saath sath( ff) part 30posted pg 54

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shristi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

aww so cute..............
plzz cont. soon.................

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ZumSrK.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

it was cho sweet..loved it..waiting for the next part..

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Posted: 16 years ago

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part5

ranwat industries
naitik is in his cabin when mr balraaj enters with a girl. he introduces her as his daughter she had come back from america (her brothers place) after a holiday.she had finished her studies from xaviers college .she had been helping balraj in his business b4 she went on a holiday .naitik looked at her.she was watching him vividly . .she was good looking ,slender and had short hair .she put her hand forward and gave naitik a handshake .
hi!!im aishwarya
naitik: im naitik .nice to meet u.she gently squeezed naitik's hand and naitik din't like it
balraaj had to leave for some discussions with his partners and left the cabin.naitik ha dstated to feel uncomfortable in her presence as she had been eyeing him too closely.aishwarya had an instant liking to naitik .she was brought up in america and she used to flirt with boys.naitik is good looking and was wearing a tan coloured linen suit wich akshara had bought for him when they went shopping. aishwarya came to naitik pulled up a chair near him and talked to him about the portal.she was fascinated by it and praised him .naitik got upt leave when ash caught his hand and as a reflex naitk pulled it back she came near him and wispered in his ears that he is looking hot.naitik immediately left the office really wiht a bad mood.

naksha house
naitik comes home and kept his laptop on the table went to the bedrrom and he threw his coat on the bed
and changed into a striped polo tshirt.akshara came into the room and saw naitik's things strewn everywhere .she asks him why did he throw things here and there.naitik gets mad and shouts at her. he asks her to leave him alone and leaves the room.she was completely taken by surprise and was hurt by his behaviour.she jsut stood there crying.

in the hall
naitik is doubly hurt one due to ash's behaviour and secondly he shouted at akshara he felt and extreme sense of guilt.he went to the bedrrom.he saw akshara standing by the window and eventhough he din't see her face he culd make out that she was crying. a sense of guilt stabbed him .he went near her and touches her back . she turns around and her eyes r red from crying. he says aksharaji im sorry.
she dosn't pay any heed to it and cries more naitik says that aksharaji i love u with my heart and i can't live without u.he start saying aapke bina mein ...when akshara pressed her fingers against his lips.she says that she can't live without him either .her hands slid behind his neck and she said i love u naitikji.naitik dropped his hands and slid his arms around her waist.he tightened his grip around her and he gave her a soft kiss.they stood like this completely lost in thier own world and it was hard to say who broke apart first.naitik tells akshara abt ash and he says he was afraid of losing akshara due to ash and that's why he was in such a bad mood.akshara says she wiill not doubt him .naitik is releived.
dining table
akshara sets the table and naitik comes and sits on the chair she serves him and was about to sit to eat when naitik pulled her to his lap.she was sitting on his lap and naitik says that there is no one else here then why is she feeling shy??he feeds her and he feeds him.
on the bed
naitik is sitting on the bed and akshara is near him with her head resting on his shoulders .he is caresing her hair .naitik tells her about the portal ,she gets bored and she asks him to talk something interesting. he says he'll do something interesting and moves her hair and kissed her neck and earlobes.he switches of the lights.
ranwat industries
ash had come early b4 naitik and was already in his cabin when naitik reached office. he din't mind her at all and tried to concentrate on his work .she comes to him and ruffles his hair .naitik gets angry and gets out of his cabin.he calls akshara and aks her to come to the office .she syas ok and he returns to the cabin.ash is trying to get close to him and he says he has work to do.akshara enters the office and the recpetionist asked her who she was she says that she is akshara sing... when ash interrupts and says
that visitors r not allowed here unless they r related to any of the employees.just then naitik comes out of the cabin and he calls akshara and she goes with him.while going to his cabin he tells akshara more abt ash.they reached his cabin and naitik was sure ash wuld come to spy on them soon.she saw her approaching and immediately pulled akshara closer and kissed her on the lips akshara was taken by surprise and she felt all the energy draining out of her .they were disturbed by a tap on the dor it was ash.she looked at akshara and asked naitik who she is??naitik put a hand around akshara and says that she is my wife.ash is astonished

so tht's all guys for now.let me know ur comments😊sorry for the mistakes

Edited by nasco - 16 years ago

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shristi

@shristi sarda

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

i just love ur ff..........
plzzzz cont. soon.................

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ZumSrK.

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Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

it was really great...did'nt expect the aishwariya character...it was great....

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purvi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

it is very sweet and romantic...it will be a fun to watch......

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Sana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

post more parts this so cool luv it btw thanks

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CookMySock

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Carry on with it. It's going really really great. Loving it...
If I get any ideas I will surely PM you..!

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Fighting Spirit

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

part6
ash is taken by surprise .she storms out of the cabin by glaring at akshara.naitik finishes of his work fast and naksha go to a park. they sat on a bench having icecream when they see a chubby little boy playing with his mom and dad. naksha watches the happy family and naitik speaks up .he asks akshara whether she likes children?she says that she lkes them a loot as they r so cute😛😛.naitik with a big grin tells her that they can have a cuter one of their own. akshara dosn't pick it up first but when she did she gave natik a playful hit on his back and he smiles.they reach home tired and badly in need of rest .

maheswari house
the whole faml is assembled in fron of the mandir everyone prays and dadi gives prasad to varsha. varsha's and akshara's results r to be out tday.shaurya varsha leave for the college to check the results.

naksha house
akshara is busy arranging naitik's coat ,shirt,towel etc.naitik comes out of the washroom he tells her that he is not going to office tday. akshara asks him if he is ok wether he has fever etc.he says that he wants to spend time with her and akshara smiles.akshara sees that naitik hasn't dried his hair properly and she takes the towel from him and dries his hair.naitik is trying to get close to her she moves away and then naitik get hold of her hands and pulls her to hm and in the event both fall on the bed. both r completely lost n each other and naitik kises akshara she feels the moist imprint of his lips on her face. she finally comes out of the trance when the clok strike 9.she gets up fast and goes to pack naitik's lunch.naitik gets dressed in a brown multistripe two button suit.he runs out of the house as he is running late.akshara has forgottren that her results will be out today and do there is no tension on her face.

colege
sahava reach the college and varsha goes to check the resultsand shaurya runs behind her.its really crowdy and shava somehow reach the results. 30 candidated had appeared for the examination and so she checked her results in 20 to 50 positions she does not find her name there so she check uptothe last and she thinks she has failed when she hears shaurya screaming that she is in the 2nd position an vakshara is in 1st position.varsha gets hapy and says that she 'll cal akshara now itself. shaurya stops her and tells her to call naitik instead .so natik can give a surprise to akshara

ranawat industries
naitik meets balraj and balraaj says that advertisements have ben done in all colleges in and around delhi about the portal that naitik has created .naitik gets happy an mr balraaj asks naitik to join him for the ad campaign in xaviers colege as his friend(principal )is eager to meet naitik .balraj thanks naitik and naitik asks the reason for it and balraaj replies that for teaching ash a lesson.naitik is confused and balraaj say that she was so moved by naitik's sincerity to his love that she understood the meaning of love and has agreed to get married soon.naitik just smiles and goes to the cabinhe had just opened a file when varsha called him and gave him the good news that akshara has come first in the xams and this is becoz he teached her.she says tha she din't tell akshara abt this and she wants this to be aurprise for her. naitik is delighted and asks her abt her results.sh says that she has come 2nd. he congratulates her.

that's all for today.will post the next part soon.