saath sath( ff) part 30posted pg 54 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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so here is part 3 guys. oops am i a bit fast???is it boring??

part3

maheswari house
rajshri is worried about naitik and akshara . seh says that its for the first time thath she hasn't seen akshara for days .she is really worried for her and then vishambhar gets an idea he proposes a plan about goin to delhi to see them both. rajshri is about to call akshara and inform her abt their coming when shaurya uts in and says why can't they give her a surprise.everyone agrees and decides to give naksha a surprise vishambhar asks shaurya to reserve tickets for them.

naksha house
akshara wakes up and sees that naitik is already up and she wonders how she reached here. she sees naitik working on his laptop and asks him how she reached here.she says that she was waitinf for him to finish hos work and don't know when she dozed off. naitik smiles and says that when he is there she dosn't need to worry.he says that he carried her to the bed. akshara bcomes shy and runs off.

naitik is getting ready and is wearing a gabardine suit .he is adjusting his tie when akshara comes to the room he asks akshara to help him with the tie and akshara comes to help him.she is adjusting it around his neck and he is ready for some mischief .he keeps hugging her and akshara somehow finishes it and goes to take his breakfast.she feeds him and he goes to office.

maheshwari house
rajshri and vishamabhar are all set with the packing done. dadi has given rajshri pickles and other delicasies for naksha.they start off to the railway station. they get in the train. rajshri had informed naitik's mom about her visit and gayatri was happy.she said that she too wished to see them .

ranwat office
balraaj is impressed abt the product designed by naitik and he aks naitk to design a potal where people could interact and know more about managment and other principles. he stressed that the portal should be youth friendly as the youth r the pillars of tmroe and this should be of great help to management students.naitik asks balraaj whether he culd leave a bit early coz he wanted to take akshara out foe shopping.balraj readily agrees.

naksha house
naitik pulls up into the car porch and gets out and rings the dorrbell. akshara comes and opens the door. she was happy to see him and aked him abt the project. he said that his boss was impressed and now has aksed him to design a portal.akshara asks him why he came early and he says that he was thinking of his beautiful wife all the time and culdn't concentrate.akshara is happy and ruffles his hair gently.
naitik asks her to get ready and they'll do some shopping.

naksha got to oberon shopping mall .naitik parks the car and both of them enters the mall.naitik buys a new anarkali suit for akshara and he himself bought a pair of nike shoes.after they r done with the bill
naitik asks akshara about eating out.she agrees and they got to a nearby restaurant and have dinner. they reach home really tired ,naitik does some organising in his laptop and goes to sleep.
railway station
rajshri and vishamabhar reach the station and they ask the taxi driver abt ranwat industries employee quarters and he says he know the plave verywell.rajshri and vishambhar reach naksha's house .they ring the doorbell and akshara comes and opens the door.she is surprised to see them here. she hugs rajshri and takes ashirwaad from vishambhar.visambhar asks abt naitik and akshara says he is not up yet and she was abt to call him.rajshri and vishambhar also goes with her to naksha bedrrom.naitik is sleeping with hi face covered with the blanket.
akshara keeps the tea on the table and goes near his bed and calls naitikji.naitik holds he hand and pulls her onto him.akshara falls on him😊😳😛 .rajshri's and vishambhar's xpressions r priceless.😆
naitik cutely asks akshara for a kiss she says maa🤗⭐️.naitik says maa toh ghar pe hi he na.tum mujhe roz kiss dete hue na par ab kya hua. akshara says naitikji maa bauji and points to their direction its then that naitik notices them he is embarassed 😳😳😳.he immediately gets up .vishambhar and rajshri just smiles and they look at akshara who is looking down😳😳

so thats all about part3 guys .i think no one is liking my ff. i got less feedback.😕
sorry for the mistakes🥱
Edited by nasco - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Aww
That's cute
I love the last bit about Rajshri and Vishambhar
I can so imagine Naitik doing something like that
I love it
Keep it going...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

Aww<br>That's cute<br>I love the last bit about Rajshri and Vishambhar<br>I can so imagine Naitik doing something like that<br>I love it<br>Keep it going...<br>

Just love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its veryyy veryy nice......pls dnt inlude any complications in their life...coz a sweet simple love story is absolutely no harm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww cho sweet...it was awesome blossom...cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys!! if im gonna go at this pace ill run out of ideas in no time.pm me ur ideas.
ranawat industries
naitik is sitting in his cabin designing the portal .mr balraaj comes in he asks naitik whether he has any new ideas for the portal. naitik says that he is almost done with it. balaarj says that then we will open it up as soon as possible.naitik says that he doesn't agree with it. he says that it should be released only after wide advertising .this portal is ainly centered on the youth and youth really like to have a surprise element in everything they do. balraaj asks naitik abt the kind of advertising he prefers.naitik says that there should be seminars and programmes conducted in management colleges.balraaj says ok as u wish.

naksha house
akshara vishambhar and rajshri r in the hall. rajshri asks akshara if she feels lonely here.rakshri says that she is proud of akshara as she has learned to take care of a house properly. she is also doing her responsibilities well. they hug .just then vishambhar's phone rings and its shaurya on the other hand. he seems tensed and says that some problem has cropped up and he asks vishambhar to come home as soon as posible .vishamabhar says he'll come and cuts the phone. vishambhar tels rajshri and akshara abt this and they immediately pack their bags and leave. akshara and rajshri is sad and akshara cries.
ranwat industries
naitik finishes his work and goes to see balraaj.balraaj says that if he is finsihed with his work he can give.he asks naitik about akshara's qualifications.naitik replies that she has finished 2nd year ba .balraaj says ok and asks naitik whether she is continuin her studies. naitik says that her results r not out yet and then hel' try for her admission. balraaj says that his friend is the head of xaviers college .and he can try for her admision there. naitik is happy and goes home
naksha house
naitik rings the doorbell and it take ssome time b4 akshara opend the door . naitik looks at her and her eyes r watery. he aks her kya hua?? and she hugs him and cries. she says that maa bauji left coz of some problem in the office and dadu wanted help. she cries again and naitik consoles her and says im here for u na.don't worry and akshara smiles.
akshara is looking at the moon and then she feels a tingle and a hand comes up from behind and hugs her its naitik.naitik asks her what she was thinking. she says that she feels lonely when he is not here.naitik asks whethershe misess him and akshara says yes. naitik tells akshara that she can continue her studies and akshar gets happy but is tensed about her marks.naitik asks her to relax and lifts akshara he carries her to the bed.he puts her on the bed and gives a cute kiss on her cheek.they both lie down on the bed.naitik hugs akshara and says that he is hugging her tight so that she desn't feel lonely.she smiles and sleeps peacefully.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yes it was very shweet
but plz more detailing in Naksh scenes plzzz
Last scene is out of d world nd is very cute too

Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dis was for d second part
OMg u r soo fast
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Posted: 16 years ago
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4th update: Gr8 update .
Wow Aklshara can continue her studies good but here she will not be getting any companion like Varsha
Naitik is shoooo shweet holding akshi tightly so dat she doesnt feels lonely . Natik ji ke hote ho how can someone be sad
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanayaa

Yes it was very shweet
but plz more detailing in Naksh scenes plzzz
Last scene is out of d world nd is very cute too

Thanks for d pm


wll give more detailing to naksha scenes from the next update😊

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