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Pia9

@Pia9

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Hi i realy like your oneshots. u put so much detail i feel lyk im actuli watchin it! plz continue them.

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sanjana

@..Sanjana..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Its awesome~i had written one too yesterday!

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

part 2
well akshara naitik got married . they took the saaath pheres and promised each other that
they'll be together forever.naitik filled akshara's maang with vermillion and akshara
changed from akshara maheshwari to akshara naitik singhania
akshara left to naitik's house in tears. she was ad of leaving behind all her dear ones.
she was also a bit apprehensive about entering a new house. naitik saw akshara crying in th
car and he caled her akshara and she turned. he told her that he knew how she must be
feeling but he'll try to give her all the hapiness he can. akshara smiles and then naitik
sits nearer to her and she lays her head on his shoulder.
they reach the house and akshara enters naitik's house .it was big and and looked
welcoming.
it was decorated and brightly lit .
naksha went to the mandir and prayed.it was pretty late by then and gayatri asked rashmi
and nandini to take akshara to naitik's room.they went upstairs and akshara was stunnd to
see naitik's room.it had a door wich led to naitik's study another led to the dresser and
the bathroom and anothe rone to the terrace. it was really spacious . it looked welcoming
decorated with red and white roses ribbons etc. candles were burning and the room was dimly
lit adding to the ambience.reshmi and nadini left her alone and went to their respective
rooms after some time.akshar loked around the room and found that everything was neatly
arranged. she found her dresess neatly aranged in the dresser and everything was perfect.
akshara was sitiing on the bed when she heard the door close. she looked up and saw naitik
entering. he flashed her a smile .he came to her and sat by her.he told ehr that u r
looking beautiful and akshara blushed.he said that even though she looks beautiful it would
be very difficult to move with these as hey r so heavy. he told ehr that she can change ehr
dress. he went to the bathroom to change.
he came out wering a white kurta he saw akshara sitting in front of the mirror removing her
jewellery. akshara noticed him staring at her and he came to her .he helped her remove the
jewellery .she stood up to go and change when he playfully said that he was willing to help
her change her dress. akshara got shy and ran off to the bathroom.she came out wearing a
pink colour night dress. she opened the door but din't find naitik and she moved few steps when she was pulled back.naitik pulled her close to him and asked her if she got shy and she looked down. naitik lifted her chin and laced a kiss on her face akshara felt a current passing though her body..he lifted her up and took her to bed.he said now she is finally his and he started kissing her. 😃😳
he ran his hands through her body curves and akshara got a tinkling sensation.and she smiled. he started kissing her and he willingly gave in to him.she kissed him back and they kissed for long and drifted off to sleep.since they were so tired.😳😉
akshara woke up early in the morning.naitik was sleeping she took a bath and went downstairs.she went to the kitchen . she was preparing dough for making chappati when she felt two hands coming up around her waist. she turned to see naitik grinning at her and she asked him to leave her as someone will see. naitik tells her he doesn't care as she is his wife and no one is up yet..he hugs her even tighter and kisess her on the cheek while she goes on with her work.they hear footsteps gaytri maa comes in and asks akshara wh did she take the trouble of preparing food.she goes to akshara when she sees naitik. she say "munna aap idar?? aur wo bhi itni subah subah"she checked the time and it was only 6 in the morning.he asks him what is so special why is he up early and he says he came to drink water. bhabhi maa also come to the kitchen .she is also surprised to see naitik.
munna did u get ready this early ?? naitik found it hard to answer them and turns to go out of the roo when gayatri,bhabhi maa and akshara see that. there is some flor stickin onto his face.akshara looks embarassed and bhabhimaa and gayatri laughs.😆😉.
akshar hints naitik and he wipes it from his face. akshara prepares breakfast and serves it to everyone.dadaji i impresed and he is more shockd to see naitik up so early.

thats the second part guys.now ill wait for ur comment.
bye.
i don''t mind getting loooong comments😊

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Tafseer

@Tafseer

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

hey very nice, romantic n sweeeeeeettttttttt........hope so dis happens inda show....Hrishas ur ffs takes me to an imaginative world......its always very gud.....n ur imaginative power is also very gud.....
its such a cute love-story......very gud...

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Natasha

@parkview23

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

That was fantstic... trust me you are giving hopes to everybody that everything will be alright and the marriage will take place.... thank you so much and keep continuing when you get time

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Drishti

@Drishti...

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

sweatha it was just awesome.like always.........dont really have words to comment long.i was love whatever u write and i think u already know that...😛.it was really lovely.a very nice story.i hope ull continue soon.

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Pia9

@Pia9

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

i luv reading ur one shots! i'm strtin 2 belive this might happen, but then i rememba fridays episode and im bk 2 reality. I'm anticipating mondays episode. But they are really gd! keep dem comin 😃

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purvi

@poooohjjjazzzzz

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

it is very sweet .......loved it........

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

hiiiiiiii...........
this part is just awesooooooooooome.................
superb............
gr8.............
excellent.............
just too good................