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Rph09

@Rph09

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

I love this song too. I can't imagine Sameer dying yaar 😭 So I'll imagine this os in EK show style 😆 But but again my friend your writing took my heart. My heart wrenched when the dialogue came "tumko sindoor lagane ka haq sirf mera hai". And ignore the colour dear. Rockerz ban jao.

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Fallingasteroid

@Fallingasteroid

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Such an emotional os ...😭😭😭 Naina's dialogue of" ab toh 2 mausam guzar chuki hai " was 😭 You really have a skill of putting across emotions in words👏👏 the part where Naina stood beside the funeral pyre void of emotions... that's what happens when you undergo shock😭 Beautifully penned down...

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Abhijeet Nanda

@becool97

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

After reading this OS i become pretty emotional.😭👏 so i thought of writing a poem for you:

Neela aasman mein koi aisa sitara bhi hai,

jo khud jalta par dusron ko khushi deta hai,

sab dard andar hi andar samet ke rakhta hai,

aankhon mein hasi liye chalta hi jaata hai

uss sitare ko mein dekh raha hoon,

uski garmi mein apni ruh sek raha hoon,

woh bhi hai tanha,

main bhi hoon tanha,

uski aanchal mein apna dard kured raha hoon

uski ankhein bhi hai ojhal meri tarah,

uski seher main bhi hai hulchal,

aur log wahan bhi hai masgull.

unko nahi parwa kya khilta hai.

aur kya marta hai harpal

yahan par bas mein nahi,

aur hazaar bhi aate hain.

muh phulake sar pe haath rakh ke chale jaate hai.

sab thik ho jayega yahi sapna dikhate hain,

hume pyar se niharte nahi humdardi dikhte hain

par ye zakhm hame khud hi sehna hota hai.

apne aansoon ko dil ki zameen pe seench ke,

patthar ka beej bona padta hai.

phirse ek naya ashiyana banana padta hai,

hamare dard ko khushi ki jholi mein piroke.

sajana padta hai

aasman mein ek naya ghar to le lenge.

aur apni hasi se uss seher ko ujaala bhi kar denge.

par dard kisse baantein.

badi lambi hai hamari ye sooni raatein

❤️

Edited by becool97 - 6 years ago

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munchkinland

@munchkinland

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Hash Hash Hash

I am crying

how can you kill Sameer

you know na how much I love him

this was soo emotional for me

Okay and my friend your writing was awesome

this was soo good

Naina's pain reached out to me here

She had their symbol of love to survive

vihaan could not ever see his father

This turmoil for a child is unbearable

And I have seen that

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Chaaru

@chaaru26

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

CONGRATULATIONS ON BECOMING ROCKERZ!!!

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unres

I feel like crying after reading this, your writting did make me feel that pain...

Gosh Naina's pain 😭

Vihaan is her only solace and her light in the dark world...

But Hash you have beautifully written this...

Edited by chaaru26 - 6 years ago

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Vidhimehra

@Vidhimehra

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Very emotional heart wrneching...frankly speakinh i do t like sameer death in any case or may be in any couoles life...cant belive life without saathi ...bt ur choice of song hats off...writing too gud we can relate the scene and song all tovwther bt i thinl.life jitna happy rahe wohi acha hai...dont want to feel this pain and melancoly...amazing writer you are.

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Don't hv words to express what I'm feeling after reading this! And the song lyrics were so perfectly blending with the story.

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Kristy

@Kristy_209

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

@Octo dii >...

Aap ne kya likha hai ... 👏👏

I literally cried 😭😭

The song was just so apt 👏👏

Maine kabhi bhi iss topic par koi os nahi padha tha ... I'm glad You wrote it 😃😃😃

It was Chota packet bada dhamaka in all total 😆😆

Loved it ❤️

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Yudkbh

@Yudkbh

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Mai sach bol raha hoo mai nhi ro raha

Mai nhi ro raha na

😭

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shwta16

@shwta16

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#20

Saathi Re thoda teher ja ... I love this song, Octo. And this song truly complimented your OS. I was literally in tears while reading it. It was so painful to imagine Naina living without Sameer. It was wonderfully written. Hats off to you! And Congratulations for your new rank. 🥳

Edited by shwta16 - 6 years ago

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