind.he was about to through the penstand when his cell rang.he took his cell and it was akshara calling.he was not in a position to talk and so he cut the call.
akshara call him again and he gain cut the call.he then switcehd off the phone.

akshara's point of view
why is naitikji not taking my call??what is worriying him??she was staring into her phone when varsha came from behind.her frnds also came and they teased her that she is always talking to naitik.akshara gave a fake smile.

naitik's office(evening)
naitik was sitting in his chair when simran came into his ofice.simran noticed that naitik was loking ill and his eyes were light red .she saw the files stacked on his table.she asked naitik about it and naitik din't reply.she told him that these were important and had to be signed by him immediately.
naitik signed them in a hurry and then he took up his coat and he was about to go out and simran stopped him.naitik what happnd??u look so worried.naitik din't wait to reply and he stormed out of the cabin

naitik came out of the office sat in his car and drove off. he stoped by a park and got out.he sat on a bench he was really on the verge of tears and he was angry at himself for behaving like that to akshara.he knew she would have felt bad .but .but.. what culd he do?? he culdn't control his tears anymore😲😲😭

he sat there on the bench and then an old couple came to him and asked him whether someone deceived him??
naitik was initially shocked and he asked the old man how he understood and he said that he culd understand it from the pain in his eyes.
the old man sat with him.naitik shared his troubles with him and the old man asked him if he beelived in his wife and naitik said yes.
he asekd how much??
naitik more than i beleive in myself. old man asks then what is the problem?? naitik says.. but
old man: yes this "but" creates all the problem.u beleive in ur wife and don't pay heed to the letter and forget about it.naitik decided to pa heed to the old man's advice.he decided to call akshara but decided not to .
akshara came back from college.she ran to her room and slumped onto her bed and she cried her heart out
why is naitikji behaving like this??what happened to him??she heard a knock on th door and she quickly wiped her tears away!

so tell me how was it guys??
(i posted a looong update right??)😉😆😆 so post long comments!!
do not forget to press the like button😊

Edited by nasco - 16 years ago

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427936

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Posted: 16 years ago

#205

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!so nice yar u give your some brain to yrkkh team now i think your all storys r better then the story of true yrkkh ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,so romantic,and so much live!!!!!👍🏼

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Tafseer

@Tafseer

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#206

it was really nice....but wat da hell Alok is doing here..n da stupid letter...... 😡 ...Naitik shud not have got it.....n if he got it den he shud talk to Akshara coz den only there will be no MU......

thank god dat da old couple instilled some gyaan to Naitik coz he needed it.....now Naitik shud not over react.....

plz in da next part post dat naitik talks to Akshara n clears everything......n there shud be romance between them.......n dat Simran.....hate her..... 😡

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riyana

@riya_luv_sv

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Posted: 16 years ago

#207

well u did gave a long update.....so here goes a long comment.....t was really good yaar......ppf tat simran if i saw her now na i could have kisked her out of this earth......someone or the other will always b there around happyt couples to make problems.....hmmmm......and tat alok guy......y did he have to drop in to make comment......honestly t was really good......i just wish naitik is sensible atleast this time to belive his love rather than trusting a peice of paper.....actually i remembered kis desh when tat old man cme to frame.....i rember seeing smthn like tat there tooooooooo.....hmmm...this is long na.......hope ur happy.....hehhehe........luv ya......update soooooooooon

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rbb88

@rbb88

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#208

it was good twist in the story....continue soon

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#209

it was not long at all....because i love to read ur long update...and the update was too good....it was very touching...naitik did'nt answer to simran was reaaly good..waiting for the next update...continue soon... 😉 👍🏼

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juleika

@julz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#210

ooh that simran is so irritating..i so want naitik to noe de truth...so stupid she is...i hope naitik understands...pls pls cont soon dear...can't wait...pls pls..