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Posted: 15 years ago

im really happy tday i have been promoted to a goldie.


naitik woke up early in the morning .he turned to the other side and saw akshara sleeping next to him peacefully.he moved closer to her and placed a kiss on her forehead she squirmed in the bed and she put her hands around him and lnked it behind naitik's neck .he was taken by surprise about akshara's behaviour and he realised that akshara was still in her sleep.just then akshara woke up and she was shocked to se he hands linked behind naitik.naitik gave her a cute smile and she immediately removed her hands from naitik's neck.she realised that he was soo close to her and naitk came forward he nticed her pink lips and he culdn't resist himdelf.he kissed her lips and he tasted it.akshara looked into his yes wich had soo much love for her and she reciprocated the kiss.they broke off soon and naitik wispered in her ear. "happy valentines day"
akshara got shy and she pushed him off and ran to take a shower.
akshara din' have college on that day and she got ready in a light blue saree and came out.naitik was working on his laptop when he sa akshara comign out of the bathroom.she looked too beautiful.he went towards her and while going his hands brushed akshara's books wich were kept on the table.
her books fell down adn he bent down to pick it up.a white pape came loose from aksahars' bookhe took it and without even giving it a shot kept it back in.he kept the books on the able and poceeded to akshara's dressing table.akshara was removing the towel from her hair.she kept it on on side and was about to put sindoor when naitik held her hand and he filled her maang.he gave her a kiss on the forhead and helped her in wearing the jewellery.after she was completely ready naitik clapped his hands and said now the job is done and give me my fees for helping u
akshara : fees??
naitik :i need two kisess from u on both the cheeks.
akshara got shy and she blusehd crimson red.she looked down .she came forward and naitik was happy that he was about to get a kiss from her.akshara came closer and then pushed naitik and she ran out of the room.
naitik was shocked and he said akshara u escaped now!! i'll get u laone at night.😳😳
akshara came runnign ou of the room and met nandini and reshmi on the way.nandini and reshmi saw that her face was red ad theyjust smield looking at each other thinking of the reason.
they all went down did the pooja and ate breakfast.naitik left for the office soon .
naitik had booked a room at a luxury hotel .he had asekd them to arange a table in the middle and got it decorated with heart signs and white roses.he had booked a valentines day cake also .
naitik did one last checking and saw that everything was perfect he went to singhania house
reshmi knew about naitik's plan and she knew simran wuld be doing sumthign to make it a flop so she had dragged her out of the house in the name of shopping!.
akshara was told by gayatri maa to get ready for the party.she also said that naksha will be leaving first and they'll be leaving some time after.
naitik came home and went upstairs he saw that akshara was already ready and she looked beautiful in the saree.he took a shower and got dressed in a white suit.
they went downstairs and gayatrimaa took took their nazar.akshar and naitik left for the hotel in the car.
naitik switched on the radio (not that mehbooba thingy of the serial)he played a collection of romatic songs.
1st song Vaada raha- Khakhi
akshara was lost in thoughts and she was enjoying the song eyes closed.
2nd song zara zara touch me (FULL SONG IN VIDEO) - race ... .akshara was shocked to hear this and she looked t naitik who gave her a triky smile.she clicked the next button and
3rd song Pehla Nasha - Jo Jeeta Woh Sikanda


akshara looked at naitik while hearing the song.naitik culd see the love she had for him in his eyes.they reached the hotel soon and akshara looked surprised.naitik din't say anything.he got out of the car and opened akshara's door.akshara got out and naitik and akhara walked to the hotel.
naitik held her hand and they went to their oom.akshara opened it and was surprised to see the decorations.naitik and akshar enetred the room and he clsoed the door.he said happy valentines day akshara.akshara had tears in her eyes and naitik saw this.he said i did all this for u and ur crying??
akshara said nahein naitik im so happy tdayi love u and hugged naitik tightly.naitik hugged her back.
they broke of the hug .
naitik went on to switch the music player on and Bahon ke Darmiyan wow what a soong!!
he pulled her to him and placed her hands on his shoulders and he held her by the waist and they started dancing.they danced forgetting the world around them.when the song got over they stood there staring deep into each others eyes when the bell rang and naitik opened it and took the food from the waiter.
he made akshara sit on the chair and served her food and they both ate dinner.after that they cut the valentines day cake and naiik kept a big piece in akshara's mouth and akshara fed him the same.akshar had some of it in her face naitik wiped her face with a tissue and he lifted ehr and took her to the bed.he started kissing her allover and akshara was also happy to lose herself to him.naitik had already told gayatrimaa that they wuld be late .naitik and akshar woke up after some time and they headed back to singhania house .akshar was quite happy and she told naitik about it and she gaev him a cute kiss on the cheek.naitik was really happy and it was then he rememebred the morning scene!!


sorry for being late!! im having my vaccations and all my cousins r there at my house i culdn't post it coz of that!!
plz post long comments!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
AWESOME keep writing on Naksh
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was so romantic .... 😳 and one of ur best update...continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very good part and a romantic one..waiting for your next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
1st of cogratulations on becuming a goldie....... 👏

n plzz dont worry .....kya hua if u posted late...........yaar vacations bhi enjoy karna hai naa...woh bhi cousins ke saath toh aur bhi..enjoy urself.......

n now da back to my comments.............it was very good.....hmmm toh valentines day aa gaya....ohh Naitik is being soo romantic........n da spng selections was also very good....thank god no Mehbooba ko patao wala radio....
n da part was very good n romantic...........in ur ffs n oneshot we get to Gatayri soo good but isn da real show sheis not all like dis......
chalo in these we get to see naksh getting their own privacy....n nobody disturbs them......
as usual a very good part.........
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Posted: 15 years ago

a very very good part nasco.....good work

it was great that reshmi took simran for shopping

i loved it....update sooon😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey a really romantic part..........
thanx for the pm.................
keep updating........
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Posted: 15 years ago
thnx for all ur replies.im in a hurry.
will post replies soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwww...congrats swetha for becoming a goldie...hope u reach higher lvls soon
this part was awesome...trust me....it was sooooooo romantic...i visualosed the whole thing..wowww...now im jus going to dream about it today...:P...it was rllr rlly nice...like always
and ya ur choice of songs was awesome..they all r my favourite songs....and end mein baaho ki darmiya...was jus tooo good...love that song....rlly..keep it up
and no need to be sorrryyyyyyyyyy pls...we completely understand..thoda break toh chahiye hota hai..lol 😉
Edited by Drishti... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Drishti...

wowwww...congrats swetha for becoming a goldie...hope u reach higher lvls soon

this part was awesome...trust me....it was sooooooo romantic...i visualosed the whole thing..wowww...now im jus going to dream about it today...:P...it was rllr rlly nice...like always
and ya ur choice of songs was awesome..they all r my favourite songs....and end mein baaho ki darmiya...was jus tooo good...love that song....rlly..keep it up
and no need to be sorrryyyyyyyyyy pls...we completely understand..thoda break toh chahiye hota hai..lol 😉


so how did ur xams go dear??
all the4 songs r my favourites .
its soo romatic

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