Sidushka SS : Humsafars (Chapter 5 Pg 11)

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Mahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: mayasingh
Beautiful

Thankyou!!!😳

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Lavanya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..
Thankyou SO MUCH Lavy!
It's the first time someone detailed out to this extent!
You're a writer indeed, in blood!😃

Results are always like these. Even we'd be freaking out soon! Just a month to go 😆😆
Refresh button 😆

I wanted Sid to be goal oriented but not overly. In a positive manner. It's I don't know what... So manly and cool!😳
The sharing of feelings part was my favourite too. I think everyone loved it. Feeelllsss! <3

Haha yeah. Similar interests are boring so bring on the contrast!😉
Thumbs up was cute, agreed.

I love jhoola too! <3
Brings back such warm feelings of a country home!

My intention is exactly that - capture small moments cause they matter more!
Glad your keen eye for detail captured all of them correctly and I'm truly satisfied that I'm moving in the right direction!

AWWW, it's okay! Mothers are always such, all for our good. School started so mom's busy now in teaching and I'm free hahahaha!😆

Update coming up soon, surely!😳

Thanks again Lavy.
You just made me reaffirm my faith in this story.❤️
And you too, update soon! :P

I love you 🤗
Really appreciate your comment

Muahhh.

Awww, I love you too! 😳

I'll try updating the next chapter of my story over the weekend. But it all depends on Mataji's mood 😆

This story of yours is very crisp, well-paced and laced with delicate moments of young blossoming teenage love. I'm sure everyone who reads this will enjoy it!

I still have to tell you about my favorite moments from 'Saawan'. I'm halfway through it and will drop my reply there as soon as I finish reading it. That is another finely written story with some absolutely adorable moments 😳

With Love

-Lavy

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Mahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Sure Lavy! No hurry!

Thanks a lot!😳

Yeah ik. It's difficult managing time. Looking forward to your update.

Saawan is good but I want this one to be better! Glad you're reading it :)

Would like to know your views on Saawan soon <3

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1082575

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Sorry, I didn't comment before for some reason I didn't come across this😕

Read both the parts right away.

Even I'm writing a 11th and 12th wala setting story

Okay now coming to your story😃

Firstly, Sidhant is hurting my feelings, 93.7% is a lot mujhe na sirf 82% mila😆

I just love how she came to meet him, that was so sweet

Love how the story sets really really cute <3

Cant Wait for the next part.

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Padmajaan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Oh my Mahi, my talented chulbuli Mahi. I can see you all through your story, the impishness, the positivity, the sheer simplicity, totally relatable moments such as the KK-Anushka scene, the much cherished Sinha household, Purva's room, Sid's room, the result day, everything.

Prabhakar opened the door, KK sent her there. So beautiful.

And all along I could visualize our young anushka-young siddhant pair and with siddhant curiously I could even superimpose with Namit. Somehow I am unable to superimpose the young Anushka with Palak!

I loved it.

True when I read what you write I have a grin on the face and a smile in my fluttering heart.

Will wait for the next chapter.

Thanks Mahi meri jaan.❤️

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Aayushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Res! Not first this time I guess 😆

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Mahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: A.Green
Res! Not first this time I guess 😆

I was waiting for you eagerly 😆

Glad you're here <3

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Aayushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..

I was waiting for you eagerly 😆
Glad you're here <3

Haha I was out whole day! I saw your update but I realized I wasn't first! It broke my heart but then I read it and it broke my heart more coz Siddhant didn't get 94%. 😭

P.S. Even I wasn't happy getting 92% 😆 I feel for Siddhant! I'll comment by night 😃

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Mahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Padmajaan
Oh my Mahi, my talented chulbuli Mahi. I can see you all through your story, the impishness, the positivity, the sheer simplicity, totally relatable moments such as the KK-Anushka scene, the much cherished Sinha household, Purva's room, Sid's room, the result day, everything.
Prabhakar opened the door, KK sent her there. So beautiful.

And all along I could visualize our young anushka-young siddhant pair and with siddhant curiously I could even superimpose with Namit. Somehow I am unable to superimpose the young Anushka with Palak!

I loved it.

True when I read what you write I have a grin on the face and a smile in my fluttering heart.

Will wait for the next chapter.

Thanks Mahi meri jaan.❤️

Padma 🤗

I simple love your comments!

I'm the luckiest writer on earth to get such wonderful readers!

Ooh. I think I'll have to work harder on Anushka then. Actually there's a change in character scheduled for her so maybe you'll relate to it later. Fingers crossed 😆

Thankyouuu 🤗

Geezzz! Made my day!😳

I love small moments in life and I see it's being loved too! Super happy!😃

Pleasure's all mine!😳

Thanks again Padma ❤️

Muahhh.

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Padmajaan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..

Padma 🤗

I simple love your comments!
I'm the luckiest writer on earth to get such wonderful readers!

Ooh. I think I'll have to work harder on Anushka then. Actually there's a change in character scheduled for her so maybe you'll relate to it later. Fingers crossed 😆

Thankyouuu 🤗
Geezzz! Made my day!😳

I love small moments in life and I see it's being loved too! Super happy!😃
Pleasure's all mine!😳

Thanks again Padma ❤️
Muahhh.

Bolded parts. It has nothing to do with you mahi my dear. You are awesome and have brought out your characters so perfectly.

The problem lies in me because it is so relatable that I am projecting the characters we know through the serial unknowingly and if I had this problem it's because in real life I mean in the real serial I feel that the merger from young sid to the older one is seamless mainly because of how well Siddhant's character has been defined and most of the credit definitely goes to Namit Khanna for bringing the character to life and to the younger Siddhant, both excellent actors whereas I don't feel this seamlessness with Anushka's character. The young Anushka is just so adorable, the older one seems like another person altogether. Is it because role not defined as well as Siddhant's or is it because Palak is not being able to bring out that impishness, that simplicity, the earnestness and that cute puppy look of the younger one.

So you see the problem is in me not in your writing.

You are doing perfect.

PLEASE DON'T CHANGE ANYTHING AT ALL Mahi!