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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello everyone!!

This is my first story i have ever written .So if any mistakes pleasee forgive me. And pleasee let me know should i continue or not .I hope u all will like the story😊.. so here goes the teaser

Warning: It's an emotional story

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They met they fell for each other at first sight.He proposed her she accepted

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All was going well .one day she didn't felt well she visited dr she did all the tests dr had suggested after two days she saw the reports and naina broked up with sameer

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They cried whole night remebering all the moments with each other. finally they got married to each other

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Sameer:I love u naina and I want u to be my soul mate in all my other life's too Naina: i love u too .And I wished the same .One last time they kissed each other and again layed on the hospital beds with their hands interwined tightly.Before closing their eyes they had an eyelock as like speaking through eyes .And then they closed their eyes n their souls left their bodies .Though they died. But their love is alive forever.......

Pleasee let me know your thoughts 🤗

Criticism is allowed

waiting for your comments eagerly

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Intriguing Smiti

Would love to read more from you

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice

Keep giving scenarios

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: munchkinland

Intriguing Smiti

Would love to read more from you

Thankyou di🤗

i had posted this on wattpad too most of them told me to give an happy ending so i have modified the plot and have changed it's ending so di do u want this plot to be continued or the modified one Will love to know ur thoughts😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: mysterious17

Nice

Keep giving scenarios

thankyou 🤗

have modified plot and has changed it's ending into an happy one would love to know which plot do u want to know the modified one or the same one would love to knw your thoughts

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitamaharana

thankyou 🤗

have modified plot and has changed it's ending into an happy one would love to know which plot do u want to know the modified one or the same one would love to knw your thoughts

See I think u should go with what you've in your Mind because after all its your story so you've the right to take it in whatever direction u want to and your efforts will definitely be loved by people

Good luck

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Pla tell the name of the story to search in watt pad.

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